Seek Not My Heart by Kit McCallum
Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?
Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?
Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?
Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.
It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.
It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.
No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?
Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?
Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?
Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.
It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.
It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.
No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.
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This poem is simply a mournful cry to the heavens, in search of the remnants of a broken heart.
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this poem completley touched my hert and souli just had a brakeup yesterday and poems are mt coaping skill. the author of this poem is a bangen writer and i hope ur poems lead to to a great start in life. thank you - nicole |
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this is really nice. it really spoke to me and the words flow so beautifully. (i'm making it my desktop. ) you should consider making poetry a major hobby-or maybe even a part-time career? keep it up! jc - J.C. |
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I really liked your poem. It's full of sadnees, I hope you find the missing pieces of your broken heart. Write more poems. - Vicky |
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Absolutely beautiful, sad. beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing your gift. - marci |
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i love this poem i really says what i'm feeling thanks - cindy |
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YEAH I LIKE THIZ POEM! - BETY |
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I love the thought you portrayed in this poem. I couldn't have said it better myself. Great job and the best of luck to future poems. - Michelle |
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You have touched me deeply and i thank you for it . xxx - david |
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The words are just truly refeclting the deep - can't say more than than Thank you ^-^ - Emilia |
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I can feel the emotions of this poem dripping of thw word, this was written well, and I liked it alot, it really reflected me a little ^^ lol. I'd say this is the best I've read so far - Jessica |
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Thius oem is simply great! I love your choice of word, and when i read i can picture. - Sara |
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Very good it touched me - Timothy |
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i really like this poem. im more into this type of poems. - Danielle |
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It shows how life changes and how we feel whebwe lose a friend. - Angel |
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I loved this poem. I myself have just lost a love to the continuing current of life and I know how it feels to be heart-broken. This poem put into words the way my heart feels. Thank you. - Hannah |
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im voting for this poem because it touched me so deeply that i almost cried - elizabeth |
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It's true as these words so say. Has not everyone been in this tremendous moment of life's one great sadness of the many? A very poignant piece. Thank you, poet, for these words. - kyna |
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Theese poems have really thouched me and riminded me about my past thank you, Chris - Christopher |
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I liked this poem alot. I liked how you used the unormal words and the ending was just touching. You have really inspired me to write. thanks - Janielle |
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Wow, this is a really nice piece of work. ^^ I love it to death, nice job! - Kristie |
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I love this poem cuz this is how i feel - Frances |
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its exactly how a felt after a moment in life happened. it has inspired me too write more poetry. it was intoxicateing and beautifully written. - autumn |
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I really liked how you wrote this poem. My heart has been torn for years and I have just recentley found love once again. I applaud your beautiful work. - Jayce |
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this is a poem that i can relate to and i know there are probably others that agree - Alyssa |
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the poem was very good i write some poetry to. - samantha |
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from 1 to 10 i give it a 10. its a great poem. - guillermo |
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that was awesome. it's one of the best poems i've ever read. i loved it. - ashlyn |
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Your poem is really good i thought it was it means soo much to some people! It did to me because i lost some one that was so close to me! Now we dont really talk any more like we use to when we were together an now i think about it an i read your poem it was cool! - Natisha |
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just brought tears to my eyes. - Patricia |
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This poem tocuched me because i can relate to it. Life has given me so many obstacles that i thought i could not go on. This poems is wonderful and I love it. - Moniquea |
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this is one of the better poems i have read in a long time - pam |
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I think this poem came from the depths of the writters soul. I believe this is a very good poem. Im just sorry that someone had to feel the pain that brought on this lovley piece of art - Leonie |
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wow this is such a good poem from scale of 1-10 i give it a 100 - briana |
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i lov all the love poems coz its really touch my heart. very romantic and hve much compassion - Norlyn |
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Well. I really liked this poem because at this very moment I'm lost in tears and becasue of this guy. I told him i liked him and he told me that he liked someone else and i asked him, just because that we already have a strong relationship. to notlet this come between us and he just left without a word and I'm not soo sure we're that good friends anymore and just think that this poem. Reading it . was like reading my emotions. and my emotions are soo far from happy that i don't think it's funny and i just thought you should know that. Sincerely, Sammy (what he calls me:Sammy) - Sammy |
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very beautiful poem very well done - ely |
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This is a very tuching poem, my boyfriend just cheated on me with my best friend and i just fell in love with the poem as soon as i read it. - Cassie |
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i loved your poem. it touched my heart. i just broke up wih this boy named justin. i couldn`t explain how i felt,but when i read this poem that is how i felt. i hope you will keep wrighting your poems. love,joey - joey |
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I loved this poem! The imagery is amazing. It takes me back to a time in the past when I felt just like this. - Andrea |
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For too long I've felt broken. This poem offers comfort via understanding where many of my friends failed. Well done! - Karina |
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It was great - Morgan |
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This is the best poem of a broken heart u can find! - Jean |
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this poam . says just how i felt when i parted from my love . it moved me alot - angelica |
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I liked it very much vicor - Victor Winston |
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This poet has amazing potencial - Christo |
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Wow is all i have to say. wow. you hit that dead on. - Jennifer |
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This is a touching poem. Hits my fallen heart. I hope you don't mind but I have posted it on myspace page. - Alana |
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This poem made me cry - Kati |
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great style of writing! - melissa |
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okay that=that was beautiful i geuss everyone has either lost a love and been broken after words or been so truly hurrt that nothing can ease them. - beth |
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This touched exactly what I'm feeling at this very moment. - Lucy |
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That was a Beautiful poem. I can realy relate. You are vary talented! Stick with it because that could be famous one day. - Amber |
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This poem gets right down to level that you would be in if you had your heartbroken by somone. It really depicts love in a very lovesick way or like being depressed over the loss of your lover. I myself have been heartbroken, there was a girl i liked and i still do. She has the face of an angel and she is so beautifual that she makes my heart melt, i love her so much. - joshua |
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this is a beautiful poem. - geetanjali |
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I think this is a really good poem. you must of put your heart and soul into this. It brings back memories to me when i was 6. Carla Age 14! - Carla |
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NICE - Oscar |
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very beautifully written . great insight into a broken heart . just when you think there are no words to describe a pain you are enduring someone captures it just as this author has! - Michelle |
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very poignant. it fully captures the meaning of the phrase " broken heart" and the author did it with very simple lines, great prose and magnificent rhyme. reminds me of this other classic poem " AD FINEM " written by an anonymous author. - cris |
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this is really good you should publish a whole bunch of your poems in a book they'd really sell! - jasmine |
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This poem is very good, it depicts sadness in a very poetic way. The rhyming is also very good, I feel the rhyming is not forced upon the poem but flows with the poem. - Jeff |
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Very lovely poem, it was extremely touching - Katie |
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I loved this poem! It is beautiful. - Ariel |
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i have voted this poems because it made me cry with sadness and it also made me remember parts of my family that have past away thanx you for letting me read this poem. - michelle |
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This really touches home. My heart is also torn apart. Everyone say's, "you'll be ok it just take time". How does the love you have for someone ever go away? - andrea |
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I just want to say this poem was so beautiful and i think it is great that somebody can write a poem people including myself can relate to - Ashley |
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Wow! This was probably not what I needed to read shortly after my marriage of 13 years ended, but it is so moving and powerful. so much emotion. I think it is great. - Ron |
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My heart is numb from depression and now hurt by a lost love. This poem moved my numb heart to feel and dry eyes to tears. thank you kit. - shufeng |
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i really like this bacome it is like the way me and my boyfriend is. - Ashley |
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It was awesome. I'm a poet myself and I've never heared a better poem, not even from my teacher!:) - Troy |
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This poem is beautiful just beautiful. I loved the flow that was used. - Adam |
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this was an awesome poem keep up the excelente writing - jessica |
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one of the best poems I have read in many years, keep up the good work - pam |
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This poem is amazing. It touches me axactly where it hurts. Its beautiful. - James |
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Good job! - Callie |
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This poem is sooo good. This poem touched me. Good job! - Cassy |
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This was a very touching poem i love your sense of words. - Tiffany |
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I can only tear up when i read this poem - Clara |
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i loved this poem and i think that i can realate to it! - cayla |
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you did very good i like keep it up - ecidnac |
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Breathe taking, beautiful and spectacularly eerie! I loved the imagery. - Tara Lynn |
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I loved it. - Titania |
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that was so pretty and you really know what to say so keep up your good work in writing poems and you may go somewhere far. - Kendra |
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I know exactly what you mean. - Raquel |
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your gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood - Amal |
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Are you absolutely SURE that you are not related to Shakespeare? - Michelle |
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You have got something special in WORDS---GO-GO SEND THIS IN TO EVERY SITE!SEND YOUR EMOTION & That emotion will set ya free! PLEASE take time and touch hearts, as ya did mine! Thank you SO MUCH! - melissa |
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this is a great poem, it touched my heart and it made me cry. - marie |
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It is a great poem, it touching and inspiring. Love it! - Juan |
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effective - Raven |
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it`s all about love :) :( - bylly |
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This is a formidable description of how it feels in a one-sided love situation! - kirsten |
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love your poem - zerokull |
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GREAT! - Sexy |
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Oh! This inspiringful sad poem is well-written and I love the descriptions! Great job on writing your own poetry! `C - Candy |
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really good poem made me get tears in my eyes reading it - Samantha |
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As soon as I read the first couple lines of this poem I just felt like crying. I am a poet myself and I just recently lost someone I loved very much and yet I could not find the words to explain how I felt about it, but this poem says everything it needs to and so much more and it honestly touched my heart! Thank You! - Ashley |
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I think this poem is great. I myself write poetry and I think this is by far one of the best I've read in a long time. I love the style and the message. It's really a great poem all around. - Brittany |
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this poem was so good and you have a really good thing going with poetry. - grim |
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this tuched me so i almost started to cry - cloe |
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I love this poem. - Pamala |
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this poem is really good i liked it because i feel the same way i have had so many experiences that have made me feel this way and this poem shows me im not alone in my pain sometimes. - ashleigh |
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this is really good and i can relate 2 it - kim |
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I LOVE THIS POEM! - Yessie |
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This was deep, moving, heartfelt poem of loss and how this person has reached deep within his soul and found his/hers poet, and how he grieves, oh yes, grieves over his lost love and whith it, his soul was torn apart. I absolutely love how you made it informal -- it gave it more profound meaning, more passionate and as if it was this person's thoughts. You've artistly managed to reach into the well of feelings, otherwise known as emotion memory, and explored the emotion of love and how it is when loosing it again. It's a terrible feeling, as if you're, as you said, torn to pieces and want's nothing but to grief. You feel like you belong in a crooked world, a crooked world of unjustice. This is my favourite poem, and I think you can manage to write whatever challenge there is because you've reached the emotion memory stage in writing, and that's when the feelings get coloured, deep, three-dimensional and real. The prose is excellent; vivid, fluent, easy and lyrical. The rhythm beats with the emotions of the character, moving with the sad beat of an elegy. Keep writing poems, for I see talent in you, great talent that shouldn't be spent to waste. Indeed, I think you can be a proffesional. - gunnar Andre |
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This poem is awesome. It too is also one of the greatest poem's I've ever read. This author has great talent and deserves alot of recognition. - Lori |
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From one to ten, I'd rate this poem ten. This poem has touched me, greatly. Lately I have doubts about God and depend on anything, but God, to make me feel better, but it just seems nothing helps. I've tried writing my feelings in a poem and well, this has taken it's place. It's written my feelings so much clearer and it's better written. I want to thank you, I think about this poem, and it makes me realize that I should depend on God and there is nothing to doubt. This poem has put my faith back in God. Thank you. - Emily |
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This poem expressed the bereftness of lost love as perfectly as I've ever seen. I can't stop crying, after reading it half a dozen times! To me, it speaks of a very real love, lost through tragic means of one kind or another. a healthy, wholesome love that should not have had to be lost. Elegantly tragic. Or tragically elegant. Thank you so much, to the author. - Felicity |
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i think that was really good it really got to me and im a boy and im 13 - neil |
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I'm not good a poetry none the less of sounding smart. baiclly I'm leaving this comment telling you your poem was unbelivable. Please continue to write! - Kat |
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Beautifully put. a heart broken i s like death itself. - d |
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These words reflect my broken heart. Thank you, the words of this poem helped me. - William |
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Very beautiful, great work. Love it. I could feel the words. - Sherry |
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it made me cry and made me feel something deep inside my heart. it made me remember the special moments i shared once - nimmy |
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loved it - kim |
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your poem is one of the best poem ive read. Full of emotions, i can relate to it! - samantha |
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that poem was amazing. i love it. - Alyssa |
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really really good poem - megan |
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I'm a Chinese. i like you poems,but my english very bad, just this,haha. - kent |
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I give this poem a 10! It's beautiful and nice. It sounds like something i would write. - natalie |
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That was great just what i was looking for thank you - Brandi |
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This poem is tyte. not only expressing the heartache of relationships but so much deeper than that. the pain of life, the heartache of lonliness. it was very deep and i respect it alot. you got some talent. - shawna |
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You poem is very beautiful. It has deep meaning and is capable of bringing a tear to people's eyes. Kudos to you - Richard |
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This poem I read has touch my heart because my life going corrupt. It move me in the fact that I could relate to it. - Jesus |
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this poem is really good it took me away and i could feel what the author was saying if you read this poem you will love it i know i did - krissy |
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This poem has touched me more than I'd like to admit. My own sad story is spinning around in my head, and somehow you have brought a little beauty to my own broken heart. Well Done! - Robert |
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This Poem struck a chord in me, i am going through a break up of my marriage, and she is out with others, it was painful and it helped me to cry like i needed to. thanks - Rob |
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This is 1 of the best poems I've ever read. - Sarah |
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~beautiful, deep. - michelle |
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This poem is excellent. From experience I can confidently say it describes well the agony of a broken heart. Despite the beauty and blessing around someone, the weakening pain remains strong. Seek Not My Heart is a beautiful and inspired work of literature. - Waellzly |
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this poem really touched me - kiwi |
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This poem is really nice and you can feel the emotion that the author has put behind their words. - Jennifer |
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wow. let me know if u write any more poems. that was really good! - prfnt |
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this poem was very good infact one of the best yet - shaylee |
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i lov tis poem really reflects on my feelings ^^ - Chrislin |
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THIS POEM IS GREAT - FANTASEE |
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hey i love this poem, When i first read it it completely related 2 what ive been going through at the moment and i think kit is amazing at writing! thankyou i love this poem sooo much x x x - lydia |
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this poem is great! - missy |
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Oh my how estoteric and beautiful ! I give it a 10 on a scale of 1-10, I loved the use of old English. - Maags |
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your poem is one of the best poems i hav ever read and i hav read a few. it really touched me and u should be proud - fire fly |
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beautiful - Teena |
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wow. I was moved to tears by this poem. Absolutely awesome. - Jody |
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this poem is really touching and found a way to reach my heart broken soul. - elle |
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OMG THAT POEM GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS! I LOVE IT! IT WAS SO DEEP AND HEARTFELT! YOU REALLY PUT YOUR HEART AND SOUL INTO THIS! KEEP IT UP! - Taylor |
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wow! this poem was sooo good! i absolutely loved it - Kori |
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i love the poems all of them ya r real poets love ya work:) - alysia |
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That poem is WOW. ITs beautiful. ^_^ - Ingrid |
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the poem did an excelent job on explain heartbreak when heartbreak cant be explained in words. - kerrie |
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nice poem i can really relate - SHATARI |
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It had the feeling that was ment to be given. :) - Stephanie |
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I loved your poem. It was so touching I almost cry. I believe someday you could be a great writer. - sammi |
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an outstanding poem, sinks deep into the heart and mind. - Jacob |
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Beautiful. This was. i cant describe it. i know ive felt the exact same as that a few more times than once. You always have my applause because thats the most beautiful thing i have ever seen in my life. - Andrais |
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This poem really touhed me and I would like to thank you for displaying it! You saved my life! - Natalie |
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I love this poem. The language was awesome and the theme was kept perfectly throughout. This poem was touching and I could read it a thousand times. - Kyle |
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VERY NICE - Lillian |
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I loved this poem, it truely is an exceptional piece of creative artistic ability. - theresa |
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Very, Very, beautiful poem. the wording was perfect and made me picture her feelings completely. Go Girl. =) - Lucy |
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I absolutely loved your poem. It really touched me and it was impressive. - Karen |
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This captured exactly what I feel. - Arlett |
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wonderful - lil g |
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God, this poem is beautiful. It symbolizes everything i'm feeling right now. You have an amazing way with words. - Adrienne |
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This poem is really good! It just tore me apart reading it! It's great. good work !=)=) - Kaylee |
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Dear Kit Hi :) I just want to say reading your poem 'Seek Not My Heart' was very validating. Many individuals who have loved and lost someone very near to them either by choice, death or a break up has felt this type of sorrow and your poetry captures this. Keep it up you have a gift. Many blessings sent your way. - Christine |
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wonderful poem. so touching. it's simply the mirror of my thoughts and emotions - mallow |
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you just described my feelings in a more subtle way - cathy |
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this was a heartfelt poem full of emotion and i luved it!:) - amber |
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this was a very good poem it reminds me of me and my x-boyfriend thank you. you did very good. - tasha |
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This poem put me in the mind state of poetry that was written hundreds of years ago but the language was not something that I could not understand. Beautifully written and it conveyed the perfect thought of loneliness. Job well done. - Kiana |
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I have re-read your poem a thousand times and it fits so well with my own broken dreams, broken heart. I truly believe your an angel sent to me to dry my tears within the words of your beauitful poem. Thank you so much! - Trisha |
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it was really toching - noelle |
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Strong - Arno |
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it's really touching and well written,it spoke to me. - Belle' |
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THIS POEM WAS SO TOUCHING I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY ON A SCALE FROM 1-10 YOU SHOULD GET 15 :) - JaZmInE |
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That was such an awesome poem. All the words really meant something in a deep way. I love your style of writing. it really makes you think. - Ashley |
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it was great - k |
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I really love your poem it touched me in a way I thought no poem could it touched me because thats the way i feel everyday. thank you for writing it! - Shalee |
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This is a brilliant poem that has touched me! You are a good poet Kit McCallum keep at it! - jess |
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I absolutely loved this poem. My boyfriend actually showed this poem to me and told me he did a presentation on it in school last year, and I nearly cried. It's an incredibly powerful poem with a lot of obvious meaning, yet hidden meaning you have to search for as well. A very well written poem after all. - Kat |
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i thought that was wonderful it reallly captures the essense of havin ure hart broken ,trust me id kno it was the perfect feelings ,gud job xxbeexx - bianca |
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this poem blew me away. Not only could i relate but the mood that it set and the place that it put me was unbelievable. i have never read a poem that i could read so many times and have the same feeling. Everytime i read it, it's like the first time. wow - Reina |
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That was so so good - jessy |
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This was a tremendously graceful poem. It was worded very well. - Jennifer |
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This is a really good poem!I am rating it as a 5 - Chelsea |
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this is such a beutiful poem! please continue to write them! you have talent. - keeba |
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Touching - Ina |
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It was truely amazing. Well written and straight to the heart. Great job writer. - Nati |
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The poem touched me because my heart has been broken a lot,and sometimes it feels as if I don't have a heart at all. - Amberlee |
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Really good. I sent it to a lost Love. And hoping. - Rick |
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wow this made me cry it just touched me and made me realise i am not the only one hurting thank you so so so so much you have a amazing talent thank you! - lucy-anne |
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WOW U ROCK! i loved the poem, its amazing. Everything is true, theres so much put into it, i give u props on putting it out there for everyone to see, again ITS SOO GOOD! - Cait |
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the poet expresses his feelings like a mirror. without doubt it touches me to the core. - eloni |
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that is awesome, i love how you usd nature in it! well done! - Hannah |
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"SEEK NOT MY HEART" . was truely one of the best poems I`ve ever read. (and believe me I`ve read thousand and thousands)This poem was straight from the heart and conveyed the depth of their pain so beautifully. ONE COULDN`T HELP ON READING THIS TO BREATHE A SIGH AND SAY"YES, i`VE BEEN THERE AND THAT`S EXCATLY HOW i FELT. ". - Eileen |
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This is 100% how I feel. I have been hurt before and will be hurt again. Time will heal me I'm sure, but while I mourn this is a very satisfying poem to have with me. Thank you. - Naomi |
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I am not really into poems much, but i really liked this one, i cant explain it! - frank |
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omg that poem was sooooooo good. ilove reading poems but im not to flash at writing them, i like to move people tho so i write storys, - sarah |
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This poem has really touched my heart b/c my fiance just broke up with me and my heart is torn into a million pieces, we still love each other but maybe it was for the best. - Katie |
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This poem evokes great emotion and is something- i'm sure- many people can identify with. It reminds me of a Piece from Romeo and Juliet (Baz Lurman's version) and should be accompanied by the music of Desree's song, "missing you. " It is INSPIRATIONAL and AMASING! THANKYOU! - Damlyn-Boston |
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i loved it - SYDNEY |
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I loved it so much think you for writing it! I can write good poems but, that was amazing, excellant,and inspirational to me. - Laurene |
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The poem really touched my heart. It's amazing to come up with such a sentimental poem. BRAVO! - Robert |
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ilike it alot it make me want to become a poet too. LOVE IT - andre |
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I really feel attached to this masterpiece of poetry. really good work - Markus |
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i don't know but thats how i felt when 1 i thought was my true love broke up with me and i never thought about writing a poem about it she did a really really good job! - Jannea |
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It is very beautiful and it touches my heart - kriselda mae |
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i loved it, your poem was fantastic. it put my gave me a feeling i cannot name but made em feel better just the same. we all wish we are not alone, even in our sorrow we wish for a another to beside us moan. from one to 10 i say its an 8 for it gave deeply identified with my heart ache. - jay |
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This is the best poem I have read on this site. It is very touching. The silent cries is a reflection of our daily lives when it comes to love and how it can hurt! big ups to the poet:) - Sandra |
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That Poem. Was So Beautiful And I Loved It Even More Because. Its What Im Feeling Right Now. I Can Relate To It So Much. Nice Job Kit McCallum, Nice Job - Amanda |
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this is absolutly moving, & heart felt! it captures the pain remarkably, i hope you continue to right,cause you are truly blessed with a way with words! bless you always naomi - naomi |
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MY GOSH!IT PIERCED MY HEART! SO OVERWHELMING INDEED! - Annie |
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this poem was really good it really touched me! - carol |
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i love this poem! - stephanie |
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Your poam is very beutiful and soulful many peaple has had at least one broken hart and i can relate - misty |
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your poem is very powerful i was reading in computer class and i started to bawl my eyes out. i honestly know how you feel i just lost my boyfreind of two years but your poem is completly touching! - Cassandra |
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That poems was one of the most amazing poems I have ever read in my life I idol you - Josh |
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This was so close to my heart. - Mona |
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this was a real real good poem, good job - Ques |
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I can say it's touching. Well, it's because I've just been to pains. The heartaches is still fresh. And, I never expect my ex to have someone right away. Which is said, that they're living together now. This poem really touched me soooo. - Ma. Theresa |
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WOW! When I read you poem it made my jaw drop in awe. - Heather |
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That was incredible, it humbles all my futile attempts at poetry. That's the best poem I've ever read. - j |
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I REALLY LIKED ALL THE POEMS I READ AND I THINK THEY SHOULD WRITE MORE, - DREW |
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This poem is true and full of emotion I truly wept for your pain. live on and thankyou for touching my heart. - RaShell |
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The pome is very true! - Amy |
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this poem I can really relate to alot it really tpouched my heart - Sha |
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This poem is the best of sorrow and pain i read it it changed the way i feel thank you - red |
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Splendid poem. Obviously written by somebody who knows what heartbreak is. - C |
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I related to this poem for many reasons. It was a good read and spoke many a true word for people suffering from heart break - Vicky |
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EXCELLENT POEM - jessica |
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this peom it tuoch ed my heart and im a person that stuff dont do the very affton keep it kool and stay in life no matter what. im a poetry person well laterz sunni - sunni |
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i really lk ure poem. is really tight. i bet ya it touches alot of peoples heart. but most it touches mine ;) - Me |
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WOW, this has touched me deap. I trie so hard to explain how i feel. its been a little more than a month since i lost my girlfriend and i feel so lost and confused but this poem; wow. its awesome. - Steven |
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what a wonderful poem for me to read today--sometimes its hard for me to put my pain into words--thanks for doing that for me. - helga |
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this poem really touches me. what a masterpiece. - jaq |
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wow that was great i love to look at all these great poems and see who i can relate to and yours is one of the best i feel the same but you gotta keep going - Sarah |
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omg, ur poem is so good!thanks for putting how ive felt all along into words. - Becca |
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It's quite moving:) - anne |
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Very beautiful and exactly how I felt at the time I read it. Something happened that hurt me more than anything ever had. It helps to see your feelings in the form of words. - Suzanne |
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it was very good poem and i thought that it was very deep into the meaning of the poem "very good" - ashley |
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Very deep, very touching. Well expressed. Two thumbs up! - Tam |
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im sat here crying . knowing ive jush lost the love of my life n yor poem jush summed up how i feel such bewtiful use of words. truly wonderful poem - lily |
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This is a great poem i wished all mine sounded this good. - Elissa |
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AWESOME! Kit, you're an absolute natural. I can't even begin to express the feelings this poem evoked in me. I was truly touched by the power of your words. Please keep writing--you definately have a gift! - Ann |
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Its amazing. It has shaken my soul and got tears in my eyes. Read something like this after a long time. May God give happiness to all. - Gaurav |
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I really loved this poem I can really realate to this person. I feel as though I can never be loved. after such an event has happend as this. I shall never have the peacefull love. for it will always be filled with dought! as you said why should you seek out the mornfull heart! all you'll find is grief! - nicole |
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Great poem, i have written quite a few myself, but what i have written I don't think would ever match up to this poem. It really speaks out for how I feel now, especially the last two lines, No gentle winds, seek not my heart, For simply . it has torn apart. It's almost true. Great job, but how i wish, they were under a not so sorrow atmosphere - Lee |
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this is very goodand touching. - erica |
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The beauty of this poem touches me in the deepest way. I would like to hear some more of your pieces! - Eric |
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I am 14 years old and I love to write poems/stories and this poem is very excusite with its deepness and compassion. I love it! Way to go! - Brianna |
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this poem expresses how it feels to have a broken heart. i was so close to tears when i finished reading it! - kim |
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I love this. I can so totally relate to it! - Elise |
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I love your poem! It made me want to break down and cry cuz i feel the same! Write on you amazing poet! - Crystal |
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I loved it, it not only sounds good, goes well together but it can compare to life. It touches my soul and fills my eyes. It was beautiful. - Crystal |
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omg! this is one of the best poems ive ever read. keep up the good work!+ - Sam |
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So beautiful and so touching. thanks so much for this poem. - Tasnuba |
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i can relate to you feeling. that was wonderful. brought tears to my eyes - Amy |
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Simply touched my heart. no word to say how i felt while reading it - shekhar |
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I really enjoyed it. You have amazing talent. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep up the excellent work hun. *Huggles* - Nicole |
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It was the most moving thing i have ever read. It really did touch my heart - Danielle |
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I loved this poem because it expresses so many of the feelings that have found me lately. It's really inspirational for a poet like myself to read other people's writing because it makes you want to get in touch with the most honest feelings in your soul. Thank you so much. - Aubrey |
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Hey this poem was to rad it touched me! it was really cool hehe - Naomi |
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Lovely, you got it, puting beautiful words just like a song. song from the heart. - MTh. |
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WOW! this is the best poem I heard all night. It makes me feel unset and heart broken. This is a trutly thoughting poem, keep up the good work. - Tunisia |
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good poem - Maria |
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BEAUTIFUL. I am there, still after 6 years - steph |
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This is a poem for anyone that has been hurt by a loved one. Most people know what it is to feel as though their heart has been torn apart, and this poem describes it so vividly, and so touchingly, i just want to cry everytime that i read it! It is problem one of my favourite poems ever. - Jessica |
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this poem was awesome its like totally what im going threw and ever thing so i just wanted to writer to know that you are great and never stop what you do because its great - erin |
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I LOVED IT! - Joan |
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i dont know why but for some reason it made me cry and ona scale of 1 bad 10 good i give u a 10 - kimmy |
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I love this poem. It puts into words the way my heart feels. My boyfriend and i broke up about a month ago and i've tried to get him back but he doesn't want me, even after i tried for months to make us better, he was just out for himself and what suited him. I was just left to wait around until he "had time". I say this because he NEVER made time for me after the 5th month. Before that, he was great but i guess he just got tired of me and didn't bother to tell me to my face. - Brooke |
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This is a very special poem. It is awesome. - Angie |
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This is a good poem because it describes exactly how you feel when someone walks all over you,it's as though no one can see that your dieing from the inside - out-*me* - ashley |
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Your poem is very heart-touching. I can't think of a word to describe. I love poems - Halima |
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I hope you don't feel that way, Kit. No matter how many heartbreaks you have in your life, it is worth every minute of it, even though you feel like you are being torn apart. It is a great poem and I wish you the best of luck. - Albi |
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This pome has a touch of delight and a whole lot of sorrow. I was touched and delighted by your sorrow. You shold be greatful for your talent. THANKS - Jamie |
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I loved this poem. My friend recieved some very bad news about someone she liked a lot the night I read this, and it was fate that brought me to this poem. It is truly a moving piece. - Shelley |
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Your poem is so beautifully eloquent, you truly have a gift for touching people. - Kristie |
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This poem is great it touches me in so many ways - kim |
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This is one of the best poems I ever read! - Anonymous |
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this poem was very cool. it almost made me want to cry i didn't know just how to exlpain it. it remindes me of my old lover we were going to get married but we were separated. i miss him much and this poem just reminds me of what all i went through it is very beautiful and touching. - stephanie |
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Its touching in an unexplainable way. - Jesi |
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This is a remarkable poem and it describe's everything i feel when i'm in doubt with a relationship. #1 - Megan |
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This poem really touches me. I love it! - Deana |
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Your poem is too perfect to spoil with heavy hearted words. So I just want to say thank you for writing this beautiful poem, it is unconditional in it's beauty and perfection and is undoubtedly my favorite poem of all the poems I have read all my life. It truly touched my heart and is so wonderfull. *l* - Heather |
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I suppose I will not be overgeneralizing if I said everyone has have their heart broken, and can relate to your poem. Your poem, nonehtheless, is heartfelt and touching. - Ash |
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Very well written. Very touching. It gave me goosebumps and provolked the kind of thought and emotion found in only the best of poems. Truly a masterpiece worthy of publication and a part of history. - Barbie |
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I have read all of your poems and I think this is your most beautiful and talented poem yet. I think it is truly a magnificient piece of art. - Melanie |
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I noe wat that poem means i had a abuseve b/f and i didnt wanna get out of it b/c i loved him alot but he took it 2 far and now hes in his on grave - kristina |
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This poem mirrors exactly what I am feelin lately. For you who was able to put words into this kind of feeling. thank you. In a way, your poem lessens the pain i feel. - synthyche |
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I loved that poem because it said how I feel right now. besides my own poetry this poem says how I feel. - karen |
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OMG i looooooooooooved that poem! It was so deep and thoughtful. I can't wait to see more of your work! - Autumn |
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oh my gosh, that was an awesome poem. It killed me. That was so articulate and it flowed with grace - Lauren |
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My heart felt heavy My eyes filled with tears I felt the long time pain of past heartbreaks I love it - S |
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Thank you so much, Kit, for writing this beautiful piece of work! I've read many poems on this site and none of them are as touching as this! God has blessed you with an amazeing talet! - Hollie |
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touched my soul,i also have felt this way when i and my loved one were split up for three years i felt the pain in the poem ,by a miracle we have gotten back together,i thank god ,now i am so happy,it's a very moving poem,thank you - Diane |
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This Poem To Me Was So Moving And Touching . I Myself Also Write Poems But This Was Just Well It Just Blew Me Away. Great! - Emma |
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Very few things make my eyes tear up, my heart tighten up, and my lungs let out a sigh. Kit McCallums poem has this triple threat of writing, for which I thank, as it is a reminder to me that I am alive, and with feeling. Thank You. - Javier |
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BEAutiFUL luved luved it u have real good use of words and I never rly got howta make a poem sad and beatiful at the same time At a personal opinion i think ur great and should keep on writing!; ) - Silver Tears |
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I have read many poems before, but yours stands out amongst the crowd. You are fantastic, made me cry, and I think you are one of the most talented poets to write something so heartfelt, yet so innocent and sincere. Congrats, it was wonderful! - Hayley |
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Nice Poem, Keep up the good work. I am also a writer. - Monique |
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i think that this poem is very good. i like how she used the words and its very meaningful. - Tiffany |
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I THOUGHT THAT IS WAS A WONDERFUL POEM KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MAYBE ONE DAY YOU WILL BECOME A FAMOUS WRITER. - AMANDA |
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this is the best poem ever! - ryan |
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I love your poem. it really is great! - Ashley |
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i love this poem i describes everything i feel at this moment it helped me when i read it thanks - Bryan |
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I think this poem speaks for itself. Many people feel this way and you expressed it perfectly. - Heather |
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Simply. beautiful. - Julie |
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this poem was excellent. it very rare that u find sumthin that relates so much to u. it was excellent. keep it up - natalie |
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GREAT POEM! AS I SAT AND READ THIS , I COULD FEEL YOUR PAIN AND SADDNESS EVERY STEP OF THE WAY. GREAT JOB. - Shannon |
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Oh my god I coud really relate to your poem a lot! It really touched me inside. It reminded me of the time a guy told me it was over and I was heart broken! Keep up the good work! - Jen |
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Elegant. I love the way the author constructs the lines of thought. It's unconventional, but reads very well and, somehow, gives it a different feel (try reading it with the "you" in front of the "do not"). Great poem and I, as I'm sure lots of us, can really relate. - Michael |
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Do not you hear my words of praise Responding to your sad malaise? Do not you feel you touched me true? And thus, I cast my vote for you. Thank you for your poem, it was brilliantly beautiful! - Brian |
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I simply loved this poem. It is really well written and it says so much. Great job! - TRISH |
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I honestly can say that your subcontios contrast with the changing sky and stars is the glue that relates and intertwines this poem to Love. Great poem and thank you for sharing it. - Randy |
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you go boy your poem is of the chains it really touched me, i want you to keep up the GREAT job your doing and i encourge you to DON'T GIVE UP NEVER! it really was a touching poem. I LOVE IT! - alycia |
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This poem is so inspiring. And it has really made me think about everything a little harder. You are a great poet. KEEP IT UP! - Paige |
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O my that was good! I loved it! Keep writing! - Melissa |
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I like this poem cuz i love this guy soooo very much, but he HATES me! And even though this poem is confusing it shows all the pain that i feel EVERYDAY OF MY LIFE! And i didn't know how to express myself and you did it 4 me. Thanks - Kayla |
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It's a wonderful poem. I hope to see more of your work soon. - Char |
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This is a AwSoMe poem that i think alot of people can relate to and understansd Good Work keep it up - Markie |
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This is a very good poem! Keep up the good work! =) - Poetic |
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A truly beautiful poem. I can relate so well! The author obviously poured their heart out. Thank you. - Ann |
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I love the way the poem rhymes. This is one of my favs. on this site. - crystal |
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i just wont to say thanks for these good poems so i know there are more people out there haveing to go trou the same stuff i have to say thanks for the good poem - zach |
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All I have to say is: BEAUTIFUL - Michaela |
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This poem is wonderful but yet sad at the same time,i know how Kit McCallum feels cause ive been broken hearted before and since then i havent been with someone isnt that sad? - LoNeLy OnE |
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I like how similies were used in this poem it made me feel the poem a lot better. - Cope |
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This poem touched me in such a way that is hard to explain. It was almost as if this person read my mind. Thank you - jackie |
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Very beautifully done. You depiction of real life scenery with emotions is absolutely fantastic. - Chris |
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i love the poem so much! its soooo touching. - carmela |
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o my god,i hope this poet realizes what a beautiful talent she has. i have never read anything that decribtive and perfect in my life. i am in awe. - Maeve |
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Woot! I'm not one for lengthy expressions of enjoyment, so that will do it. - Myranda |
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I loved this poem as my heart is also shattered and broken :'( - Louise |
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OH MY GOD! I REALLY LOVED IT. I wish some guy could write me like that, I like literally had tears running down my cheeks. Keep up the good work, and create more of these poetic stuff. - Elizabeth |
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i liked it! - Kyle |
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Coolest Poem I have ever heard. Great work Well done. Keep it up! - Shameez |
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That poem was beutiful every feeling u felt in that poem I can feel. I can totally relate to u. - Shorty |
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WOW! Thats is so beautiful and touching i felt a tear run down my cheek! That is truely a wonderful poem! I love it! Keep up the beautiful work - AliAngel |
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this poem was da best! i can relate to it too. - katrina |
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its beautiful - sonja |
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this peom is very fantastic and so are alot more but i want my poems to be like that too so i hope any of you poem writers have advice thanks bye - Amanda |
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I love this, and I think that what you write, everyone can relate to. It was very beautiful, and I'm glad that you shared it with the world. - Eric |
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beuitfull poem i sent it to a friend and i thank you for letting me use it - Mona |
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beautiful poem. really touched my heart. which is as well broken and shattered - ankur |
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I love this poem. It is so beautiful. It mix nature and the feeling of lost love together so perfectly that it is amazing. This is outstanding poetry. - Thuy |
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This is a great poem! - Elizabeth |
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wow this poem totally touched me! - Bejaze Beth |
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This is such a wonderful poem. The writing is exquisit, and the emotion so strong. You brought tears to my eyes. I wish you luck and a way to mend your broken heart. - chrysty |
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I really loved your poem. It reminds me of this guy I love and i lost him because of alot of upsetting reasons. Your poem says all I couldn't. Thanks for writing something so real and true. - Michelle |
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This poem was sutnning, the way the poet asked questions, simply wonderful. It touched my heart, my soul. - Afra |
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this poem is awesome! i love it! this is extremely good! - candie |
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I really enjoye this poem. This is the first catching piece of poetry I've heard in a very long time. It really struck my attention and I felt as though I were the person describing each heart-felt experience in the poem. - LaToyia |
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Beautiful poem. ^-^ - Lizzie |
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It was very touching and I felt like I could feel your pain speaking to me through the words, it's a very deep and special piece of art and I really enjoyed it! - Mandie |
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nice poem!very deep - Gladys |
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This is one of the best poems i've ever read, and i really can relate to it! Kudos to ya! - dreamerz |
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Simply Excellent. Its these poems that help people get over relationships easier because then they know someone else is going through the same thing! - Katie |
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Oh, Stunning work! Mavelous! Simply wonderful! That is DEFINITLY the best poem I have ever read and I have read lots of wonderful poems. - Katharine |
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I loved it. 1 of the best i've ever read. You are a genious. - Yuske_Boy |
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These words are very true, I wish my ex-boyfriend cared enough that I could send it to him. To let him know how much life hurts without him. - Debbie |
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I have no words, Onlt tears - lisa |
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perfect. it describes exactly how i feel now. why is love so painful and tearful? it really tears my heart apart - Howie |
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THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST HEARTFELT POEMS I HAVE READ. I COULD CRY, SERIOUSLY. - CRYSTAL |
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This poem is beautiful. I absolutely loved it. - Lela |
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Bravo. Touching. Simple and sweet. Bravo. - Serene |
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Your poem is truly beautiful! - Shavon |
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I LOVED this poem. I felt so moved, it really touched my heart. Kit, please keep writing, I want to read more beautiful poetry! - R.E.L |
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very well written. anyone that has ever lost someone they truly loved can relate to this poem - Joyce |
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HOLY CRAP- don't mean to be crude- its just that poem was incredible, soooo classic! I could see it next to edgar allen poe! keep writing and everyone will keep reading. beautiful, just beautiful - Sarah |
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This poem is remarkable for its Lyrical beauty,natural flow of thoughts and intellectual depth. Though this poem has pessimistic touch but even then it seems to come dirctly from the heart of poet and goes directly in the heart of reader!The moment i was reading this poem i felt that poet has expressed all the feelings that r floating in my heart and mind. And obviously good poetry is that in which reader finds his own reflection! - Minahil Sardar |
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Wow!. Thats all I have to say. It was definalty one of a kind. an I was deeply touched by it. because when me an My boyfriend broke up I went on this site an this poem was the very first one I chose to read. I dont know why. but it definatly some how or another made me stronger an made the healing process go by faster - Karen |
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wow. you are amazing - Krist |
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muahahahahahahah i love this poem hehehehehehe hehehehe heheheh! i though it was good because i can relate to it! - jaqee |
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it was a very good poem i can relate - Loni |
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awesome poem! - mike |
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your poem was deep truly one of the best i have ever had the privaledge of reading - sofia |
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True, True, True. - Kaori |
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It was fantastic! It actually gaveme chills. It was different approach to explain the deep pain one feels when their heart has been broken in two! I love your style. keep up the good work. - Eileen |
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Simply; I liked it. - Stard |
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I love this poem it reminds me exactly of a relationship I'm still kinda stuck in at this moment, and it helps to know other people know what I'm feeling. Lemme know when you write new stuff - Ana |
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Beautiful. Stunning. Truly, a work of art. - Dan |
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Such a beautiful poem, beautifully written. What more can be said. ? - Ailee |
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o my goodness, i moved to a different town about an hour away from my loved one, he didnt think it would work until i sent him this poem, we are still together and i owe it ALL to you kit! thank you, with love, liv - liv |
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I TRUELY UNDERSTAND YOUR PAIN BECAUSE I AM IN A SITUATION RIGHT NOW THAT IS TAKING ITS TOLL ON ME. THANK FOR WRITING THIS POEM FOR IT LETS ME KNOW THAT I AM NOT GOING ONLY ONE WHO IS GOING THROUGH TRIALS IN MY LIFE. THIS POEM WAS VERY LOVLY BUT YET SAD. - SHERR |
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This poem was trully moving, and symbolizes what i have felt for quite some time, the feeling of a broken heart. - Bekah |
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Man absolutely a work of art brilliant i hav saved it and will look at it amongst others when i am feelin down absoluitely wonderful - steve |
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Your poem Is so beautiful, It has brought tears to my eyes - knowing that someone out there has felt the same way I do! Thank you for writting it & keep on writting! - Casey |
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Brilliant! - kara |
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the poem was great! i wish i could write like you - kendra |
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I love this poem it reminds me of an incident in my life. It was very very sweet. - cary |
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I really can tell how you feel because i feel the same way. i Think that we are experiecing the same thing right now. i can't stop crying , no matter what! well, your poem was very beautiful! - Star |
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your poem has toutched my heart, it made me cry. you are a great poet. - Reem |
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i think that this poem is great - sarah |
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Hello Kit, I just would like to thank you. This poem had me in tears. You know what? I really needed a good cry. take care - soona |
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It takes powerful words close to my heart to make me feel like crying. Intense yet gentle. It's great. - tru |
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I think whoever wrote this has a lot of talent and they should keep on writing. More power to people who have the ability to write what they feel in as great of words as this person has. - Candi |
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truely magnificent - Win |
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just great - silvia |
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I can't really say anything other than simply: WOW - Svet |
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oh I LOVED this poem! it really made me feel the pain - kelse |
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Your poem, ITS GREAT! rock on! I know how you feel! - Sarah |
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I thought this poem was great! It really talks about their feelings. It was great! - Arlene |
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fantastic work. =) - Tatatee |
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Such poetics. A tear escaped my body. - Rose |
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THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN WAYS UNEXPLAINABLE. THE WRITER OF THIS POEM DEFINATELY HAS TALENT. - AMANDA |
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That poem was great! The words were so meaningful, and there was a lot of feeling put into it. - Allison |
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This arangement of words was taken from my quiet whispers and placed on paper with pen. Great work! - ray |
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Oh!,so beautiful.magnificently beautiful.i will await patiently for your next work of art.the only words i think of are power and grace. - Kerry |
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I love the poem and author. Keep writing. - Jessie |
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This poem is wonderful. The words come directly from the heart. This author is truly talented. - Mary |
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A very true.touching piece of art crafted in a flamboyant style the vacant musings of the heart. Sometimes when Love is so precious, we often try to preserve it's pain too.tendering it with equal passion, holding onto it like a little piece so fragile.strange are the ways of the human heart! - Parul |
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Kit, I think this is a wonderful poem, filled with emotion. Your pain comes through and almost brought tears to my eyes.You are truly talented. - Mary |
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i am voting for this poem because it touched other peoples' hearts including mine. the way this writer wrote this shows a lot of feeling. i know that i am not cridict, but i do think this poem is one of the greatest poems i have ever read. i will definetly share this poem to my friends. simply superb! :) - Trish |
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This poem speaks so much of what i have been through in my life. - Dinny |
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one word >> WOW!<< this poem is absolutely amazing! i love it! Keep up the work! :0) - Yvonne |
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Just sums it up when love is torn from you. Sometimes it helps to know you're not the only one, that there is some one else who knowns what it's like. Thank you. - Paul |
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hun--its like you were in my mind---i absolutely love this poem - j |
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This poem truly describes the crushing effect of what my last break up has place onto my spirit. Am truly broken over losing the one true love in all my life. Now I have to reinvent my woman's spirit from this disheveled broken state. But I have a growing faith that "this too shall pass." Bravo Kit McCallum! - Eloisa |
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A really excellent poem. Very intellegently written, with a good stlye and flow. The best poem I have read for a while. - Mike |
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I am stunned. I have to say this poem is quite amazing with its perfect iambic verse and enchanting metaphors - Daniel |
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Your poem was very precise and heart stricken. I love how you used your arangement of words and how I can almost feel threw you the pasion you bring to the poem. I once went threw a similiar romance and I could have never wordeed this incident as perfect as you have.I think your a wonderfull poet and you have a great future ahead of you - Pat |
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This was such a great poem. I wish mine sounded like this! - Anna |
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Wow! this has alot of strong feeling. the way the words are expressed make u feel what the auter was feeling at the time and i think that every one has a time in their lives when they feel this way i really liked this poem. - Barby |
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Not many poems touch me profoundly, but from the first stanza, I could feel an invisible hand physically tugging at my heartstrings. Such a poignant piece of art! - Elbert |
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i realli liked this poem...i felt that it realli touched me and that it captured the pain and sorrow of having a broken heart realli well... - nHi |
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That is a great poem. It was wonderfully written. - Danielle |
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This poem was outstanding!! It found a a piece of me I didnt know I had. I can sit here for hours thinking of this poem and it makes think about alot of things. You are a wonderful and talented writer. Keep up the great work. I hope to read more of your poems in the feature. - Jessica |
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That was good, very touching it made me start tinking bout my wife.She's dead.She died in a car wreck 4 months ago.I did a poem.But it wasnt as good as yours. - Chris |
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it spoke to my heart, from the middle. I am the person you are talking about. Love hurts and it dont conquor all! - Liz |
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Easy to read, involving deep emotions. Wonderful poem! Keep on writing! Your poem reminds me of a romanian national poet, Mihai Eminescu. Probably you did not hear about him, though his poetry was translated into English as well. Anyway, if you find his poems, maybe you'll read a few. You will see I'm right.;-)) Congratulations for your poem! - Laura |
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This poem made me feel like i had to cry :'( - Stefanie |
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Absolutely beautiful. It's deeply touching and beautiful. - H.M |
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This is amazing. It flows with such ease and is so powerful. Thankyou for such wonderful work. - Brett |
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i love this poem, i think everyone can see themselves like this after a brake up, or a could have been love. it touches the heart - tony |
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wow! i'm speechless.i'm still in awe.such a heartfelt poem.beautiful! - kia |
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This is truly great. It deserves to be published in a book all it's own :) - Megan |
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The poem Seek Not My Heart is the best piece I've ever read. It just touch my heart. Its very cool! Keep up the good writing! - Jessica |
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This poem was truly beautiful. It was well worded and emotional. A masterpiece. Please continue writing! - Dewdrop |
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omg.i have felt like that for so long now! You did a great job, and i hope to see more work like yours! oh, one more thing.note to self: "Love Sucks!" hehe.great job - kristin |
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wow, beautiful poem.not only captured YOUR feelings as you wrote it, but it also captured mine.thank you - Tiff |
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How sweet is love.yet how it stings. - Squall |
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This is a very pretty poem, it totally flows w/ the breeze. - Jackie |
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I loved the poem, it definetly expressed how I felt about my boyfriend after we broke up. And I'm still not over the pain. - J |
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Beautiful way of expressing your broken heart. Yeah IF LOVE SOO NICE TELL ME WHY IT HURT SOOO BAD.. - Himchan |
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Sweet sorrow.your pain is felt, embraced, and enjoyed. - Meg |
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I know it though, but tell me again, Is it your poem, or a reflection of my pain? - Rohit |
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Your poem really touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes. You are a very gifted and talented poet and I admire you for that - Uncertainty |
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No words could do due right, purly a textual mirror or my soul. Beautiful, - J.D. |
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such truth in the words, made me cry even harder as i sit here with a borken heart! great poem! - AH |
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Excellent poem. I love how it was so open-minded and unique in every way. - Devvy |
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Wow! - Jamie |
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Loved the way your poem was written. It seems to flowas you read it. I'll be it would sound good if music was put to it. - LoneStar |
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I loved it. It touched me deep inside. And I almost cried. - Kasey |
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I could feel my own pain in her words. Great poem. - Julia |
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This poem is extraordinary. - Tomeka |
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this poem has a heartfield depth, which i relate to. the writer is remarkable! - Amy |
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Your poem was well written. - A.S. |
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This poem is so true. it touched me deeply. Thank you for writing such a heartfelt peom. - Jennifer |
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I think this person has talent - Martha |
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One of the best i read yet and yet it explains how i feel right now. - Kara |
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I feel everything your poem says. I feel betrayed by my husband of 30 years. - Izora |
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absolutely beautiful!!!! - cindy |
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very heartfelt and sincere. I appreciate good poems such as this, it makes you really think about what love is and how important it is. Congratulations on an awesome poem! - Chloe |
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Oh this touched my heart soo much.. it gave me chills - Lauren |
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I THINK THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. IT'S VERY TRUE AND IT EXPLAINS EXACTLY HOW SOMEONE FEELS WHEN THEY HAVE A BROKEN HEART. - LATINA |
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Words fail me...my simple complements would diminsh the actual effect your poem gave me. Its beautiful, I'd love to read more. - Erin |
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beautiful writing, great rhythm and rhyme, wonderful meaning, very deep, excellent metaphors. I really enjoyed your poem, and I am going to use it in a writing project that I have to do on poetry at school - cordell |
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Beautious! - Chandra |
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This is one of the best poems I have read lately. It is easy to read and makes a lot of sense in what the writer feels. - Alex |
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Cool! Really spoke to my heart. - pm |
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beautiful poem and filled with emotion,also very touching. - Kerryann |
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I really enjoyed this poem, I think it is written well. I read alot of these and most are yuck, but this is a good one! Good job! - D.Elrod |
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It is a lovely poem. - Kanta |
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i like this poem - Fredi |
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MY FEELINGS INDEED. SOMETIMES JUST READING POEMS HELPS ME GET THROUGH THE DAY. I FIND IT MOST DIFFICULT WHEN I'M ALONE. I GROW STRONGER EACH DAY IT SEEMS YET WEAKER AS MEMORIES RESURFACE. IS IT WRONG TO FEEL SUCH SORROW? - Melanie |
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Oh my...such unduly passion...such a talented poet...peaceful. - Jackalou |
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A work of art! Haven't read anything so touching in a long time. - Patricia |
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Beautiful. I loved it. Truly. - AS |
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it was very touching, really ! - john |
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This poem really touched my heart. I've been going through a struggle with my valentine and your poem expresses how I feel. It's really great! - Marie |
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I love it I sent it to all my friends ^_~ it describes how i feel - Maya |
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i thought that this poem was very well thought out with words truly brought from the heart. it is touching yet gripping and easily understood. - poetry |
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I really liked this poem, I could really relate to it. - Bree |
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i voted for this poem b/cuz its like it was written for and about me.i can sit here and read this poem and feel what the author is feeling..it touched me where no other peo mhas and it made me think about alot of things.i am grateful to have found this poem..keep up the great writing.u found a place in me .that i never knew i had lost. - Dennica |
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It was beautiful- how could I not vote for it? - Catherine |
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what can i say? very beautiful and sweet.. - Jezebel |
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Hey there I just wanted to say that this poem of yours is beautiful! I love it! - Zara |
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I can feel this poem. - emerson |
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This poem was very cleverly written and i love the message it gives. - Emily |
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I really enjoyed reading your work and look forward to more. - Vanessa |
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No comment,really cool! - Faith's |
