I Want To Know by Horace Whitfield
I want to know the you
That has not been introduced to anyone else.
I'm talking about the you
That you've been keeping to yourself.
I want to know your most recent fantasy -
You know, the one that just tickled your fancy.
I want to know each and every thought of me,
So I can lay back and contemplate bringing them to reality.
I want to know that spot
That seems to be under so much stress.
Because as a body physician, I have the answer -
It just needs to be caressed.
I want to know if that same spot
Was rubbed, licked and kissed,
Would your mind ponder
On what you could've missed.
I want to know what makes you happy,
What makes you sad,
What makes you sigh
And what makes you cry.
If I have to take a dive,
And explore the ocean floor,
I'll find out
And bring it back to shore.
I want to know,
That no matter what we're going through
Whether our lives are sunny or blue
I want to know - do I have a friend in you?
That has not been introduced to anyone else.
I'm talking about the you
That you've been keeping to yourself.
I want to know your most recent fantasy -
You know, the one that just tickled your fancy.
I want to know each and every thought of me,
So I can lay back and contemplate bringing them to reality.
I want to know that spot
That seems to be under so much stress.
Because as a body physician, I have the answer -
It just needs to be caressed.
I want to know if that same spot
Was rubbed, licked and kissed,
Would your mind ponder
On what you could've missed.
I want to know what makes you happy,
What makes you sad,
What makes you sigh
And what makes you cry.
If I have to take a dive,
And explore the ocean floor,
I'll find out
And bring it back to shore.
I want to know,
That no matter what we're going through
Whether our lives are sunny or blue
I want to know - do I have a friend in you?
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This poem ask the question many of us seek when we enter a relationship - whether it will be intimate or plutonic. It expresses my own inner thoughts, yet gives that special someone the opportunity to express theirs as well.
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I am persuing a special girl. I am serious about her. In my own mind she is the one for me, but she understandably says let's just be friends for now. These words of this poem say what I have been repeating to her for a month, but ineffectively --- at least I think so. But when I read this to her her response was an overwhelming positive. Now I feel I have hope. - Juan |
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This poem was great. I really liked it! Keep up the good work! - Tynette |
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dis poem was amazing, i related to it soo much! 1luv ~*Jessi*~ - Jessi |
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I LOVED THE POEM CAUSE IT FIT THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY SIGNIFICANT OTHER. - LA TASHA |
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Its Just has this feeling that you can agree with and feel. I mean it says so much for a short poem. It means so much i can really agree and feel the things in this poem. - Micky |
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that poem makes me think of this one person so much i have to say you wrough somthing really great i love it so much - jessica |
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I LIKE THIS POEM IT WAS REALLY GOOD IT MADE MY HEART SMILE IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE GREAT JOB KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP. - k |
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Great job that was so good - angela |
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This poems explains everything about friendship and lovers! Great poem! - Doug |
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This is a great poem. I can feel every word in this peice. I want to tell the creator thank you for putting my feelings into words. - Brian |
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I think that this poem is just great. I wanted to send this poem to my guy friend, but I do not think he is ready for this. Horace you did a great job and this poem is outstanding! - Serina |
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That poem was sweet! The author described wut he/she wanted to with specific details! It was a very nice poem. From a scale through 1 to 10 I give it a 10! - Sha Von |
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I was looking for a poem to send to a special someone I found this one and had to look no further. It broght me to tears thank-you! It's Perfect! - Lesly |
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very touching and straight to the point - Sharo |
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This is definately a poem that puts my feelings, which I haven't been able to yet put into words, right into the perfect words. I loved it! - Jenni |
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Hola! En verdad I like the poem, it's great..I love it! Take care and i'll read more poem's thans. - Fanny |
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This poem described how I feel about a very special person.I loved it. - Jodi |
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I really liked it. Wonderful :-) - Christopher |
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Words are used to communicate. Knowing how to put words together to express a complete thought is easy to do. But only the best of the best can put thoughts together to express the truth. Poets have a hard job to do, because they have to be sincere in order for their readers to enjoy their poetry. I enjoyed this poem not only because I have experience the feeling, but because it was well written and explained the poets thoughts in detail. - lucy |
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I really enjoy this poem. Made me moist! :-D No, really. It was very well written. - LaVenia |
