My Angel by Steve Beaudry
Your dark flowing hair does tickle my nose,
after you kiss me when I give you a rose.
Your sweet blue eyes send my mind in motion;
they remind me of the sparkle of sun in the ocean.
your calm gentle voice always brings me a smile;
It is so sad we may only talk for a while.
I want to sit and hold you forever,
for that is a memory I long to endeavor.
The touch of your soft gentle hands against mine
send wonderful chills along my spine.
My dreams to be with you have finally come true,
For now I will never want to let go of you.
after you kiss me when I give you a rose.
Your sweet blue eyes send my mind in motion;
they remind me of the sparkle of sun in the ocean.
your calm gentle voice always brings me a smile;
It is so sad we may only talk for a while.
I want to sit and hold you forever,
for that is a memory I long to endeavor.
The touch of your soft gentle hands against mine
send wonderful chills along my spine.
My dreams to be with you have finally come true,
For now I will never want to let go of you.
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I wrote this poem hoping to show my girl friend that I hold the strongest love for her that I have ever felt. The poem reflects the things about her that I hold dear in my heart. I wanted to tell her what I feel about her beauty. The thing that prompted me to write this poem for her was the nights and days that we spend together. She has touched my life in such a way to make me greatly look forward to the next day when I get to see her.
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This poem was great it really touched me! - Andrea |
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hey steve, good job!i really missed my ex aftr reading ur poem cuz evn we went through the same and he used to tell me how much he loved me and he neva wnted to let go. but i neva really undrstood him. nd now i regret it. - elaine |
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I really think your poem is so sweet. I wish my boyfriend could of wrote me a poem like that. I'm a poet too. Gosh, your very sweet. - Felicia |
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I loved this poem, it reminds me of my girlfriend and I and if you love your girl as much as I love my angel, You're one lucky guy. me, I know. - Jase |
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Wow hey i love it and I know how it is when you dont see your love much often and when u do u cherish it with everything u can. i love your poem i can c it comes from the heart i give u props well im in a relationship 2 been with mi man for 9months and sometimes we dont get to c eachother for atleast 2weeks and when we do we cherish ever single moment we have to getther i hope u the best of luck :-) - Nadeshda |
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thank you so much, this poem really touched me. keep u the excellent writing. never give up, the world wouldnt be the same without you writing. - Richard |
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that poem was such an amazing one. every girl should have a guy like you! - Naïka |
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I really liked your poem. Very nice. Thanks for sharing. - Jenna |
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it really touched me. and it shows me the true meaning of love. this is such a good poem its the best i have read and it really touched my heart and made me remember the good times me and my ex boyfriend had. keep up with the good work. - Kaveesha |
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this poem is great so true so emotional so sweet and just explains love the way it is - rosie |
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I think this poem was very special because it relates to alot of things in my life. - Jennifer |
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this poem is really good. it is the same way i feel about my boyfriend. - Justine |
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hey steve your poems if nice i like if. - alex |
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I wish my boy friend would write a poem for me but I don't think he loves me that much as you love your girl Maby you need to hook up with him and give him a little talk I'm happy for you that you found the right girl for you - Janaya |
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This is one of the sweetest poems I have read all I got to say is that the girl you are with is so lucky to have a guy like you! - Mickey |
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Great poem, really expresses how you feel, can't wait to hear more! - Lindsey |
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this is a great poem. I am going to recite it to my girlfriend whom i am about to marry. - eric |
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You must be related to Cleo-the psychic-because I am going through the exact same thing! - ash |
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i love this poem. it makes me think about me and my boyfriend. - Krystal |
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Yaaaa, nice poem. It made me feel a lot of faith in love. Your gurls a lucky brod! ;) - Jamie |
