Love Is Eternal And Dreams Are Just Dreams by Carroll Kelllie
I see your face in my sleep
and your figure appears to me in my waking hours,
like an angle mesmerized by your beauty
captivated by your elegance.
I've fallen hopelessly in love
with the only woman I can never have once again.
Can the gods be so cruel as to show me the face of beauty
and not let me hold you in my arms.
To feel your breath against my face
would be my own personal heaven.
True love at first sight will last forever in my heart and my soul.
You are the only woman
that has ever walked in my soul
and for that I love you...
and your figure appears to me in my waking hours,
like an angle mesmerized by your beauty
captivated by your elegance.
I've fallen hopelessly in love
with the only woman I can never have once again.
Can the gods be so cruel as to show me the face of beauty
and not let me hold you in my arms.
To feel your breath against my face
would be my own personal heaven.
True love at first sight will last forever in my heart and my soul.
You are the only woman
that has ever walked in my soul
and for that I love you...
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Everyone falls in love and sometimes it feels like it just gets ripped out from under us. Or is it that we are just dreaming it all and wishing for it to happen!!
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your poem is really great .good job go on:) - marcella |
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I loved your poem it touched my heart deeply - angela |
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perfect - peter |
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i love your poem i can relate to it so much. you are a wonderful writer and your poem it very heart felt to me - steve |
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i really liked this one - Christine |
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an excellent poem potraiting the feeling for those long gone. - siddharth |
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WOW that was great way to go Kellie - Woman |
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Very well written I cant remember the last time a few words could bring so much thought and truth from me THANK YOU! and keep wrighting - Ice |
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THIS WAS A VERY MOVING POEM IT OPENS FEELING SOME PEOPLE DONT EVEN KNOW THAY HAVE IT - HEATHER |
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That poem is very true..especially when it comes to love and the way it works sometimes - unknown |
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This poem opens up a lot of feelings and expresses just as much. Very well written - snap |
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Simply beautiful - Margie |
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it was very moving and heart-felt - Gary |
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Its a very touching and moving pome - Michael |
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I still think this is a great poem very intense..I think it also should have little stars next to it for best poem etc.. - unknown |
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this poem expresses the thoughts and feelings we all have about Love and the ones we fall in Love with... - Luana |
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I loved your poem, Im really into romance and what you wrote was beautiful! - Kelly |
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This poem really describes how I feel about love-it's beautiful..I myself have "gazed" so to say at a woman that I have loved tremendously knowing all along that I cannot have her..tis better to have loved than not to have loved at all I suppose...*smile* - Maria |
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I THOUGHT IT WAS A VERY TOUCHING POEM, AND I GIVE IT ALL MY VOTES....GREAT JOB KELLIE - kari |
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that was the best poem, i've read in a long time.it was pretty. - Lisa |
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This poem is great. I know the girl, i know the feeling. - Jennifer |
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Wow that was very intense. - unknown |
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I've never found words that express my feelings as precise as these. Beautiful - Tony |
