I Will Remember You by Wildcherry
The pain that touches me as I think of you is fierce and numbing.
How I wish that I could be with you.
Be with you on this day, this hour, this minute.
You are in my thoughts always,
Such sorrow the thoughts of you bring.
If only we could love and care for one another like we have always shared.
The joy of a day that will never come haunts me,
Yet I bathe in the hope that it brings.
The sound of your laughter sends shivers down my spine
and pains in my heart as I think of you.
I have made a decision, to be silent in my thoughts, Silent in my love for you.
One day a long time from now.
I will be sitting quietly somewhere.
The lines of time etched on my face.
I will think about all of the moments of the past.
Everything that we shared . . . mind, body and soul.
As a smile stretches across my face and dances in my heart
I will remember you.
How I wish that I could be with you.
Be with you on this day, this hour, this minute.
You are in my thoughts always,
Such sorrow the thoughts of you bring.
If only we could love and care for one another like we have always shared.
The joy of a day that will never come haunts me,
Yet I bathe in the hope that it brings.
The sound of your laughter sends shivers down my spine
and pains in my heart as I think of you.
I have made a decision, to be silent in my thoughts, Silent in my love for you.
One day a long time from now.
I will be sitting quietly somewhere.
The lines of time etched on my face.
I will think about all of the moments of the past.
Everything that we shared . . . mind, body and soul.
As a smile stretches across my face and dances in my heart
I will remember you.
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This poem is written about a man I met on the Internet - met, yet due to circumstances am unable to be with. I have tried to end our relationship, have tried to forget, This was supposed to be a goodbye, But, that failed miserably.
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i think that anybody can compare to this poem well not anyone but some people i think that this poem is great it is very understandable. i liked it alot - Elizabeth |
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i really liked this poem it really touched me i think about my love life in cyber way and reminds me how far my girl is my baby crystal i wish she just was with me i hope u keep writing good work - Ali |
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Brought the tears back again. - Dianna |
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This poem touched my heart in ways I never thought it could. See. the man I met lives 3500 miles away. I am going to meet him soon but reality kicking in I know we could never have a serious relationship because of the distance - Ann |
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So well put together, really good. Especially when one thinks of a cyber relationship that didn't turn out the way one wanted. - Danial |
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Absolutely beautiful and true. - Karen |
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I think this is one of the best poems I have ever read. The emotions are so intense. You can feel the pain and it evokes your own. Great Writing! - Teal |
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whoa! so nice that it went through me..coz i'm feelin gthe same way as the writer did. i'm loving this guy and so i am hurt..but i'd remember him for life..he will always be in my heart. - Donna |
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it describes a bittersweet cyber realtionship that I know so well. - jerry |
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This poem really hit home. These are the words I have been looking for but didn't know it until now. Thank You - this poem means a lot to me. I beleive that means alot for Rick too... yes i will remember forever this man or Old man like he said always... I remember him words and i smile becouse i really love his voice and lought... - Vera |
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Great work!! - Nikita |
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This poem.. tells the truth! I lost my love of my life after 5 months..we shared the most intimate love affair.My heart..my world..my life.. is shaddered..I dont know what happen..but I never give up..I will love him til my dieing day. This poem made me cry.and think of him.because I want him back..I love him more than life itself.Thank You WildCherry for writing this very devoted poem.It's a tresure! - Jill |
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This poem touches my heart so much.It is the what i have gone through.such feeling can only discribe what i feel..powerful and touching..thank you - Carol |
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i have those same fears of not ever being able to be with the one i love - sky |
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Touching poem.....just as if you wrote it from my own heart. I see a Rusty has read it...mmmmm funny thing is...my heart belonged to a man named rusty and this poem would be for him. What a small world isn't it. - rain |
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the poem made me stop and think about what all i needed to work out. so i did. i wanted to just say thanks to wildcherry. - amanda |
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Beautiful poem that eludes to the beauty of love itself , of the moment, the experiance and how it molds who we are over time. It is better to have felt the passions of love then to never have loved at all. The author exposes vulnerability, hope, selflessness of true love, and the whistful promise that time lessens the pain. - maureen |
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I Think This Is Very Good!! - Linda |
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without words, but not without tears - Bridgette |
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beautiful poem by a beautiful lady - Al |
