Gone Astray? by Mastakate
He told me that he loved me so
I believed him, letting my feelings grow.
Time to time his heart did move
the dagger in my heart left a groove.
One day he moved away
I made myself think it would be okay
Sometimes I ponder
if his loving eyes will wander
With all the fishies in the sea
Why would he want to be with me?
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This poem was written about my strong feelings for my boyfriend and how his actions affect me. It was at a time when I was feeling sad and had low self- esteem so that I couldn't see how he could still be in love with me. It made me wonder if he was being faithful because we had broken up in the past because his loving eyes, and lips, did go astray.


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bubble I really love it, ive been feeling like that soo much with my g/f, and I almost let it tear us apart more than once. This is a great poem :D - Justin
bubble I really loved this poem. I know exactly how you feel! Keep writing! - Ashley
bubble this poem touched my heart i really like it cause this same thing happen to me and that guy nows who he is. - carme
bubble This is a really good poem. - Becky
bubble I think the poem is sad & a very good one. I had a problem like that once. I know how that feels. - Chris
bubble I no how it feel like! - Bebe
bubble I think that this poem is so sweet and realistic. - Kelly
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