Promise by Jessica Sills
As you sit in silence,
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry.
When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done
If you need someone to talk to
I'll be the one.
If a close friend hurts you,
And you don't understand
Remember I'm here,
I'll lend a helping hand.
Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
And I just want you to know
I'm here for you.
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry.
When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done
If you need someone to talk to
I'll be the one.
If a close friend hurts you,
And you don't understand
Remember I'm here,
I'll lend a helping hand.
Burdens are lighter when carried by two,
And I just want you to know
I'm here for you.
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When Becky and I got into a fight, I got very upset. It just happened that the next day I was going to a church camp over the weekend with some of the teens in my Sunday school class.
Here I met another friend, Katie, who was having a different problem. We both connected with each other that weekend. She completely understood what was happening between Becky and I, and I completely understood what was going on Between her and Charlie.
We're best friends now, and we haven't said our mutual promise out loud. We don't need to.
Here I met another friend, Katie, who was having a different problem. We both connected with each other that weekend. She completely understood what was happening between Becky and I, and I completely understood what was going on Between her and Charlie.
We're best friends now, and we haven't said our mutual promise out loud. We don't need to.
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This is a great poem it tells the truth and it has happened to many teenagers and it could also happen to older people it has deffintly touched me it is amazing! - Emily |
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Thankyou so much for writing this poem! I have a friend at the moment whose fairly stressed and upset but doesn't want to talk. so i was searching for a poem to let her know i am here. yours is perfect. thankyou! - courtney |
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i gave this poem to my friend and even when times were bad and we were in fights she kept it because she knew that was my promise. - brandie |
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this is a great poem, i found it said so many things i feel ive often need to say thank you and keep up the good work - hannah |
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It is a very nice poem. I felt really touched. Reading this poem had reminded me how my best friend and I had broken due to my stupidity. Not being there for her when she needs me,never showed love,care and concern. - Nur |
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that's good,really good - Britt |
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Great job it had a lot of feel to it. - Iesha |
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this was awsome! i loved it! WHOOT! - Robbi |
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Great, touching, wonderful poem. I love it. - Jessica |
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This is great poem and it truly goes into the heart and soul of what a friendship needs. - Katrina |
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I loved this poem. I am about to graduate and I found this and gave it to my best friend. It is a wonderful poem. - Cathy |
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Dis is a great poem. me and my boyfriend was having problems and I got on line reading poems and I started reading yours and I had to print it out and call up my bestfriend Amanda and read it to her cuz its da same way I feel about her. cuz if it wasnt for her I dont think I would still be wit my man Andrew. But yea dis poem is wornderful, dont stop writing them cuz if ya can come up with a poem like dis, then girl you can come up with anything else you want to. well peace - Nichole |
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I liked, its nice. - lluvia |
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i like this poem!it is good! - holly |
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This poem is gr8 it was purfect 2 send to my mate when he was crushed it related exactly to waht had happned - Rach |
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i like this poem - alysia |
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I LOVE IT!It was so sad but true. - Cindy |
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I love this poem! It touched me i love it! Its like when I read it I remembered how I always tell my friends that! - Andrea |
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This was a relly good poem it really touched me. bryn 14 - bryn |
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At this point in time my best friend did something that was not right. she could have taken a different direction and she didn't and i sent her this poem and i hope that when she gets out of the hospital she can read it and she will understand why am here and who much i care for her. how much her friends care for her. - Juan |
