My Best Friend by Athena
Once was here
now is gone
I will always
love forever
the laughs
the tears
the smiles
without her
my life has no direction
no ups nor downs
no smiles or frowns
I miss her
I cry
I see her
I lie
what ever went wrong
I can mend
I will always
love forever
my very best friend
now is gone
I will always
love forever
the laughs
the tears
the smiles
without her
my life has no direction
no ups nor downs
no smiles or frowns
I miss her
I cry
I see her
I lie
what ever went wrong
I can mend
I will always
love forever
my very best friend
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When you lose what is most precious, when you don't know what to do, when you don't know what to say - but you still know how you feel.
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i loved it - katheryn |
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this poem really made me think how i would feel if i lost my best friend - sommer |
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I just lost my best friend, we were best friends for 8 years and he called me 1 day and said that he didn't want to be friends anymore. This poem describes me and how I feel. thank you so much for writting it. - Kayla |
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nice simple and sweet - Vincent |
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this is the coolist ive read so far! - rae |
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This poem touched me so much, it really says alot. I am going through the same with my best friend and this poem says exactly how I feel. It is the best poem I have read in a very long time. I just want to thank the author for putting into words the feelings that are hard for me to express. Thank You! - Sandra |
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this poem really touched me, i lost my best fried of 23yrs to a tragic suicide,2 yrs ago and i still havent gotten over it it. your poem is really touching . lisa - lisa |
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i really like your poem. once i had a best friend now is gone. - Cynthia |
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i loved this poem it made me think of when im gonna move and loose my best friend dakota - victoria |
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i tink dis poem is really deep, i did everything with my best mate but lately it seems shed rather hang around with a different girl. and feels like im losing her xx - simi 2oo6 |
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very very good - kilik |
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I realy like your poem. Itwent straight in to my heart, I just lost my best friend a week ago in a car accident. I miss her alot. Your poem goes with me today and always. Thank you for this nice poem. - delia |
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i love this poem i gave this (bestfriend) poem to my bestfriend!bonnie barros! but now she treat me bad for the first time!but she hurt my feelings !but i will always love her no matter what! - dania |
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This poem Rules! I'm only 14, but I know exactly what it feels like to have this happen. I can relate to it completely - Candy |
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THATS REALY GREAT ESPACIALLY FOR ME. - shahrukh |
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I need to commend you,for loving your friend in words from the heart. 4 years ago,i got a phone call at 230 in the morning,my BEST friend had died suddenly/she was a single mom of a 9 year old little girl,but the only friend who loved me no matter what. Everyday I miss her,I crave her,. im sure you know . I need to tell you she wrote poetry. when her sister and I were going through her business papers,I found a poem she wrote in her journal,about Me,her best friend. As I read your beautiful poem, you remind me of her,Her name is Karla Merrick,she was 31 and would have loved your poem. - michele |
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oh that was a very touching poem. because i remember my best friend back home, and i do miss her so much. - Natalie |
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Yes. you touched my heart. I lost my best friend Larri last year and my very dear friend in america 3 years ago by a drunk driver the pain and heart ache will never leave. Your poem says it all. Thank you - Nicci |
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This is MY LIFE. I've had the same "BEST FRIEND" for 10 yrs. I gave her a $70 "Best Friend" neclace for x-mas of "05". In January we had a non- reasonable canflict. now she's gone forever. and I regret not having her in my life. she was more than a "BEST FRIEND". she was a sister I wish I had. "I STILL LOVE HER WITH ALL MY HEART AND TIL THIS DAY SHE WILL ALWAYS BE IN MY HEART!" - Chel-C |
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i really loved this poem-i actually used it in english class. but i love it b/c im going through some rough times with my best friend and i just really connected with it. i feel like this poem really applied to me. i got my attention and i plan on sending to my best friend in hopes it will open her eyes and maybe make her realize what im going through. - tasha |
