Gone So Soon by Damian
You took chances
Once too many times.
As a child you thought -
"Oh no, never me."
Life is a gift,
Given and taken at some
Unknown time.
Your time came too soon -
Your life was over in a flash.
The fun you shared,
The joy you brought,
All just a memory -
Behind us.
Once too many times.
As a child you thought -
"Oh no, never me."
Life is a gift,
Given and taken at some
Unknown time.
Your time came too soon -
Your life was over in a flash.
The fun you shared,
The joy you brought,
All just a memory -
Behind us.
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This is a poem in memory of Nikki who was killed in a car accident on 4/24/99. She was a good friend of mine and I want her memory to live on. The car accident was preventable, but the driver was going about 70 mph on Suicide Hill.
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This poem is so beautiful, it reminds me of my sweet 17 year old grandson who passed away Jan. 24,2005. We miss him, he was my life, - Idar |
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It will be a year ago April 13th that I lost a very good friend. He was 21. He died in a car accident. He had no chance of survival, he died on impact. He was the person that I could count on to keep my secrets and he always told me that he would take them to the grave. I just never thought that it would be as soon as it was. In memory of Travis Mayse I love ya! - Nena |
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That is a grat pome I love it thanke. - Tiffany |
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this poem is so touching man when i read it all i think about is my cousin ncarl mckenzie 3 keep on writing because you r going to go some where - olivia |
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this poems brings me to life its really good (my little sister had died on easter of 2002 in a car wreck and it put me to shame alot im still crying and praying every night that god will be with her and i know it is hard on my mom because that was her daughter and if i loved my sister more than anything i know my mom had to love her with all her heart and now my mom is doing rong things so im living with my grand parents well who ever reads this please pray for me. - devin |
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nice poem - christie |
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I had a friend who wrecked his car like 5 years ago. This poem is oh so true. He never thought being young would get him in that much trouble - Cassy |
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Thankyou, a friend of mine died recently and he was only 15. It really helped me look at the good times we had. - Robyn |
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This poem is amazing! I like this because I lost the love of my life and my best friend on 10/30/05! JOSH I LOVE YOU BABY! I also lost 3 other guys along with him in that car accident, they had stolen a car and the driver ran them into two trees and left them there to die. He is still alive and jus knowing this makes me sooo angry. But I think everyone should read this poem and think about the choices that they make! Josh. even though I can't touch you or you're not here for me to see you're NEVER truly gone. You're always in my heart! I love you soooo much! - tiara |
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omg i love this poem, its so. i dont know the word for it but it sounds like it came from the heart i love it! your a good poetry writter! - barbara |
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I have recently lost a really close friend in the last week, she was 18 and died in a car accident and this poem just summed up how i feel about her going. far too soon. well done for putting something so hard and personal into such perfect words. - laura |
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I thought it was awesome. it reminds me of my friend Matt, who passed away like two days ago. so ya. good job. candice - candice |
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your poem really touched me. This past Tuesday my friend died. he was only 16 years old and a sar football player at my local highschool. No one wanted to huirt my friend Dazmanbut someone did. They shot him in the back and killed him. he had so much to live for. i just want everyone to know that i love and miss him so much. and his memories will stay with me and my school family forever! I LOVE YOU DAZMAN! R. I. P BABY! - Kristian |
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I loved your poem. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work - Amy |
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there is no rating for this poem i just recently lost my bestfriend i've known him for almost 12 years i now realize how it is to lose such an important person he was shot twice in his heart and i always had a crush on him and now that hes gone i can't tell him but thank u for helping me realize how important he was. thank you - Kimberly |
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i love it because my boy friend died he was hit by a semi thaks it helped alot - olivia |
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i liked your poem it is very nice. thank you for a nice poem - monique |
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this poem was grate because i lost some one last saturday he was olny 20 mounths old ok that one was grate can you send mw some more please so ican read them to my son please he was the one that die last saturday i still talkj to him he is still in my heart ok please send me some more like that one please his name was jordan he was my little man ok - katherine |
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THANK YOU FOR THOSE WORDS MY BROTHER WAS KILLED IN CAR CRASH 12JAN 2005 AGE 41 YEARS HE TO THOUGHT HE WAS INVINSABLE THINGS HAPPEN TO OTHER PEOPLE NOT HIM - Ruth |
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I lost my brother Christmas night 2003. He was only 20 years old. He was to young! Your poem makes me feel that im not alone. Thanks! - Justine |
