Beautiful by Magic
He is beautiful, so very beautiful
Just like a winter's shining landscape,
As delicate as the petals of a daisy,
And as freely as the eagle soaring against the blue
His eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea
Everything about him is so very precious,
More precious than all the gems in the world
His soul is the essence of the sky and earth,
His feelings are a volcano that is yet to explode
His smile is the smile of lost innocence.
Pain vibrates deep inside of his gentle heart.
A lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of his mind,
A mind with as many roads as the world has.
I look at him and I see a pure truth,
Like looking at a clear night sky,
Millions of stars twinkle within him.
He is beauty as I defined it,
He is perfect, his imperfections make him so.
He is my best friend, and I love him,
I love him although, not because.
And I would give up all the things which I think are pretty
If only I can hold his beauty within me,
For he is everything in this world,
And I have found a world in him.
Just like a winter's shining landscape,
As delicate as the petals of a daisy,
And as freely as the eagle soaring against the blue
His eyes are as mysterious as the calm sea
Everything about him is so very precious,
More precious than all the gems in the world
His soul is the essence of the sky and earth,
His feelings are a volcano that is yet to explode
His smile is the smile of lost innocence.
Pain vibrates deep inside of his gentle heart.
A lock shuts in the disturbed thoughts of his mind,
A mind with as many roads as the world has.
I look at him and I see a pure truth,
Like looking at a clear night sky,
Millions of stars twinkle within him.
He is beauty as I defined it,
He is perfect, his imperfections make him so.
He is my best friend, and I love him,
I love him although, not because.
And I would give up all the things which I think are pretty
If only I can hold his beauty within me,
For he is everything in this world,
And I have found a world in him.
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This poem is about my feelings toward my best friend. To me he is truly beautiful, although the word beautiful is not commonly applied to a man. The emotions which rage within him, his past which struggles to beat him, show me a strength which I have never seen in anyone else. He gives me the truth that I need in this crazy world. Although he is now out of my life, due to many mistakes on both our parts, the memory of him will always remind me to be who I am. And in my heart, he will always be just a little bit more than my best friend.
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I just had a friend of mine go his seperate way and I miss him. I know the word beautiful is not commonly applied to a man like you said but this is just right to apply to anyone. I just started crying as soon as I read it. It just described my friend so accurately it scared me! - mervyn |
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beautiful is a very gooooooooooooooooooooooooood poem. - Rani |
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thank you so very much for making a poem that speaks to me and talks about my boyfriend i love randy soooooo much and i want everyone to know it. - jessica |
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An amazing poem! - Lucky |
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awesome! i can relate to it. it's very touching. - sabelle |
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This poem is how alot of woman see there man I am glad someone finally put into words on paper I LOVE IT very beautiful - susan |
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that was outstanding - nadine |
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well i was just going to read these poems and not write anything as it would be a waste of time,but when i read this i had to tell you. this is one of the best things i have ever read, it brought a tear to my eye. 10 out of 10 - Claire |
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This is an awesome poem. - Melissa |
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beautiful - willy |
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This is exactly it, my best friend in the whole world, the most beautiful man with the eyes of a clear, cloudless summer sky. I love him, too. you who wrote this, thank you. this is far better than I ever could write, and I call my friend Beautiful all the time. - Jennika |
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I really liked your poem. Though I'm not so sure which role I fall into. The one who looks back fondly or the one who feels cast aside. Still I have to admit when I read the poem, my emotions flowed through the levys I have built around them. All in all. a great poem. I applaud you. - Tsume |
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Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. ! I gave it to my friend. Beautiful. - Romy |
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i just changed it a bit & send to my girl , it was beautifull !i used instead her, intead of him . sorry - JAY |
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I have always loved this poem and get heart flutters everytime I read it even though I have read it hundreds of time! - krisna |
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Hey thanks for the poem for my bday i loved it and i really understood it but if there is more to tell me let me kno ok i will always be here for u. - Vash |
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yes - dd |
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your poem was amazing and touched me, my best friend is a guy and it decribed him so well GOOD JOB! - lay*c |
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Easily able to relate into anyones life who has love in it - donell |
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well i really love this one u can really feel what she is trying to say - doris |
