Heart Thoughts by Jfreak
Sitting here remembering when
I saw the beauty rush out like a might wind
I never saw it before or bothered to notice
But now I see it and on it I am focused.
The gentleness of your voice
The way you make me feel
when I see your lovely smile.
The way you laugh and care for others
Even go beyond the extra mile.
I am focused on that
whether you believe me or not
My heart aches for you
And my stomach is in knots.
Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart
I saw the beauty rush out like a might wind
I never saw it before or bothered to notice
But now I see it and on it I am focused.
The gentleness of your voice
The way you make me feel
when I see your lovely smile.
The way you laugh and care for others
Even go beyond the extra mile.
I am focused on that
whether you believe me or not
My heart aches for you
And my stomach is in knots.
Now I had to declare,
The thoughts of my heart.
In hopes that you'd give me,
A place in your heart
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I knew this girl all through high school. We were buds, chums, but then one day she caught my eye in a totally different way than ever before. I began to care far more than I ever did. That is where this poem came from. Sad thing is she never read it. I never got a chance to give it to her. We had a falling out just days before I was planning to give it to her. I always wondered what would have happened if I would have given her the poem sooner. I guess I will never know.
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hi this is very nice poem. i thought that is amazing! that was just- touching. that had so much emotion and you are a great poet. - anunay |
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this is a really beautiful poem it really touches my heart, and i didn't know that there was actually someone out there that has the same problem/situation as i do it's way way awesome. - Crista |
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A simply touching poem. While I was reading it some of the words in it reminded me that I possess some of those qualities in myself. I give this poem four****. A good poem, not too long and easy to understand. - Evelyn |
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I really like it. My best friend saw an x of hers last night who said all of that. I showed her your poem. She also likes it. (keep up the good work!) - Peggy |
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very nice - umesh |
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it's a great poem i'll appreacite it! - karishma |
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I think you should still give her the poem. it might save what you had. What can you lose? Its worth the try! I know how hard it is. im going through it right now. - Tiffany |
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wow this is a great poem and i once had the same feelings for a friend and the same thing happend to me if the feelings are still there then you should give it to her so she knows and you won't have the regret of her not knowing. - rachel |
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i can relate to what hes poem means. i liked it. - christy |
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captures my exact feelings. such as when you just cant get someone out of your head. brilliant! - tracy |
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i love this poem it was just great!it makes me think of my boyfriend now for 31/2yrs jay-t - stormy |
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wow. nicely written. i can relate to this poem especially because i've had feelings for a friend for almost 2 yrs now. this poem really summarized my thoughts. ^_^ - issa |
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aww. that was so sweet! show it to her! im sure she'll love it! - Allysson |
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this was a very wonderful poem - shona |
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This is one of the best friendship to lovers poems I have ever read. - Salaam |
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Hey i read this poem and i loved it!. i think you should give this poem to the girl you adore! maybe she will give you a chance and give you a place in here heart. good luck! - jennifer |
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I just want to say that there has been many times where I have also felt the same way, and I just did not know how to write them down. Thanks Alot for expressing my thoughts as well! - Tyrone |
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I realy like the poem! - ShaKaren |
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Of all the poems in this catergory i think that this one tops the lot. Great work! - Peter |
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wow wow wow verey nice - abdw |
