Saying Good-bye by Sweetie177
Sitting here thinking about you,
I here you call my name,
Laura, Laura, Laura
As I turn to see who's calling me
I see no one, only hear your voice.
I glance across the room,
To see if anyone else hears it too.
But no one seems to notice the look on my face.
I miss you so much,
I keep telling you,
But you don't seem to hear me.
Still you're calling out my name, only louder,
As the tears rolled down my face,
I glance around the room,
And see you amongst my family, and friends
The look upon your face says you're peaceful now.
I realized it was time to let you go.
Although I will always love and miss you.
I turn my head to see if anyone notices you.
Then I turn back, and you're gone.
I hear you, so very gently say,
"I love you", "Good- Bye!"
"Bye", I said . . .
I here you call my name,
Laura, Laura, Laura
As I turn to see who's calling me
I see no one, only hear your voice.
I glance across the room,
To see if anyone else hears it too.
But no one seems to notice the look on my face.
I miss you so much,
I keep telling you,
But you don't seem to hear me.
Still you're calling out my name, only louder,
As the tears rolled down my face,
I glance around the room,
And see you amongst my family, and friends
The look upon your face says you're peaceful now.
I realized it was time to let you go.
Although I will always love and miss you.
I turn my head to see if anyone notices you.
Then I turn back, and you're gone.
I hear you, so very gently say,
"I love you", "Good- Bye!"
"Bye", I said . . .
My poem is about someone I loved very much and lost in a car wreck. Saying good- bye to someone can be the hardest thing to do. A loved ones death is the hardest to cope with, especially a boyfriend. I know that he is in a much better place now.
Dedicated to Larry
Dedicated to Larry
| i love this poem. my Brother-in-law just past away in Iraq and it just seems like a good poem for him. thank you so much. ~Robin~ - Robin | |
| i lost my cousin last yr he was more like my brother!the pain is getting worse i miss himso much our lives are not the same anymore ur poem touched my heart - natasha | |
| your poem is very touching - Doniqua | |
| I lost my 16 yr old sister in a dui related car accident Dec. 28,2005. I'm just reading through poems and this touched me. Something similar experience. - lilsweetangel | |
| Amazing. I lost my Grandpa almost a year from now and he is my favourite Grandpa too. I'm putting this poem on my new site I made today, it touched me. - Jessie | |
| THIS POEM TOUCHED MY HEART. I RECENTLY LOST MY FATHER ON DEC. 31, 2005. I'VE EXPERIENCED WHAT THIS POEM IS SAYING AS I READ IT TEARS CAME TO MY EYES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK - MARIA | |
| thats a good poem, i lost a friend to a car crash about 2 years ago. now today i haveing to say good bye to my dear grandmother its so hard. - amie | |
| This poem really touched my heart! Very good poem! - Michelle | |
| this poem touched my heart so much that i started to cry thats how good it is this should be poem of the mounth in may - janea | |
| Hi. Your poem brought me to tears. I also lost a boyfriend to death. Reading your poem ensures me I'm not alone and it's ok for me to let go in time. Your poem was so awesome - Mary | |
| aww that is soo cute i miss my poppy and i want him back - guiseppina | |
| i just lost a loved one and i know how hard it is to say good bye, very well writen poem i love it - andrew | |
| this is a lovley poem,i lost my grandma in june o4 and i miss her so much. reading this made me cry it was so nice,keep up the good work. excellent! - gemma | |
| My husband passed away 9 months, and I have struggling to find just the right words to help me thru this grieving. This poem brought instant tears. Your words about "family" hit me the most. I have 5 kids, and my husband, John is missing from all our holidays & b'days and our 17th anniversary. I feel him near me at times, I know he's watching after us, but I miss him so much. Thank You for your beautiful poem. God Bless You. Debbie - Debbie | |
| i really like this poem it realy touched and i like the way it made me feel whaen i read this poem so thats why i vote for this poem. love always julie palma - julie | |
| well i liked this poem because it also happend to me the same way it says on this poem that i just read. - krystal | |
| This is a very beautiful and loving poems. It really hits the heart. - Traci | |
| Hiya Laura. i just want to say ur poem touch my heart in a special way. my friend just lost her loved one and i think she'll be happy to read this when i send it to her. this is a great poem u really showed how hard it is to say goodbye but look on the bright side that there in a better place then where we are now. good work! - Bradley | |
| it is a nice poem i lost my granpa and grandma with in two days of each other and my mom has cancer thanks a lot you helped me git over so of the pain - phillip | |
| I like this poem it really toucjed my heart because it makes me remember my friend that past away. - KARINA |
