Passion's Shadow by Familiar Perplexity
The sky darkens,
as the moon winks
down,
flirting with our loving embrace...
encasing us in a passion's shadow,
with promises of
an ethereal existence
for us...
together...
as one...
as the moon winks
down,
flirting with our loving embrace...
encasing us in a passion's shadow,
with promises of
an ethereal existence
for us...
together...
as one...
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Lots of people have found love. But I haven't found mine yet. Although only 14, I am constantly jealous of the happy couples I have seen. Holding hands, kissing, hugging, snuggling. It always makes me wonder" "What would I be doing with my love of life, if I even have one?" Then came my dream that one night...and my poem was sit-in in my head...
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fantabulous, just fantabulous - Steve |
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I give you a thumbs up! I have been there and done it, it is very exciting, but please dont rush it, it will come when it is time to. - Britt |
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I loved It I'm really speechless. WOW. I write poetry to but mines not as good as that. WOW pure WOW. - Kendra |
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i loved this poem, its amazing how you got your point across in so few words, thats all it should take, amazing, keep writing, i would love to see more! - Clara |
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that was a touching poem. i give you props for only being fourteen and being able to write like this - J |
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HEY THAT PEICE WAS REALLY GOOD I HAVE NEVER HERD A 14 YEAR OLD USE SUCH EXPRESSIVE WORD EXCEPT FOR MYSELF I RIGHT POEMS TOO - jaime-lea |
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Love your poem, written long ago but i feel what you felt right now.... - Reinier |
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Wow! All I can say. is WOW! - Kate |
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Wow! I loved it. I have never been so impressed by anything in my life. You have real talent. I was completly taken by the precise vocabulary and how well it fit in with the romance of love. I would love to hear more of your work! - lacey |
