Silence, Emptiness, And Confusion by Bek
Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed
There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray
Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread
Confusion feeds like a savage inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different and disdained.
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed
There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray
Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread
Confusion feeds like a savage inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different and disdained.
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This poem is about the deepening feelings of depression that consume a young woman.
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Guys feel like this too. it was beautiful - Mark |
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LOVE the poem. thank you. would like to read more of your poems more power to you. - neri |
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i love the poem. same feeling for now. hope you dont mind if i post it on my blog. i will credit for sure. - kape |
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this poem is such a great write as well as read - Jennifer |
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That poem is amazing. it relates to so many people. it also gives some of the people that ar elike us a booste of confidence and shows us we are nto alone - Kayce |
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Bek, your poem has a real honesty about it, I love the first line, I can almost imagine it as the lyric by some folky femme who has the courage to see things as they really are, or as they really seem. You have a talent, a power so beautiful. "Bek you can express in words the reality many live in!" God Bless Amy - Amy |
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This Poem Is what many young teen girls relate to. When Im feeling depressed zI need a good poem to read. It lets me Know Im not the only one out there with those problems. I think this poem is Awsome and touches my heart. - Lilu |
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I love this poem it's so me. - Elizabeth |
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amazing. so deep. perfectly written. on the outside what you wrote is not like me. but it is what is truly inside of me and i despair. - Meghan |
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I could realte to the poet in so many ways, and when reading it felt a stong connection. - Rae |
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i thought this poem was awesome. it really touched me because i felt the same way not too long ago - biggo |
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hey i like this poe alot you must have putted in alot of efforts in order to come up with such a great poem i should not try to be someone else though as i read your poem it reminded me of something i can't imafine what well bye! - xe |
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Everyone who releates to this poem knows why it's so real. - Kate |
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Its got good words in it and makes you think. I love it. - marthyn |
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Your poem was totally intense! You had me down too a tee! Keep up the awesome work! - Tami |
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i really understand this being a teenager my self, and a girl, it is almost just like me. - katie |
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I think this is one of the greastest feeling poems ever written. i love it - Crystal |
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Wow! Your poem is the best i have ever read, its how i truly feel, i just wanted to thank you for wrighting this witch was probaly hard. - Nikki |
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Wow! that is a perfect example of how i feel every second, minute, hour, every single day of my life. I write poetry as well to ease the pain, but it still remains and overpowers me. How do you do it? How do you fight the urge of suicide? Maybe one day i will find out. but i hope that day comes real soon. - Alucia |
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this poemi have a great love for, it lightly skimms the top on the way i feel. - EmiLy |
