Mind by Darcy
Pale eyes, a blank expression,
wander through clouds of indescribable dreams.
Cold mist air, surrounded isolation
flaws my occupied mind
with either hate or death.
Something certain will be for always;
change in time forbids movement.
Fearing you understands myself;
help me open up, just a little more.
wander through clouds of indescribable dreams.
Cold mist air, surrounded isolation
flaws my occupied mind
with either hate or death.
Something certain will be for always;
change in time forbids movement.
Fearing you understands myself;
help me open up, just a little more.
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Rating: B- |
This poem is about suffering from loneliness. The mind tends to wander in its own world, where time stops and nothing seems to change.
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i love this poem. one of my favorite poems i have read! - sarah |
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I can totally relate to this poem i wud like to write one about my feelings but im rubbish. have you any tips? this poem touched me i feel like this all of the time - Liz |
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it rocked! - sarah |
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I relate alot to yur poem and i liked it alot - Ez |
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i could relate to this poem really well. i thought it was good. i would like to hear more from you in the future! - Ashley |
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Thank you for a beautiful poem,I can understand where you are coming from. - shal |
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I have never felt this way before and know through your poem I can picture it. I'm one of those people who cares but never gets the bad feeling and I have a very good life. I'm sorry 4 who ever feels that way. - Mimi |
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I really like this poem! - Sarah |
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I know what it is like to live inside of yourself, and you can't escape, beautifully written - Emily |
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I really like this poem cause that's how I feel most of the time. - Daria |
