Still by Amy
If the sun ever fails to rise,
If the stars ever fail to fill the sky,
If the moon ever fails to return,
I'll still be here loving you.
If the ocean dries up,
If the rivers disappear,
If the earth just vanished,
I'll still cherish you.
You've helped me grow.
You've been here for me through everything.
You've shown me that you care.
You are my sun, my stars, and my moon.
I owe you everything. plus some.
I cherish you and the love you have.
If the sun ever fails to rise.
If the stars fail to fill the sky.
If the moon ever fails to return.
I will still treasure you.
If the stars ever fail to fill the sky,
If the moon ever fails to return,
I'll still be here loving you.
If the ocean dries up,
If the rivers disappear,
If the earth just vanished,
I'll still cherish you.
You've helped me grow.
You've been here for me through everything.
You've shown me that you care.
You are my sun, my stars, and my moon.
I owe you everything. plus some.
I cherish you and the love you have.
If the sun ever fails to rise.
If the stars fail to fill the sky.
If the moon ever fails to return.
I will still treasure you.
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This poem was written for my boyfriend Brandon. I wrote it because we were going through a hard time and I thought he needed to know that I still love him and that I still care. I tried my hardest to express all of my feelings for him in this poem but I still couldn't find the right words that would do that. This is the best I could do.
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Thats real i cant believe i cryed - Hasna |
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this poem really touched me cause it reminds me of my boyfriend and me - brittany |
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amy you have done an great job writing this poem to tell your man that no matter what you will still love him through the ups and downs - lamia |
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Amy, I know how you feel. your poem is so good and you are very talented. I loved your poem i feel the same way for my boyfriend - Amanda |
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hey i really like this poem! it reminds me and my boy friend!I have so much love for him! - Amy |
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this was wonderful - Brande |
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this poem blew me away! You described my love exactly! truly extrodinary! it left me with a feeling of tranquility - Richard |
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good poem - mohamad |
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i like ur poem hope u kkep on writing - chris |
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I love this poem and I totally feel this way! - Ashley |
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this poem can only explain the true feelings one could ever have 4 their one n only / so it touched me in so many waysi could not even explain it.........thank u amy - the |
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nice pome - lina |
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this is another poem that reached out to me and it is so good that I might send it to myself and then to other people - heather |
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hey i reall like this poem it explains exactly how i feel about my true love - ME |
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I love this poem, it really relates to me... - Nicky |
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BEAUTIFUL POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Jennifer |
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great poem - heidi |
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Hey. I really like your poem, it's well written. Good Job! - Michelle |
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It explains alot of deep feelings and I liked it. - kw |
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A very nice poem - Kim |
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Hey this girl named amy is an awesome poet she should win every time she just moved my heart when I read her poem. - Amy |
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I think your poem Still is touching. I have a friend, who in your poem, desribes exactly what I feel for him. I just think it's an amazing poem and I hope you keep writing more, because it seems to me, your a really good poet! - Tara |
