Life's Choices by Rose
Life is full of choices
Make sure you pick the right one
Don't listen to the voices
Hear only yours and you have won
Many people will tell you
You need to change your looks
Don't take to heart their view
Fabulous bods are found only in books
There is only one voice
That you should listen to
It will help make the right choice
That is perfect just for you
Your looks are your own
Someone will always love you
You will never be alone
Look in the mirror and you'll see who
Make sure you pick the right one
Don't listen to the voices
Hear only yours and you have won
Many people will tell you
You need to change your looks
Don't take to heart their view
Fabulous bods are found only in books
There is only one voice
That you should listen to
It will help make the right choice
That is perfect just for you
Your looks are your own
Someone will always love you
You will never be alone
Look in the mirror and you'll see who
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This poem is what I have learned through many years of not having friends and believing it was due to the way I looked. I have learned that looks are not everything in life.
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it really touched me but i will like to know if this poem is famous. and if a language arts teacher would know about this poem before you told her - esteban |
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I loved this poem. Even though alot of people who know me may not believe that i can relate to this i surely can. Even though people don't make fun of me for my looks, in fact they praise my looks, i still feel like i'm not good enough in everyone's eyes. This poem helped me realize that my looks should be acceptable only in my eye's, that's the only oppinion that matters. Great poem! - Jenifer |
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i think it was really good coz it is true and alot of people feel the same way. i think that if it had a more steady beat it would be perfect. but i still reacon you did a good job good job - Ingrid |
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I Really liked this poem because eerything in it is true. I always thoght that people didn't like me because I ws ugly but thatsnot even how it is. Anyway I reallyliked this poem. Keep Writing! - Courtney |
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Rose tells what happens to so many people and how the strenth to BE someone comes from within. I admire you, Rose! And see your poem as a work of art. You are beautiful - Dr. Diana L. |
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This is a terrifik poem! I don't feel this way, but I do not agree with how society pressures young people to look certain ways: what ever happened to originality? Are they trying to make us into clones? - J |
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Your poem is awesome! Excellent job :-) Thanks so much for the self-esteem and advice you expressed/gave to me through your poetry. - Bridget |
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that poem was great, keep it up - Charlotte |
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that was such a lovely poem!keep it up.waiting to read more of your poems.. - aysha |
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i THINK THAT THIS POEM IS SO TRUE BECAUSE THAT'S EXACTLY HOW I FEEL. I ALSO THINK THAT IS POEM IS SWEET AND THAT IT DESCRIBES ALOT OF PEOPLE IN THIS LIFE TIME. - Tysemba |
