Death Of An Angel by Joseph Smith
I once knew a lady named
Misery
she lived in a damaged world
she calls to me in transparent dreams
a lonely star
outside
the closed universe
she was my twisted soul
long ago
she experienced
the darkest of
pain
beauty was something
she could not
believe
I once knew an angel named
Evil
she traveled like a
ghost into the shadows
her heart was dying for some form of
life
all seems balanced
now
the angel burns to
die
Misery
she lived in a damaged world
she calls to me in transparent dreams
a lonely star
outside
the closed universe
she was my twisted soul
long ago
she experienced
the darkest of
pain
beauty was something
she could not
believe
I once knew an angel named
Evil
she traveled like a
ghost into the shadows
her heart was dying for some form of
life
all seems balanced
now
the angel burns to
die
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This is a sampling of my so-called happy life. Depression is an evil monster that drowns you in a deep, swirling black hole. Writing on subjects in the soul of depression has a healing quality - it inspires me to seek out my darker emotions to convert them into positive energy
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i love this poem, im into this stuff! it touched me! i loved it! - tahliya |
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i liked it. it was very touching and i give it an 8 - Brooke |
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its a deep representation theat lies withing us all - joseph |
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ur poems is so true u write lyk i do ur poems is awsum it so rox my sox - jasmine |
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This poem really touched me it has so much emotion luv it! - donna |
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this poem really touched me it sounds alot like me but all i wanted to say was keep up the good work. - ernestina |
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This poem is so inspiring and i can understand where yopu r coming from - Quanisha |
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I think this poems is a good one and it touched my soul and helped me think of the reason why people are gone from you and how to cope with theri loss. All i have to do is come to this site all the time and read their poetry and i'll feel good for the rest of the day. - sharhonda |
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i realy really like this, there is so much feeling in it. good job! - valerie |
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oh my god your poem is sOoOoOo good! i wish i could write like that! - Shannon |
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eu gud poem and im sry u feel pain and u should right more poems if it helps u n i hope u get rid of ur pain - ilona |
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When I was in sixth grade, we all had to find a poem that we felt we connected to and read it outloud to the class. I happened across yours somehow one day at school, and something sparked. This has been my favorite poem for six years. I've finally found it again, and I hoped to get in contact with you. This is beautiful. You have no idea what this poem means to me. It has touched me deeply. Thank you. - Carolann |
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i can hardly express how amazing this poem is. it was as if i were reading about myself. - Crystal |
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really good loved the ending - julian |
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I loveeeeeeee this poem, its touching and deep! - kailee |
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I had to read a poem to my sixth grade class and I read this poem aloud while everyone else read silly things. I've loved this poem for the longest time and it has a very powerful meaning to me. It was the first poem I memorized word for word. I really appreciate Joseph Smith for writting such a beautiful work of art. - Carolann |
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Well spoke,great job on being yourself in the poem. - Cassie |
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I loved your poem. I dont know many teens who understand about life and depression the way you do. I wish that there were more people out there like you. - Amanda |
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OMG! THIS POEM IS THE BEST THING I'VE EVER READ! you go girl! - Bailey |
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I really like this poem. It really explained what really goes threw a persons mind if they're suicidal or just sad at that point. If you have anymore of these kinds of poems you should e-mail them to me - Susan |
