Wet With You by Nytelovr
Wet with you
showering
with you
nothing
between us
but bubbles
vanishing
as silently
as we touch
in wetness
together
showering
with you
nothing
between us
but bubbles
vanishing
as silently
as we touch
in wetness
together
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A drop of water sometimes lights the most intense fires. Intimacy is more than nakedness, and often less than words.
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i love this it reminds me of my bf! - kassie |
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dam taht is good poems tahts hot too - dana |
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Lovely , simplistic , divine imagery , an emotion and a moment well captured in the bubble of verse - Barbara |
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SHORT AND SWEET JUST THE WAY I LIKE IT. IT LEAVES TO THE IMAGINATION A WILD ADVENTURE! - DELILAH |
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Nytelovr, This poem is great because it focuses on one moment in time, and that time seems suspended, leaving you to only imagine the before and after. It is a snapshot of a memory, one unforgetable time after a very memorable event. Are you a professional writer? I hope you have many more to be read. - Lou Ann |
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With so few words. an exquisite moment was exemplified. - paul |
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this poem would be awesome to recieve even form a guy its short sweet in sexy - ashley |
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inspiring - Willow |
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Delicious! - Alan |
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while searching for a particular poem by browning, i came across this one, and it brought back fond memories. thanx! - emerson |
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I like this poem alot it is short but you know wat you are saying - Errica |
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a real feeling, with very simpel words explaned - wen |
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I think this poem was great. Short and sweet. - Metallica |
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this was a short, but sweet poem,many kudos to the author,and keep up the work! - Big |
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So well written and so simple and expressive! - starlet |
