Anticipation by Jackie Hattan
Candles burning
sheets turned down
anticipation abounds.
Time passes slowly
quiet as a mouse
stars falling
earth standing still.
Waiting
eternally waiting
suspense filled evening.
The phone rings
You say my name
come get me
I am here.
Passion explodes
excitement is in the air
soon you will be here.
Candles burning low
Sheets thrown down
Passion spent
Boytoy's in town.
sheets turned down
anticipation abounds.
Time passes slowly
quiet as a mouse
stars falling
earth standing still.
Waiting
eternally waiting
suspense filled evening.
The phone rings
You say my name
come get me
I am here.
Passion explodes
excitement is in the air
soon you will be here.
Candles burning low
Sheets thrown down
Passion spent
Boytoy's in town.
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For all the over-the-road truck drivers wives and girlfriends who have spent time waiting for them to come home, or anyone who spends large amounts of time till they see their special someone again. They will understand this poem.
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I found htis poem to be appropriate to send to my wife. I have been in Afghanistan for nearly six months and now am anticipating returning home soon. Thanks - Dean |
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I can so relate to this Poem, as my man is a Truckdriver, and i so Anticipate his return!. Bravo! - Lynda |
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i am in the army and frequently am away from my girl for long periods of time. I hope this is what she thinks while she awaits my return! - travis |
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hI i LOVED YOUR POEM AND OUT OF ALL THE THOUSANDS IT SEEMED i READ A DAY THIS ONE HIT HOME i ONLY TRANSPOSED TO SEE HOW MY HUSBAND FEELS AS i AM THE ONE THAT IS THE OVER THE ROAD DRIVER, THANKS FOR SHARING ITS GREAT! - TERESA |
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My husband is a captain on a boat. He is gone 20 days out of the month and only home 10. This poem says it all. - Susan |
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totally awesome - Denise |
