A Tear Fell by Marge Tindal
I shed a tear today
Silently, I felt it fall
You caught it
shared it
held it
felt it
then
suddenly
it wasn't
so big
after all
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When friends help the most, they silently pick up our tears and hold them for us.


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bubble I think that this poem was. It was so beautiful. The fact that all of what is written is actually very true and it all fits into a little paragraph, It is so amazing. I think Its simply great. - Maryum
bubble cool poem! - regina
bubble So simply said but it said it all. A beautiful piece of poetry - Pam
bubble sort,simple. 2 th e point. Nice! - Sachi Lee
bubble A simple but poignant drop of magic. Not just a poem. Thanks. - Jacinta
bubble this was a great poem and i'm using it in a school assignment. ! - blah
bubble Great expression of what a friend is. - Debra
bubble A wonderful poem. Something that really just shows how I feel about people in my life :) - Darren
bubble it touched my soul - shayana
bubble This poem touched my heart. So short but powerful in its words. - Jo
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bubble I cryed so much that ment heaps to me - Helena
bubble good simple and i like it bring more like this one - jessica
bubble that was a cute poem - niyah
bubble GREAT POEM! IT REALLY HIT HOME WITH ME AND SOME OF MY CLOSE FRIENSHIPS THAT I HAVE. IT IS A PLEASURE TO BE ABLE TO READ A POEM AND FEEL EXACTLY LIKE THE AUTHUR, GREAT EXPERIENCE! - Ashley
bubble The poem reminded me of a couple of friends i am lucky to have, that have been there for me when thing got hard. I think the poem is great. - Andrea
bubble Sharing problems with loved ones always lightens the burden. - Claire
bubble This is a very beautiful poem - Tawny
bubble one that siad that tears are important in life of friendship - yuvaraj
bubble This poem was super great. It was a real tear jerker. This poem really spoke to me - Drew
bubble This poem touched me when i gave the poem to one of my friend and said i found it on the internet she cried and it touched her to we both loved it very much thank you so much for writing this poem and posting it on the computer - Jessica
bubble This poem was so sweet,,,simple,,but sweet - tonjia
bubble that what friends are for =) Gut Job. very deep for me. - Putri
bubble Whoa. really touching. next time i'm sad i know my friends r there 4 me - DaNieL
bubble I LOVE IT. It is so nice. - Jeanette
bubble sweet & simple! PERFECT! - marisha
bubble its very short but its very deep. its so touching. its great. - LIVIA
bubble Hey marge. this is a beautiful poem. So simple,short and very sweet. This sweet poem reminds me my loved ones who support me whenever I go blue. Gud job n keep goin' on. - Rebecca
bubble i loved it. it was sooo sweet - Shelby
bubble What a beautiful poem written,very well written. It touched my heart deeply,i don't have enough words to explain the uniqueness of this poem,this is absolute a treasure. good job done - shivam
bubble wow. that's all i have to say. this is such an amazing poem; it touched me a lot. i'm a big girl about friendship and i have a lot of friends. this may sound corky, but i've read a lot and i mean a lot of poems about friendships and relationships. this is by far one of the best. - Sara
bubble This is a great peom. And I think that it should be published. - John
bubble this poem says a lot in a few words a few days ago i found the guy i thought wa my friend who i had told my secrets to was a liar had used me so bad. thank u for your special words please write more soon - Beth
bubble SIMPLY great :) - julia
bubble i fell good reading - yark
bubble This poem touched my heart and made me realize what good friends I had. - Jasmin
bubble Absolutely beautiful and true. - Bruiser
bubble It is a lovely poem. - Madhu
bubble simple, beautiful. and Oh so true! - Cassi
bubble i love it, i can really relate to this poem. it makes me remember the friends of mine that helped me on my problems - Mae
bubble This immediately brought a face to mind of a friend that has shared it all with me. I love the simplicity of the poem and the incredible strength that lies within. - Maureen
bubble i love this poem it really brought tears to my eyes - cindy
bubble YOUR POEM WAS COOL! YOU PUT EVERYTHING SO QUICKLY AND SO SIMPLY. LOVE ALWAYS @LM@ - tisha
bubble That was simply beautiful! - melody
bubble I LOVE THAT SO MUCH - alissa
bubble Really touching and it meant all in a single paragraph - asma
bubble I thought this was a awesome poem. I read other poems but this one I actually like. It tells a lot even if it is short. - Jaslin
bubble Very touching and meaningful. I like it! - DiTzky
bubble this poem is tooooooooooooooo good ,its very emotional,touching i realise this because i 2 have an best friend smitha ilove her so much when iam sad ,happy she was always iwth me now shez very far from me but now our love incresed more & more - kavitha
bubble This poem is beautiful,. MsTindal,. you are very eloquent,. - Jean
bubble so simply said and yet so beautiful. - Kathleen
bubble it was short, sweet and honest. it really was perfect - maxine
bubble this poem makes me remember the quote "good things come in small packages" hope the author keeps them coming - rabia
bubble The tender feeling had been explained very well. - Krishna
bubble This is the best poem ever read. - misty
bubble Loved this poem. Short and sweet! - Dusty
bubble This poem touched my heart - Denise
bubble very very touching indeed, short and precise, very good! i love it! - Sharon
bubble This is the most touching poem i have ever read. i was look for a poem for class and i found yours. i had to memerized it and it was no problem at all. i love this poem its my favorite! - cheyanne
bubble I love it! Simple. - Aimee
bubble It's so true - Megan
bubble this poem reminds me of one of my best friends that i had to move away from and that i wish i could move back to be with that friend of mine which i will that is one of my goals. - Kayla
bubble beautifully written - Fawn
bubble That poem was wonderful /I love and I am pretty sure anybody who reads it would be toughed - Jihnson
bubble This is a very nice poem,it is soo true, once a friend shares the pain it doesn't seem half as big. - Jessica
bubble this poem is so beautiful it mad me realise wat friends are - king
bubble So few words yet says so much - Cheri
bubble i like this poem because its saying to me theres always someone there for you when you feeling down. - Priscilla
bubble that poem is really sweet. its really short but that dosnt matter because there was so much meaning. - Gen
bubble The poet said alot with the use of few words, which is a seldom found talent! I'm impressed! - Serena
bubble this poem touched me it was short but beatiful - brittany
bubble It's amazing how friend can change a huge thing into something smaller or they have a way of making it seem that you can get through everything. I loved how you put it in a plan simple way. - Savanna
bubble i almost cried when i read this poem its so pretty. its short, but it was more meaning than many poems i haev heard. - Amy
bubble its a poem of reality, what a person feels about the opposite person when he or she loves the person its some of the most amazing poems i have read - husz
bubble It was a really good poem - Tasheena
bubble So simple and true. - Aubrey
bubble The poem speaks volumes in all simplicity. - Minnu
bubble I love this poem. I give it a A++++++++, no poem really touches me like this one. - MiEkO
bubble I love this poem, this is my favorite poem. All of the short poems are so good, but all the long ones are not as good as the short ones. I just love how they just put it in one short paragraph, and the long ones are like 6 paragraphs. I love this poem. - Angela
bubble This poems is so sweet. - Brittany
bubble VERY,VERY NICE AND SHORT TO THE POINT IT NEEDED. SHOULD BE ON A GREETING CARD - SHANNON
bubble This poem is great! It reminds me of a time when I lost a friend because I had to move to a totally different state! Keep on writing poems. They are really good. - Lindsay
bubble this pome is so sweet i love it Sandeep - Sandeep
bubble How great to have a friend being described by the poem. i say so, coz i've found someone who let my tear fell - shella
bubble I just lost my father a month ago and it just seemed to say exactly how our family has shared this pain together. thanks - Carolyn
bubble This poem really toched me I just wish that every one could this this poem the way we do! - Some
bubble This is a very beautiful and heart-touching poem. The theme is simple, but the idea is great. Poet has used very simple words but he has expressed his feelings vey well. I congratulate the poet to present such a beautiful poem. I being a reader,feel comfortable myself while studying this poem. My best wishes are for the poet. - MUHAMMAD
bubble My wife died 2 years ago today a friend did the same for me as in this poem - Alan
bubble lovely - shama
bubble it was awesome a perfect 10 - kayla
bubble I think this poem was really good because it just shows your true feelings about that one person. I like it because i know how it feels and i feel the same way! - Cortney
bubble Your poem is what i feel when i need help from a friend and when a friend confronts me! - Legenia
bubble I really loved your poems. I love hearing what everyone else thinks about friendship and I really love reading poems about it. - Mary
bubble This poem was good. - Trista
bubble Great poem. truly touching. - Courtney
bubble a touching poem - bji
bubble The reason I am voting for this poem is because it sounds really romantic and every person should read this poem. If everyone don't read it there is something wrong with them. - Kimberly
bubble Your poem discribed my BEST FRIEND. She has been there for me without noing it. For she is my ANGEL. - David
bubble its sooo beautiful, thankyou for sharing your words with the world and i, its amazing what friens are to us, such an inspiring piece of work - kate
bubble This poem was a definate 10 - nicola
bubble I was looking for something to ease the pain and this was it. Keep writing poems like these. - Gloria
bubble Short,relievingly true and well versrd - Latha
bubble This is a beautiful poem. It reminded me of the song "You Needed Me" by Ann Murray. Which I dedicated to my best friend many years ago. He knows everything about me and still says I'm a nice person. I will be writing to him and sending him this poem. I know he will be happy to recieve it. Thank You - Antonia
bubble THAT TEAR POEM WAS SO SWEET THAT I WISH MY BOYFRIEND WOUD EVER DO SOMETHIG LIKE THAT - Julia
bubble i thought that it was a beutiful poem - candi
bubble Your words touch me. May God Bless You! - Ameera
bubble It is nice, nice, nice so so so so nice i remember it i like it - Md Jahangir
bubble I loved the poem. I never heard anything so wonderful - tanessa
bubble I loved it! It may have been short but it really describes the way that friends share the pain. Thank you for sharing - Sharla
bubble I liked this poem alot - ariel
bubble Thanx for writing those short sweet words with endless emotions attached to it. - tina
bubble i like the poem coz i think i also been through with that situation. - Chynee
bubble simple yet its soo meaningful. hope i have someone to share my tears too! - grace
bubble A beautiful poem that reminds all the emotions, everyone feel at the time when we are with our friends. I've voted for this poem, by just reading the title. Because i've shared the same moments with a friend in my school days. I really like this short but most beautiful poem. - ASHOK KUMAR
bubble I love this poem! Mainly because I have a friend whom has caught many of my tears, and I don't know what I'd do without her. I will be giving her this poem! It's beautiful! - Katherine
bubble it is a good poems sumthin happend yesterday and it made soo much sence when i read it today - casnadra
bubble its simple n heart touching. hope the poet gives something more to - this world of poems. - anil
bubble Wow! short but undeniably one of the best i've read here so far. - zoe
bubble Simple and meaningful. :-) - Paul
bubble I LOVE IT - KRISTEN
bubble simple and to the point loved it - daisy
bubble This poem is short but strong. It's a very beautiful poem. - Jane
bubble this poem is extraordinary i think because in so few words the author expresses how deep and meaningful friendship can be - LuViN*LiFe
bubble wow! this poem is really touching. but it's hard to find a friend who is like that. ( - jasmine
bubble I really like this poem would love to read more - Joyce
bubble this is such a good poem. when i read this poem it reminded me of my very best friend who is now very far from me. u did very good job. - Poonam
bubble been there. seen it. felt it! Loved it! - Jyothish
bubble it a good hard working moveing poem - lisa
bubble That was a really nice poem. i really loved it - Margo
bubble Good, it made me cry. - David
bubble I thought it was sad it made me cry - Robert
bubble your peom is so sweet it makes me want to cry. thank you for sharing that poem with the world! - Tabbethie
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bubble that was a VERY good poem. i almost cried :( - Roni
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bubble this poem was beautiful - michelle
bubble Your poem is short but sweet and tells alot about love very nice - Charish
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bubble This poem took me to another World. Thank you. - noone
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bubble I love this poem! It is short but says so much! - Holly
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bubble not bad not bad at all - matt
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bubble So simple, but so effective and so true - Rob
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bubble I'm speechless. - Gina
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bubble This is so deep and i'd just like to thanx u because these are the exact words i needed to tell my friend. It has really inspired me. Thanx - Loz
bubble I could feel this poem 'coz i have "seen" pain - Mufiz
bubble this is a beautiful TOUCHING poem - Ata
bubble When i read that poem it made me realize that it pointed out to what i've been through. It was a nice poem and its pretty touching - Jessi
bubble I was reading this poem and it caught every snapshot I was looking for. I think I'm going to send it to my sister, which is my best frined. - Lori
bubble i think that was a WONDERFUL poem i can relate to that poem so it means so so MUCH to me:) - tera
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bubble simple, but sweet. sometimes that makes the best poems. - Nancy
bubble This is such a beautiful poem. I sent it to someone very special who has done just that. Held my tears and shared my sorrows and guided me to where the sun shines again. - Erin
bubble i really liked this poem good job - isabe
bubble HEY I LIKED UR POEM KEPP UP UR GOOD WORK AND NEVER GIVE UP ON WHAT UR GOOD AT - liz
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bubble simpley the best - rose
bubble this poem held awealth of meaning for me. it made me realise that one can lighten their burdens by sharing them rather than clinging onto them. - juhi
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bubble I think that this poem is the best one I have ever read. Thank you for putting it on the internet. - Kim
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bubble I think that this poem is very good. I have a friend or i think that she is my friend and she plays ball with me on school softball team. the other day back home on the bus from the game i was crying because someone had told me that she did not like and called me a fat cow. - Morga
bubble The exact words I needed to thank my friend for doing just that. thank YOU! - Em
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bubble this poem has shown alot of truth and inspiration and if only everyone in the world could be as humble and befriend a person in need,we'd soon see a blessed change! - Sharon
bubble it's very sweet.. - Ulala
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bubble 'Simply The Best' - Jan
bubble Hey this realy sounds like me when my best friend that is a boy always helps me through the day and he dose the same when i cry. - Deena
bubble just incredibly . real - Jessie
bubble It was beautiful. It wasn't to long but got streight to the readers heart. - Wild_Flower
bubble Oh My God. that is the sweetest poem I think that I've ever read. It definitely made me cry. You are good at writing. Keep it up. - Danielle
bubble a very impressive poem.the poet has described one of the most common and undescribed feeling in a very simple and expressive language.beautiful use of words. - sek
bubble i know that feeling i loved the poem it is so simply and fully expressed - mari
bubble even though it was a short phrase with so little words, it holds a big meaning. I loved it. - daisy
bubble very nice poem, congratulations, it really touch me because I met a friend no to long ago and I told him one of my sadness stories of my life and when I read this poem make me thought about my friend David. "Thank you my dear friend" and Thank you Marge for writing such a wonderful poem. - Sussan
bubble It was a truly beautiful and heartfelt poem. i was reallly toughted by it. Thanx! - Julia
bubble Excellent poem ... touched the heart ... really beautiful .. - sudha
bubble Very touching and heartfelt, very true, meaningful without selfishness. - Bella
bubble Said it all..and wasn't long..it was just perfect - tara
bubble i loved it it. beautiful - erica
bubble I love it. Short and sweet, and expressing so many things in so few words. - Juliet
bubble great poem, poetry expresses so much to a friend - kiddo
bubble It went straight to my heart. - Leradema
bubble This poem is very touching & very sensitive.really it is very good. - Darshan
bubble Dead good! Improve my spirit! - iman
bubble it encompasses everything about friendship in the shortest of words... - Vanessa
bubble Perfect! - Liz
bubble it was a great poem, and i think you should continue to write more! - shamira
bubble the imagery and realness of this poem expressed in words what can usually only be expressed in actions and emotions. absolutely stunning - Jess
bubble lOVE IT SHORT AND SWEET, NOT A BIT BORING AS SOMETIMES POEMS ARE. - kATHLEEN
bubble i really loved your poem. I feel kind of jealous that i can't express such raw unbridaled emotion in such a short poem. I really feel where you're coming from with this. I feel exactly the same way when i cry and my boyfriend cheers me up - Chrissy
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bubble i love it! beautiful! short and sweet! - Megan
bubble its cute and its right to the point - Melissa
bubble very emotional and thoughtful - Bailey
bubble Subtle, yet poignant. It's straight to the point - Chee-Wei
bubble I am a school counselor and often feel like I am not helping my students, because I can't make their problems go away. Thanks to this poem, I now know better! - Deb
bubble All the poems on this site are wonderful ! I enjoy them so much ! - Lula
bubble In only a few words this poem says how pain with a friend is a lot easier to live with. - Rachel
bubble less is more - michelle
bubble Lovely poem - Robinson
bubble A+++++ Made me cry. - Lori
bubble beautiful - judy
bubble this poem is so beautiful that i have no words to tell how wonderful IT is. - Eve
bubble How sweet ! - Caron
bubble i think that this poem is very beautiful and i know this poem relates to me and a lot of my best friends....thank you so much for thinking of a poem like this - stacey
bubble This poem is so true to friends u cant live without - erica
bubble Loved it! I placed it in my newsletter at my community! Thank You, - Michelle
bubble This poem really says alot. - Donna
bubble Wonderful, and so meaningful such talent the writer posesses - melissa
bubble Outstanding. Short, sweet & to the point. - Terry
bubble Brilliant, succinct, eloquent.better than anything I have read via this URL before. Thank you - JB
bubble Very pretty. Very touching. - Vishal
bubble excellent wording..not too long, but said precisely what friendship is all about; sharing. - Hanni
bubble so lovely - georgina
bubble i like it...really...and i think ur a great writer. simple it may be..keep up the good work - betty
bubble Short, simple, precise, and clear. - Chris
bubble Just what the doctor ordered - Lampies
bubble beautiful! - mahwish