My Jonathan Seagull by Wisp
My dear friend....
You came into my life so unexpectedly..
Little did I know what was to lie ahead
For the longest time you were a click of a mouse, words on my screen
Hugs that warmed my days.. and secured my nights
Within the many hours of our private room,
You showed me strength, when I showed you my weaknesses.
You taught me the importance of believing in myself,
When I thought there was nothing to believe in
You taught me so much, in ways I never knew
You stood behind me when I began to fall.
Along side of me when I needed a friend
In front of me when I needed a guide
You showed me my ability to fly...
How to reach places I had only dreamed of
You saw me with your heart and not your eyes
But more importantly you gave me a piece of you
A gift worth far more than money could buy.
You gave me a floor to dance on..
A song in my heart that I finally understand the words to
And a peacefulness in my heart...where you will live forever..
I hope everyone finds a "YOU"
You came into my life so unexpectedly..
Little did I know what was to lie ahead
For the longest time you were a click of a mouse, words on my screen
Hugs that warmed my days.. and secured my nights
Within the many hours of our private room,
You showed me strength, when I showed you my weaknesses.
You taught me the importance of believing in myself,
When I thought there was nothing to believe in
You taught me so much, in ways I never knew
You stood behind me when I began to fall.
Along side of me when I needed a friend
In front of me when I needed a guide
You showed me my ability to fly...
How to reach places I had only dreamed of
You saw me with your heart and not your eyes
But more importantly you gave me a piece of you
A gift worth far more than money could buy.
You gave me a floor to dance on..
A song in my heart that I finally understand the words to
And a peacefulness in my heart...where you will live forever..
I hope everyone finds a "YOU"
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He who can teach someone to see a million miles with their feet planted firmly on the ground, surely deserves the honor of being called a friend. And that is exactly what he did..
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I too found a friend like this online. It is indeed a rare treasure. Only wish others felt this way too. Thank you, your poem touched me. - Gracie |
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VERY HEARTFELT - JADE |
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In my life, I have two of these people. They lead to me more richness and texture and compassion and love than I knew was even imaginable. And they ain't done! David - David |
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I just have no words for that wonderfully described poem! it's so touching and so emotional. All is so true n so real. - Sarah |
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My boyfriend Jeff, sent me this poem on reading it he thought of me with, I in turn he,it touched both of our hearts having previouly been internet friends. It perfectly sums in words our thoughts feelings and love for each other. We have both been blessed in finding a special 'YOU' with each other. - Noela |
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This is a wonderfully sweet poem. Thank you for sharing it. - Lisa |
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Thank you for putting into words the feelings I seem unable to express. I am looking forward to sharing this poem with my internet friend. - Linda |
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I just wanted to say this poem touched me because i found that too, and it really feels great don't it. - Toshsa |
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Very relative and deep to me. Nicely done, thank you. - Rummy |
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I have read the "Jonathan Seagull" story and its my heart. My way of undrestanding life. and. well the poems is good:D - janika |
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You said it, Wisp! Fantastic. You spoke better than I what so many of us have experienced through penpalships with folks we've 'met' on the Net. Thank you. Good poem - Diana |
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This is an awesome written poem. I loved it, put a smile on my face and held so much emotion. Good job Wisp. - bella |
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yr poem touched my heart coz it reminded me of a friend I met on the internet n this is quite nearly the same way that I feel for him. so cheers!n thanx for a good read - Niloufer |
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I almost began to cry, it so beautiful and had a lot of heart feeling! - Kris |
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its just unbeliveable! great work done by Wisp. you are speaking with your heart. - Rashida |
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JUST WANTED TO SAY YOU ARE VERY GOOD AT UR WORK. KEEP IT GOING. IT IS SUCH A WONERFULL POEM - VALENTIMA |
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Your lovely poem just about sums up my new friend Kittycat! - rej |
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I read your poem and I cried. I met this man on the internet and what you said in your poem is so true about him. He gave me his world and became my angel. I love him with all my heart and I am a happier, stronger, and more ooout going because of him. I could not of put it in word like you. I let himread the peom so know he knows how i feel. thank you. it is wonderful when you find that one you . - carri |
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Perfect, just perfect, exactly how i feel about one of my best friends - Ben |
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this poem truly describes how I feel about my friend ace, I couldnt have told him in any better way , than thru this poem, - Brenda |
