My Treasure - For Mom by Kit McCallum
I look back on these years
To see how far I've come and grown,
I take a trip down memory lane,
And what I see has shown ...
That every step I've taken,
You have been there by my side ...
From infancy to adulthood,
We've stood the test of time.
You cradled me and nurtured me,
Through all these many years;
You held me and did comfort me,
Through happiness and tears.
You'd pick me up when I would fall,
You'd dust me off and then,
Encourage me to get back on
That horse and ride again.
Your constant care and loving,
And your warm inviting heart,
Has always been a treasure that
I knew would n'er depart.
If I could be "just half" the person
You have been to me ...
Then you have taught me well dear mom,
For in my heart I see ...
A woman whose most gentle soul,
Embraces me each day ...
A woman whom I dearly love,
Much more than words can say.
To see how far I've come and grown,
I take a trip down memory lane,
And what I see has shown ...
That every step I've taken,
You have been there by my side ...
From infancy to adulthood,
We've stood the test of time.
You cradled me and nurtured me,
Through all these many years;
You held me and did comfort me,
Through happiness and tears.
You'd pick me up when I would fall,
You'd dust me off and then,
Encourage me to get back on
That horse and ride again.
Your constant care and loving,
And your warm inviting heart,
Has always been a treasure that
I knew would n'er depart.
If I could be "just half" the person
You have been to me ...
Then you have taught me well dear mom,
For in my heart I see ...
A woman whose most gentle soul,
Embraces me each day ...
A woman whom I dearly love,
Much more than words can say.
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This poem was a gentle thank you to my kind and loving mother, who's warmth and love guides me daily.
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HI, I REALY LOVE THIS POEM I PERSONALY THINK IT IS THE BEST POEM TO WRITE FOR OUR DEAR MOTHERS WHO BROUGHT US TO THIS WORLD AND TOOK A GOOD CARE OF US. PEOPLE WHO STOOD BY OUR SIDES IN ALL THE TIMES. PEOPLE WHO ARE ALWAYS THERE TO LOVE AND GUIDE US NOT TO CRITISIZE US, THESE PEOPLE DESERVE TO BE LOVED. YO POEM IS NO ONE - THEMBEKILE |
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I LOVE THE POEM IT WAS WELL KNOW MEANIN REALLY GOOD U HAVE A PASSION - vanessa |
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Dis poem is hot it shows alot of love to ur ma, and it also tells n encourages people that a mother is truly a special peron and no matta how much ur ma might get on ur nerves she'll always be 1# - Amanda |
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I really loved your poem. Thank you so much for not wasting your talent. I am sure this poem warmed the hearts of many. - sherry |
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i loved this poem - elisa |
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Such a lovely poem this makes me cry as my dear Mum is no longer in this world mums should be treasured thank you - Linda |
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This poem touched me, because it is truly what a caring, loving mother is. Even though i dont have my mother hear with me anymore, i can remember all of those special things about her. - dee |
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i loved this poem. this poem is perfect to give to a special mother. like mine! I LOVED IT. it was the best poem i have ever read before. ! - ash |
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I thought it said exactly what I wanted to say to my mom. Perfect poem! - karen |
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this poem has touched me very deeply whoever wrote it must make more this poem is the best i ever read and you are right cant explain the love toward a mother wiht words but this gets really close - gary |
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I really liked the way it made me take a step back and relly look at all the wonderful things my mom has done for me. racheal - racheal |
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A beautiful poem1 I just lost Mom November 15, 2006. It brought tears to my eyes. - Marietta |
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It is a really good and sweet poem It almost made me cry good job! - Ashley |
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this poem is beauy=tifull wen i first read it it made me cry and now i dedicate this poem for mah mum because she is the best - kaylea |
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I love this poem because it is so true! I feel so sad for those girls (and boys) who don't have a good relationship with their mother (or father). I don't know what I would do without my mother. she is the best and can make anyone laugh. If I grew up to be just like her, that would be perfect. - s |
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I really like it. it touched my inner fellings it made me want to call my mom and say that I loved her and that i always will. - joe |
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I think this poem shows how much this woman really thinks and feels about her mom. Her mom was a great woman and if she can be just 1/2 the woman that she was to her children then she feels she will be doing a pretty good job. I know how she feels. My mom was the best mom any girl could have asked for. - Kay |
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this poem has touched me in so many ways. - stephanie |
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I like this poem because it reminds me of my Mom. - Karene |
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beautiful as a mother very well written keep it up awesome. - Diana |
