Something by Raquel
And so it came to be
this isolation that I am
I can only look to me
to find the way it all began -
this confusion, constant
hunger for something more than this
I strive to find this being
that I envision, yet seem to miss.
Could it be that I am empty-
or maybe a little lost?
Could it be that I am lonely,
or seek happiness at any cost?
This never-ending Something
that I am living deep inside,
depicts the illusion of myself
and all I have to hide.
this isolation that I am
I can only look to me
to find the way it all began -
this confusion, constant
hunger for something more than this
I strive to find this being
that I envision, yet seem to miss.
Could it be that I am empty-
or maybe a little lost?
Could it be that I am lonely,
or seek happiness at any cost?
This never-ending Something
that I am living deep inside,
depicts the illusion of myself
and all I have to hide.
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Rating: A- |
It is descriptive of the way I feel every day when I wake up.
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i loved ur poem i know wat u must be going through its exactly how i feel - margarita |
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Sometimes in life we have a moment of reflexion. this poem says it all. - Joao |
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This poem is great you identify all the feelings many youth like myself feel but are afraid to express. KEEP WRITING YOU HAVE A GIFT! - tyrenza |
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hey that is a good poem i kno how u feel - krista |
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I love this poems for the same reason it was wrote - Carol |
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this should get 10 votes cause it is goooooooooooooooooooood - larissa |
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This poems is very deep and shows clearly what one feels inside in true life. Most people can relate and this poems states the reality or the real world. - Leticia |
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This poem was great and I think it captured one of the biggest forms of depression. Personally, the kind I have been dealing with for 2 and a half years. - Rio |
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This was a great poem and it really touched me. I have felt like the poem for so many years. - Charles |
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ey gud poem n i hope u get rid of dat pain u wake up to everyday . be strong - ilona |
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This poem describes exactly how I feel every minute of every day. I have always had a hard time expressing how I feel in words and in writing, but this. is it. You did a great job of writing this poem. Thanks - Keri |
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Iloved the poem, it was deep and I think it really relates to everyone at one point or another. I now it really touched me. And I also want to say Rest in Peace Alyssa, I will miss you, and so will everyone who's ever met you - Hippie |
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Thank you for this poem. It touched my heart and soul. It seems as if you wote it for me. - Chris |
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this poem really touched me. it reminds me so much of myself, i do hide, and yet i dont know how to not - crystal |
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I relate to this poem a lot cause a lot of times I feel empty and Im searching to make me feel complete. - Kevin |
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This poem touched me. (I suffer from depserion. ) It made me feel like there are other people out there that feel the same way that I do. Keep on writing. - Brooke |
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the only thing i can say its deep and i kno the feeling - Raquel |
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That is a good poem - Amber |
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i like it. it say a lot. get same if u dont care. it would be niss maybe u could stay mailing people things like this if they r in to it like me. just and idel thats all well bye - julia |
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Well, this is a really good poem. I like it. :-) Keep up the good work!~! - Lorraine |
