I Don't Know by Dee
spinning out of control
my mind is always spinning
shimmers of pain and confusion
dominate my every thought
I can't handle it
it can devour me at an instant
when, where, why?
questions I ask everyday
limbo is my residence
madness is my destination
is this it?
this is all I'm supposed to be
where do I fit in?
or do I fit in?
my mind is always spinning
shimmers of pain and confusion
dominate my every thought
I can't handle it
it can devour me at an instant
when, where, why?
questions I ask everyday
limbo is my residence
madness is my destination
is this it?
this is all I'm supposed to be
where do I fit in?
or do I fit in?
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I wake up everyday and go through life in a daze. I know there must be something better for me out there. I just don't know where to look for it. In this poem I talk about all my confusion and insecurities. I just don't know where I should be at this point in my life and it burdens me everyday. But then I realized maybe this is how life is. We can't always be happy with everything in our lives.
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super good poem short but good i feel the same way - James |
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the poem is very good - heather |
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This is really good. - Britt |
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i thing that this poem was very good - Sara |
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This is how everybody feels about life. This is a reality of life and we always loose our identity. - NAISARGI |
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Funny, I sorta stumbled over this one but it is excatly how I feel. - Laura |
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you've managed to say what i fell so many times in just a few words.you've come really close to describing some of my feelings. it's good to know that i'm not the only one feeling this!! - Janelle |
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I don't know! it's a nice poem! I like it! - backerloggie |
