Losing A Piece Of My Soul by Jasmine Johnston
I came to you the hour I was in pain
Looking for answers, I cried to you in vain.
I shared the many skeletons hiding in my heart,
I knew then you'd be my friend,
I knew it from the start.
Troubles ran like rivers, flowing through my life,
You picked the pieces up and help me through my strife.
When home wasn't home to me no more,
You opened up your heart, and opened up the door.
We cried into night until the early morn.
We solaced each other's pain and shared our many thorns.
As time flew, the air grew thick,
I saw our friendship fading, and my heart grew sick.
The day had arrived,
When it was time to say goodbye.
Now I sit alone,
reminiscing the past I'd blown.
Looking for answers, I cried to you in vain.
I shared the many skeletons hiding in my heart,
I knew then you'd be my friend,
I knew it from the start.
Troubles ran like rivers, flowing through my life,
You picked the pieces up and help me through my strife.
When home wasn't home to me no more,
You opened up your heart, and opened up the door.
We cried into night until the early morn.
We solaced each other's pain and shared our many thorns.
As time flew, the air grew thick,
I saw our friendship fading, and my heart grew sick.
The day had arrived,
When it was time to say goodbye.
Now I sit alone,
reminiscing the past I'd blown.
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This is a poem about losing a best friend to shallow jealousy. Keep in mind all that is important to you. If you squeeze and hold on too tightly to your friends, eventually they will release their hold.
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I know how you feel. I really like your poem. - Merrie |
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this poem touched me because i had a friend that past away a few years ago and i got into an argument with her because she had hung out with a girl i didnt like and that day she got into a car accident and well. u know tha rest but other than that this was a hella good poem! - Tia |
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i loved it! i have lost some one really close to me and reading the poem does really make a difference. I'm not much of a talker but reading this poem and thinking of what some people have to go through with loosing some one, it really does make you feel for each and every one. - Britty |
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wow - Brooke |
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Losing a friend is hard and painful. My best friend just passaway. - delia |
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I really like this poem because it has happen to me not to long ago. I make poems to about friendships - Torey |
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YOUR POEM IZ ABSOLUTETLY GREAT. AT THIZ MOMENT IM LOSEING A FRIEND. MY BEST FRIEND. AND I FEEL EXACTLY THIZ WAY. AND YEAH. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITTER. GOOD LUCK IN YOUR FUTURE. - JASMINE |
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I once fell in love with ny best friend. We shared everthing together just as you and your friend had. We knew of this love we and for one another but knew nothing could ever happen due to our situation. But out love 4 eachother burned so bad inside of us. we had plan to grow old together but he faded away and i never knew the real reson why but he killed himself and i was forced to say good-bye. so i know how you feel - Rachel |
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this was beautiful also my name is the same as you - Jasmine |
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It is a very touching poem which I can relate to. - Jennifer |
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i loved this poem! it really made me think about the best friend i lost. i thought i was the only person alive that was going through and its terrific to know that i am not. for all those others who lost someone. find another friend they could be better than the last! - Mandy |
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i think that this poem is amazing!It made me thin of how i messed up in the pased and lost the 2 people that give me a reason to keep going! But when i was reading this i new that i had to get them back(our friends ship because it was lost when i ran away) because they ment so much! - ellie |
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I liked this poem aloooooot and this was the perfect poem for my Novel Project so thanks for writing it. - Holli |
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Really good reminds me of when my friend left me. - sara |
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painful memories. - Understand Pain |
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this reminds me of me because to day i lost my best friend because of some girls that like conflict so i know exactly how it feels, it hurts Bye Anonamous - Anoamous |
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i lost a boy as a friend because he found out that i liked him,and know he is dating a girl he barely knows and i known him for two years,and i try to explain to him why can't we just be friends but he ignores me i cry and and listen to love songs whenever i see and picture of him,and i cried when i read your poem because the memories me and Zachary had are to painful to remember,and even though we were never together he was maybe still is my first love. - Cheyenne |
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this poem reminded me of a friendship i had lost and it was very moving - krystal |
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this poem. man. its so awesome. i bin riting alot but its about society and how im so disgusted with how this worlds run. but this is just. whoah. wow. just wow. you know? l8r - Emily |
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well i have to say ur poem was brilliant and it touched me so very much as i have a situation similiar to it marvellous absolutely - ching chong |
