Silence by Ladycat
Moving on,
Going no where.
Caring 'till dawn,
Sounds that seem to care.
Music low,
Hearts beat,
No one must know,
Panting in the street.
The two as one,
Lovers in the night.
All night long,
'Till they're done.
Coming together -
to make everything right.
Going no where.
Caring 'till dawn,
Sounds that seem to care.
Music low,
Hearts beat,
No one must know,
Panting in the street.
The two as one,
Lovers in the night.
All night long,
'Till they're done.
Coming together -
to make everything right.
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Shhh . . . Can you hear that? Can you hear the sounds of lovers in the night? The pants and moans that relieve the stress of the day? Listen closer . . .
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that is hot and sexey - dana |
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it needs to be longer but i like it cause it makes u think and kinda relaxes you - samantha |
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this was better then most of the other pomes on this page - derrick |
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really well done. it almost made me cry as i'm feeling pretty blue due to the one. - zoltan |
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this was a very very good poem you have shown how love is in a little time thank you for the words that leave us coming back for more - amy |
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I think this poem is brilliant well done chaps. - sarah |
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you really have an idea of what love,lust,and passion are. It shows in just a few written lines. Good luck to you and your writing. - niki |
