Nearly Unnoticed by Reese
She is lonely
Even though you can't tell
She is reaching out
For what, she doesn't know
She will continue to sit in silence
And hope that someone may stumble across
Her and all of her emptiness
But they only hope that they do it in time
Otherwise she will have drifted too far
And she may let go
Of whatever grasp of the world she has
As she slowly fades out of the lives of everyone
Nearly unnoticed.
Even though you can't tell
She is reaching out
For what, she doesn't know
She will continue to sit in silence
And hope that someone may stumble across
Her and all of her emptiness
But they only hope that they do it in time
Otherwise she will have drifted too far
And she may let go
Of whatever grasp of the world she has
As she slowly fades out of the lives of everyone
Nearly unnoticed.
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I wrote this during a really low time in my life when I was contemplating suicide. Even though I seemed ok on the outside, I wasn't on the inside - I felt lost and alone.
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it was really good i will gave it 9 jut bc i think it could been longer - lele |
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i loved it and i love knowing that someone feels the same - charity |
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I feel the same way! - alex |
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i loved the poem. It defeintly tells how depression really is. - KAyla |
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# 1 in my Book! - Beth |
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I really like this poem. It really touched me. Thanks for writing this wonderful poem. :) - Claudia |
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i love this poem because it explain me i am fading away and i am glad some knows how i feel - chereka |
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I liked the poem alot because sometimes that's exactly how i feel. - Richelle |
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It is a short but apt poem. I can't describe how much it touched me. It reminds me so much of a girl I know. - Kathy |
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wow i really love your poem!it awsome keep writing. - laura |
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i was touched to read a poem so true, and how moving it was. on a sad note my friend grant killed himself and know one knew he felt that way. your poem makes people realize you have to look deeper than the surface. very wwll done - karla |
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Is anyone ever really noticed, or are we passed by like a small piece of trash in a gutter? Great poem. - Beth |
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THANK YOU for writing this. it's how a lot of us feel. I am going through so much right now and it's exactly how I feel. its beautiful. keep writing from the heart hun. - Karen |
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Wow this poem is exactly IT - Fiona |
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I really liked your poem. I know how you feel. Last Christmas (2004) I took a drug overdose. I felt that was the only way out. I'll never do it again. God helped me see the light and now I am finally happy. Keep your head up and remember there are people that do love you. - robyn |
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You wrote the words & thoughts in my mind! down too the exact letter! That is breath taking. And shocking! TY! Beth - Beth |
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I really liked this poem cuz i can relate to it. i felt as if i was the girl it spoke of. - Shayla |
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this poem touched me because it is so real that is how so many people feel. it related to me. - Chandler |
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Wow i really love your poem it touched me because sometimes i feel like that. Very good poem - Erica |
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I Voted for this poem becausse it touched me because there are a lot more people out there who feel like that someone like me so im telling you now why i voted for this poem because i dont feel like feeling like this for ever always each and every second of the day im trying not to keep it piled inside me like the person in this poem. - Scarlett |
