Broken And Shattered Promises by Pauline Hamblin
You told me that you loved me
It seemed easy for you to say
But you failed to prove it
The first time temptation
Came your way
You told me we would last forever
And I believed your words were true
But the words that you had spoken
Seemed to have been forgotten by you.
It seemed easy for you to say
But you failed to prove it
The first time temptation
Came your way
You told me we would last forever
And I believed your words were true
But the words that you had spoken
Seemed to have been forgotten by you.
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I can't say enough about the pain of deceit. It renders the soul and rips through ones heart
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thanx 4 blessing me with your beeutiful words. in using your words, you touched my heart. - Vannesa |
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it's great. but who feels the greater pain? the speaker or the one to whom it's spoken? - Trip |
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wow . simple words, yet deep. s. - sandeep |
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This is exactly what happened to me. the 1st temptation was all it took and the promises of us and forever became nothing near reality. - Courtney |
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You realy tell it how it is, that was a realy good poem. - Dreamer |
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This is a great poem. Good job. I know the feeling. - Sara |
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This half way decribes what I am feeling right now. - Sarah |
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Put my feelings into words. Great, great work. - phil |
