Two Souls, One Voice by Paulus
although two souls are meeting
there is but one voice
capturing the moment
captivating and controlling
the thoughts, actions, words
leading the way for conscious
desire and decisive emotion
stories and daily goings- on
are frequently passed
between the one voice
and the intermixed beings
creating a warm happiness
a sense of belonging
an aura of completeness
a comfortable existence
time, a distant memory
fading in and fading out,
its power and autonomy fall
on blissfully ignorant,
yet distinctly aware,
ears - focused and true
with the quantity
of well spent hours
adding up and summarizing
the feelings and beliefs
shared and opposed,
comes an ability
to confide and uphold
moments, eternities
abundant with understanding.
there is but one voice
capturing the moment
captivating and controlling
the thoughts, actions, words
leading the way for conscious
desire and decisive emotion
stories and daily goings- on
are frequently passed
between the one voice
and the intermixed beings
creating a warm happiness
a sense of belonging
an aura of completeness
a comfortable existence
time, a distant memory
fading in and fading out,
its power and autonomy fall
on blissfully ignorant,
yet distinctly aware,
ears - focused and true
with the quantity
of well spent hours
adding up and summarizing
the feelings and beliefs
shared and opposed,
comes an ability
to confide and uphold
moments, eternities
abundant with understanding.
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After a long chat online, I was inspired to write this about how just plain talking can help brighten your outlook and see some things in a different light. It was an excellent 4. 5 hour chat session and I feel that this poem summarizes it (and the feelings it gave me) pretty well.
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I feel this poem is very touching and yet very informative at the same time. I really enjoyed the dynamics of this poem! - CHRISTINE |
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This poem summed up exactly how I felt for a new friend I met on-line. Thankyou. - skip |
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Your poem moves me a lot,really. It's bn wonderfully described. exactly as I felt it. Thanks. - MaryJane |
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nice poem - Melissa |
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this one is a really good one it speaks the truth love it - car |
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this poem is the best! - E |
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What an outstanding vote for friendship of the very best kind. Wonderfully written, this poem evokes friendships I have enjoyed for many years, and some for less than one. Thank you for putting my own feelings into poetry - Diana |
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I really enjoyed this poem and it is very true. The author has great talent. - Hayley |
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i like this poem. it says exactly what i feel. - stephanie |
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I enjoyed reading this Reality without frills - Cheryle |
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i really lov this poem coz of this poem i can tell my heartly feeling to my belover - sania |
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I enjoyed it.it summed up my thoughts ..well done - Graham |
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I LIKE THIS POEM, BECAUSE IT REMINDS ME OF ME. ;-) - DAWGGY69 |
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What beautiful words to pass on to someone who has touched one so deeply. Thank you for the gift of your poetry in my life, to pass on and to share w/ someone who means so much to me. - melanie |
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very nice - mark |
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Words beautifully capturing emotions echanged between two souls during the act of coming together through words and emotions being typed on a screen . While imagination paints the picture in in thier minds and furthers the connection on levels beyond the physical. - maggie |
