You're Leaving by Voiller Luxom
Hell will be heaven,
Misery will be fun,
War will be peace,
If that's what you wish...
I'm laughing when my mom is dying,
I'm laughing when my life is nothing,
I'm laughing when my eyes is bleeding,
But I'm crying when you are leaving....
Misery will be fun,
War will be peace,
If that's what you wish...
I'm laughing when my mom is dying,
I'm laughing when my life is nothing,
I'm laughing when my eyes is bleeding,
But I'm crying when you are leaving....
To my old friend, Autumn. I hope we will meet again.....
| It's. yea. I understand. I realy realy understand. - Understand Pain | |
| that is some hade core stuff! - kristy | |
| This is a poem I will give to my teacher Mrs. Manley because I'm crying cause she's leaving,retiring. I mean she's not that old. - Nika | |
| I THINK THE POEM IS REALLY CREATIVE. IT MAKES ALOT OF SENCE. I THINK THAT THERE SHOULD BE MORE POEMS LIKE THIS OUT THERE FOR PEOPLE TO READ, BECAUSE NO ALL POEMS ARE HAPPY AND JOYFUL. SOME POEMS HAVE A DEEPER DARKER MEANING TO THEM. - ALYSSA | |
| Ilove this poem, it touched something deep down which i cant figure out wot yet, but i love this its soooo kool. - Rus'T | |
| I love your poem, it expresses so much of what I'm feeling. Good job. - missy |
