When Our Bodies Come To Meet by Marie Paradise
When I see you I can feel you
In my soul - my heart takes flight.
I can hardly wait to taste you
In the darkness of the night.
I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.
When our bodies come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
In my soul - my heart takes flight.
I can hardly wait to taste you
In the darkness of the night.
I feel your breath so hot and sweet
Circling in my soul.
When our bodies come to meet
It's then that I feel whole.
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Rating: A |
When taking a break from my computer at work, I thought about my fiancée and this little poem came rushing out of my pencil.
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This poem is wonderful. - Melissa |
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taht hot the poems sem like macking love every nite good job - dana |
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All i can say is WOWZERS! Its short and i love it. I am a poet too but i caould never write like you! Hey that rhymes! Keep it Up! - heather |
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The poem is really touching. It reminds me of my lover whao we used to work together. Keep on the brilliant work. - Mtoni |
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that mad me cry soo much. - michelle |
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excellant keep up the good work and don't stop writing loving poems like this as it is so romantic and heart warming. it made me think about what i want to say to my boyfriend for a long time and thank you ever so much. reading your poem and listen to love song s made me think of the words to say to him - claire |
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YOUR POEM IS SO GOOD! I LIKE IT VERY MUCH - Ethel |
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please give up the day job. im just in a new relationship and that was fantastic. - dave |
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your poem expresses the way i feel for my boyfriend, thank you - sarah |
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I love this poem so much. It reminds me of the way I feel for my girlfriend - Elrick |
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i loved your poem it was really nice - Amanda |
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I love this poem. It is just wonderful! - Alexandra |
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I´m speechless! Just love that poem. Amazing. - Tambet |
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When trying to find the words to express myself to my love.this poem said exactly what was i my heart. I am not good with words but his poem gave me a chance to express what I feel in heart. Thank -you ever so much. - sissa |
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i really liked your poem - sharon |
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brilliant! - fred |
