The Viking by Shannon
A powerful radiance is felt instantly.
Flames of passion dance in his eyes.
He makes my heart ache with desire.
His words are music to my soul
That fill me with love and longing.
His mind holds the wisdom of the ancients.
His heart holds compassion and love.
His lips hold a promise of sensual delights.
His arms provide security and warmth.
He is as humble as a beggar on the street,
Yet as noble as a Viking chief.
There is a sense of mystery about him;
But his life, he has opened for me to see.
He is truly a beautiful and amazing man;
He is the best of all my dreams.
I will love him throughout eternity.
With not part, but with all that is me.
Flames of passion dance in his eyes.
He makes my heart ache with desire.
His words are music to my soul
That fill me with love and longing.
His mind holds the wisdom of the ancients.
His heart holds compassion and love.
His lips hold a promise of sensual delights.
His arms provide security and warmth.
He is as humble as a beggar on the street,
Yet as noble as a Viking chief.
There is a sense of mystery about him;
But his life, he has opened for me to see.
He is truly a beautiful and amazing man;
He is the best of all my dreams.
I will love him throughout eternity.
With not part, but with all that is me.
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This was written to a man with whom I fell deeply in love. We met and became friends; then during a very disturbing event, discovered that our feelings were much more complex. Timidly, we explored them, and opened the gates to a love filled with splendor.
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I loved this poem. I love the mystery and the way it made me feel. I am Scandanavian. I have the blood in me. Sounds strange but hey feelings are each to thier own. - Suzanne |
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Excellent poem. It stirs my heart to read the words of true love. - Andrew |
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this is my favorite poem on the site, it totally describes how i feel about my lover, and i call him "my viking". (I think it turns him on when i call him that) ; ) - kitty |
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i absolutely love this poem. It totally describes how i feel about my lover. When i read this poem, it reminded me so much of him, i sent it to him. when we are being playful, i always call him my red haired viking. - kitty |
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This so perfectly describes the way I feel for a very special man in my life right now. It really moved me directly to him and his spirit. - Christi |
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VERY GOOD! You truly expressed your feelings. A++++ - Rummie |
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This poem was very inspiring.Thanks for putting it on the internet. - abby |
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this poem is very much similar to how i feel about a friend that i have recently become very close with. we are so very close to becoming totally as one, but have held back. there are others in our lives that would be hurt by this occurence, though we have already been hurt by these same ones. how i wish it were only we two in the relationship, there would be no holding back. thank you for such an expressive poem. - kitty |
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this poem i found after spending the night with my lover, and he had gone to work for the day. it describes him exactly, and my feelings for him. - kitty |
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I really like this poem - Linda |
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That poem reminds me of the man that I have fallen in love with. It sounds as if it were written about him. - kellie |
