Notes To You by A Lonely Heart
Two notes to you,
You don't write,
You don't call,
You don't even say I Love You!
One note to you,
You don't write,
You don't call,
You don't even say I Love You!
No notes to you,
You write,
You call,
You even say I Love You!
You don't write,
You don't call,
You don't even say I Love You!
One note to you,
You don't write,
You don't call,
You don't even say I Love You!
No notes to you,
You write,
You call,
You even say I Love You!
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I wrote this poem because my notes to my boyfriend went unanswered until I stopped writing him. After I stopped writing him he wrote me everyday.
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It's true, I always wrote my girl poems, and she never ever wrote back. She felt she couldn't write. Finally after she got the courage to write, she gave me a poem. I couldn't believe how beautiful it was. Thanx for the momory, keep up the good work! From a poet to a poet! - Jase |
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Sooooooooo true. Same as my ex-bf. When we were together, he wasnt luv me enough but now when we broke up, he phone+ text+email me to say not aday pass by he doesnt think about me. And even says HE LOVE ME. hahahhahah. Why_men_behave_badly that's my question and i made it my nick. - jade |
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This is a tight poem and girl please shake this old haters off and keep doing whay you are doing. - Shanika |
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I thought your poem was great. Dont let stupid people that have no idea about poetry discourage you. You did an awesome job I loved it. Keep up the good work. - lux |
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awsome! awsome! much props to the poet. love your poem. clever! i know what you were feeling thus i was feeling the same about one summer ago. great poem. ! love it - ceci |
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i love this poem - jean |
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this is like me & mah boyfriend! if a send him a couple notes, he doesn't answer. even if i send him 1 note, he doesn't. One time wen i sent him no notes, & didn't call him he said he luvs me!& he neva calls me(only wen hes mad at me) & wen we hang up da phone, we usally say 'luv ya!', but last time we we're on da phone he didn't say it:( - mana... |
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I think this was a horrible poem. How could you put some thing like this in your web site it is an embarasment - natella |
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The poem is very simply and straight to the point. It's good, but it is also very common sense and obvious. Simplicity means a lot. - Monica |
