Erotic by Ladycat
My mind screamed out "Make love to me"
My body screamed out "Make love to me"
He did more than that
Without a word
Without a thought
He touched, licked, kissed, nibbled, and sucked on places that my body
thought had lost feeling
Passion, Desire, Lust
He knew just what I wanted
>From the top of my head to the tip of my toes
I shivered
Cried out
Then fainted
The rush of sensation passed through my body
It made all the tiny hairs stand up on end
Just a touch and all of my feeling came back to me
>From just his touch
I fell asleep that night - peaceful
Only to awake the next morning and realize that he was already gone
Just a dream
I don't know; but when he comes back we shall start all over again
and again
and again
My body screamed out "Make love to me"
He did more than that
Without a word
Without a thought
He touched, licked, kissed, nibbled, and sucked on places that my body
thought had lost feeling
Passion, Desire, Lust
He knew just what I wanted
>From the top of my head to the tip of my toes
I shivered
Cried out
Then fainted
The rush of sensation passed through my body
It made all the tiny hairs stand up on end
Just a touch and all of my feeling came back to me
>From just his touch
I fell asleep that night - peaceful
Only to awake the next morning and realize that he was already gone
Just a dream
I don't know; but when he comes back we shall start all over again
and again
and again
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Feelings of love... No feelings of lust that separate us from the beast... We become the beast inside...
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It makes you feel like you're really there with her; it was great! - Ms.Jiggy |
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This is a beautiful poem - KendayDrilla |
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This poem reminds me of a special relationship, slipped away. - conrad |
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hot and lovely - jaz |
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It is, a very intense and extremely, sensual poem. I did felt my hair going strait up. very good , very shirt, very effective. Comment, romantic, sensual and definitely very erotic. GOOD good , from and artist, that with personal experience, had the ability to created moment of magic, in shirt time, moment that in real live, are very rear. THANK YOU, TO THE GENUINELY OF THIS POEM - carlo |
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oh my god this poem made me want more it was on fire keep it up ladycat cuase you keep me hot - Princess |
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tight! - candy |
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This poem was very cool - Shawonda |
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sexy stimulating fabulous - elizabeth |
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Enjoyed it greatly - Warren |
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Awesome beautifully worded I was in a trance with each word so very wonderful! Sianna - Sianna |
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I really enjoy reading that poem,we need more poems like that keep up the good work Ladycat. God bless - Sharren |
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NICE! - DELILAH |
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this poem wasa hot one, keep writting i'll be looking forward to seeing more of them. - cassandra |
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This poem was "Hot" and I think Ladycat definately has the talent for lovers and lovers alike. - Laurel |
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I enjoyed this poem. Yes, that's what keeps us going. Our Dreams - River |
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wow! omg. literaly speachless. its soo good, as if your like her bestfriend. and you know alomst exactly what it fells like. - najia |
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This poem is hot! It is screaming out for more. I hope you see him again, because I would want him to myself. Hot love(nothing like it.) - Donnatella |
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that poem was so..so..icant describe it the best - jerid |
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Great writing style. CONGRATS ! ! ! - larissa |
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this one really hits home - Elizabeth |
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it was an exceptional poem, and made me think of memories i thot were gone. I truely loved it! Lily - Gail |
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This poem was perfect to send my lnternet lover. It was so erotic. I hope Ladycat will continue writing erotic poetry for those of us who don't have the ability to do so. - Dee |
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I heard a wimper. I heard a cry. But what I found, More than a sign. More than a whim, I like this one the best. Gota run no words left. - Gavin |
