Face of an Angel by Raven
To be striped of my virtue
To be striped of my pride
Casts a shadow over my being
That now makes me angry inside
I can't let this happen
I can't turn and run
I can't let the darkness block out the sun
To give in to hatred
To give in to fear
Stands against everything I know
And everything I hold dear
I will hold on to my love
And my passions with grace
And when I lose grip
I will picture your face
The face of an angel
That came to my side
To brighten my heart
And made the darkness subside
To be striped of my pride
Casts a shadow over my being
That now makes me angry inside
I can't let this happen
I can't turn and run
I can't let the darkness block out the sun
To give in to hatred
To give in to fear
Stands against everything I know
And everything I hold dear
I will hold on to my love
And my passions with grace
And when I lose grip
I will picture your face
The face of an angel
That came to my side
To brighten my heart
And made the darkness subside
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Sometimes things happen to you that almost rips apart the very thread of you being. I held on to sanity with the help of an angel.
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I think this poem is great, it expresses how you feel and when i read it i thought about many things that happened to me too, i really liked the fact you thought of an angel and that they helped you as it brought into action my faith in God, i have always belivevd in God and you brought that up to me again. God gave you the gift of poetry and i think you should use it fully. I thought it was great and that if you have any other poems like it you'll do great! - Aine |
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This was a very nice poem and i found it at a time when my best friend Mish needed to hear these words. thank you so very much - Elizabeth |
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Good Job that was an awesome poem - Jenni |
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wonderful poem. very good. i loved it - dianne |
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I really like that poem. I tells me any one could be an angle in the world. - Lyntricia |
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Your poem was excellent! - Costa |
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Sheesh. talk about getting goosebumps from a poem. Awesome work! - Johan |
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i have recently lost my two neices to drowing they were a twin only 31/2 years old this poem and site as helped me through a very hard time. - penny |
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I really like it cuz it reminds me of my anut amy that has past away this past jan. it has made my life a total mess. - vikki |
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very nice - Janie |
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i loved this so much....ive recently lost the love of my lif and this helped a bit....thanx! - mandi |
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i really do love this poem.its really beautiful and passionate. - Jezebel |
