Last by Azazel
For everything there must come a last.
A last minute, a last hour, a last month, day, or year.
A last drink, a last coke, a last tequila, scotch, or beer.
A last love, a last heart, a last kiss, hug, or rage...
Or even the last words written on a page.
But the worst last thing is your last breath
because what is to follow will surely be your death.
A last minute, a last hour, a last month, day, or year.
A last drink, a last coke, a last tequila, scotch, or beer.
A last love, a last heart, a last kiss, hug, or rage...
Or even the last words written on a page.
But the worst last thing is your last breath
because what is to follow will surely be your death.
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This is a poem I wrote to scare my self from committing suicide. It has helped me through hard times. When ever I feel that the world is to scary to live in, I read this to myself.
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i love ur poem it only the truth i have tread committing sucide but ur poem has just scard me from committing suicide so i know how u feel - Alicia |
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i found it very unique, i was very impressed - emily |
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OMG! Just a few days ago I wanted to commit suicide. then I remembered this poem, and I got scared. I figured that wasn't going to be the way I die. I cant say I won't commit suicide, but I'm still here now. Thank you so much. - Julia |
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This is a really good poem and has helped me, its pinned up on my wall - Eryn |
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Excellent-makes you remember how precious life is - Sonia |
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i love your poem i would like to write poems but i just can make them sound right but i love yours. if i could write my own it would be abody all the boys and gurl that brake eack others heart. and all well i just like u 2 know i loved youes. - kaylee |
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wow, i have never thought about that perspective of the word/meaning of LAST very nice i enjoyed it - karla |
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BEAUTIFUL. VERY TRUE INDEED - coral |
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ouch. Beeing a multiple suicide attempter, i must say, thank you for writting this ! it really hit me. god bless you ! - Delcee |
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i feel like comitting suicide everyday of my life, it can really hurt if you feel like i do. thankyou for writing this because it can really open my eyes, i always try to stop myself, i find a good way of keeping your mind off cutting is to find something easy and quiet to do that will destract you, keep up the amazing work! - sophie |
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i love ur poem its nice and kool - sheree |
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this is a truely amazing piece of work! so clever! im lost for words with how amazing that is - lauren |
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i loved thepoem it was a bit sad but realy good it makes you think of the more important things love mon - monica |
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very clever and sums it all up. many a time i have felt like that - HEATHER |
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omg this poem is sooooo ace i loved it. - kelly |
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ey. gud poem im sry bout how u feel i no it must be hard and i hope u get threw it . and dun have to hurt no more - ilona |
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i like your description i might use this once - jazzy |
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I thought that this poem had a very good understanding and it was very interesting to read. - Brandie |
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wow. it is very nice. i just wish i could write poems - kalyn |
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your words are so true, those who must read it have probably realized how deep your words are, like a knife cutting through pure flesh, it struck my heart, it kept me alive i must thank you. - sydney |
