The Life Long Love by Steve
When I saw her I knew,
She had to be mine,
Her eyes so blue,
She smelled sweet as wine.
And finally I had her in my heart,
For the first time I was truly glad,
From her I never wanted to part,
I knew being with her never made me sad.
But then, it happened . . .
The sky fell,
The seas overflowed,
Away went her beautiful smell,
And my heart soon slowed.
If me and her were meant to be I don't know . . .
For the feelings are still there,
And when I see her my heart will still drop,
If she left my life I could not bear,
I know my love for her will never stop.
She had to be mine,
Her eyes so blue,
She smelled sweet as wine.
And finally I had her in my heart,
For the first time I was truly glad,
From her I never wanted to part,
I knew being with her never made me sad.
But then, it happened . . .
The sky fell,
The seas overflowed,
Away went her beautiful smell,
And my heart soon slowed.
If me and her were meant to be I don't know . . .
For the feelings are still there,
And when I see her my heart will still drop,
If she left my life I could not bear,
I know my love for her will never stop.
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My Poem is about a girl I have been wanting to be with for years now. I never knew how to tell her my feelings so, I started writing her poems and stuff like that. We did go out . . . and break up. But I know that I do truly love her and I know there must be a reason for me liking her so much for so long. So this is just one of the poems meant for her.
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This was a great poem. It was real deep. Your really talented. Keep on loving her. - Kayte |
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it was pretty kool man. i hope you have the chance to be with her again. good luck - cynthia |
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this poem is very touching, its exactly what i'm going thru now, keep up the good work man - Caleb |
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i really liked the poem it had true emotion and it was very vibrent! - brandy |
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This poem was awesome. I really wish my boyfriend would write something like this for me. - Rebecca |
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Wow. if a guy really wrote this - wow. It's so sweet. And sounds like he's got talent ;) - Angelina |
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This was a very sweet poem coming from a guy u dont see many guys like that out there. - Tanya |
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Ilove the poem,I can think of me and my boyfriend. - Victoria |
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Dud! I love your poem, it's verry beautiful, but a little bit said. Sorry about what happened. - Mariya |
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I really loved that poem I really did! I went through the same things before but now it's over and I still love a guy! This poem that Steve has written I want him to know that I love it! - Vanessa |
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yo this is great took the words rite out of me mouth - arse |
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that was really good i am going thour the same thinmg right now - maggie |
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this was a really good poem it kinda looks like the one my boyfriend wrote me except for he actuallty told me how he felt in person. But great job! - Ashley |
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I loved that poem so much and it reallt shows that guyz do have the same feelings as girls do abut love! im in the same situation as you are right now and itz gutting as! hope it all works out for ya! - chelc |
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Wow. that was a beautiful poem and i know exactly how u feel. crushing aiint it. - Ashley |
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i gotta hand it all to you! i guess you are just talented! im in the same sit. - thomas |
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that was a really good poem she should be very happy - alexandra |
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that was beautiful! - Sarah |
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you took the words right out of my mouth man, seriously i love this poem and as long as you don't care i want to recite it to a girl - Doug |
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it is decribe what happend to me - Mark |
