Why Am I Crying? by Caria Canalez
The grass is billowing by the steed.
The night is so very clear.
all I really, really need.
is to know that you are there.
The moon is shining brilliantly white.
the stars are twinkling everywhere.
so why am I crying on this beautiful night?
I am crying because you are not there.
The night is so very clear.
all I really, really need.
is to know that you are there.
The moon is shining brilliantly white.
the stars are twinkling everywhere.
so why am I crying on this beautiful night?
I am crying because you are not there.
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I wrote this after my boyfriend and I broke up after dating for more than a year. I just kept crying over how it ended so I wrote this one day and gave it to one of my friends who asked why I was crying. It went around the school, and finally my ex- boyfriend got it and he ended up asking me back. He gave it back to me and I decided to submit it so people know that you can change the course of fate with a few words.
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I LOVE IT! IT'S SHORY BUT TO THE POINT! KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING! AWESOME STORY BEHIND IT TOO! - Love |
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loved it sooooooooooo much! - laporsha |
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this poem made me fell like i did when my boyfriend was gome - toni |
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i nearly cried when read his poem. - patrick |
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I LOVED THIS POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME I LOVED IT THIS IS A REALLY GREAT POEM. - SABRINA |
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i was just crying then i decided to read poems then came across yours the thoughts i was feeling i had no reason why i was crying until i read this poem. its good that you wrote a poem that people can relte to thank you now i realize that i have strong fellings for this person - tiarra |
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That is a really heart felt peom if you write like that you beter make "A's" in your english class - Ashia |
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its cool - Your |
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i have felt the same way before because my boyfriend and i had been going out for almost a year and then he broke-up with me. i then wrote a note telling how sad and depressed i was about our brake-up and he got a hold of the note and read it and then two days later her asked me back out again! - Noelle |
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i really like your poem - mandy |
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I love this poem. It really inspired me. Keep up the good work babe. - Heather |
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good - chelsea |
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its a good poem - Darlene |
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it short n simple but it wrote all u have in ur heart. i broke up with my bf of 3 years few months back. i tell myself not to cry anymore but i still do at night when i'm all alone in my room. - Cindy |
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this is a really r8 peom and is very deep. it is like a time wen i split up with my b/f and i did get him back in the end thanx for putting the feeling in to words! - rachel |
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When my old boy friend broke up with me after being with him for 2 years I cried for 2 months I don't know why but I did. - Janaya |
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its good indeed. imargine few words but lots of meanig.so full of passion ,again in few places. i wish i had you.... - lems |
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this poem is impeckable i feel this way about my dream girl she dosnt under stand my feelings deep down in my heart is for her - kelham |
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Very good Poem - Natalia |
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That poem made me feel of a time with my boyfriend - Mia |
