Sent From Heaven's Sky by Katherine James
I thought you were my angel,
Sent from heaven's sky.
I thanked God for your presence,
But now I wonder why.
You took your bow and arrow,
And aimed it at my heart.
You let it rip right through my soul,
And left me torn apart.
I started to wonder what went wrong.
I love'd you without fail.
But above all else I figured out,
You're just a typical male.
Sent from heaven's sky.
I thanked God for your presence,
But now I wonder why.
You took your bow and arrow,
And aimed it at my heart.
You let it rip right through my soul,
And left me torn apart.
I started to wonder what went wrong.
I love'd you without fail.
But above all else I figured out,
You're just a typical male.
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Rating: B+ |
This poem isn't written about one of my experiences but of one of my friends. She recently met a guy that she loved and he did nothing but lead her on! He deliberately built up her hopes and laughed as he watched them tumble down again when she found out he didn't like her.
I have nothing against guys, but I do have something against the heartless, gutless ones who are too chicken to say the truth and would rather watch someone else get hurt when the truth finally does come out.
Some people don't believe that teen love is really love, some don't even believe it is possible. But believe me, everyone knows when they have found the one that they love, and my friend really did love this guy! She did not brag on about him as an obsession, yet she did not forget about him and only think of him when he was near. She only spoke of him in ways that a lover is spoken of and everyone who heard her speak of him knew that, too.
So to anyone who reads this poem, guy or girl, think about it and ask yourself if you are hurting someone who doesn't deserve to be hurt. I know that my friend didn't deserve it and neither does anyone else.
I have nothing against guys, but I do have something against the heartless, gutless ones who are too chicken to say the truth and would rather watch someone else get hurt when the truth finally does come out.
Some people don't believe that teen love is really love, some don't even believe it is possible. But believe me, everyone knows when they have found the one that they love, and my friend really did love this guy! She did not brag on about him as an obsession, yet she did not forget about him and only think of him when he was near. She only spoke of him in ways that a lover is spoken of and everyone who heard her speak of him knew that, too.
So to anyone who reads this poem, guy or girl, think about it and ask yourself if you are hurting someone who doesn't deserve to be hurt. I know that my friend didn't deserve it and neither does anyone else.
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i loved your poems i feel the same way you should write more poems - Jessica |
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i like this poem it is very good ! - megan |
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hey this is a really good pome it remindes me of a kid named tony - holly |
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this is really true - Laura |
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heyy i loved your poem it was the best poem i have ever seen. it is all ture too that funny - Merrissa |
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this poem is very true but, all the things just doesnt happen to gurls it happens to guys also well N. E. wayz the poem really touchs my heart. - carmen |
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I think that this was a great poem. There are good fish out there, but most of them ARE just typical males. Most are only out for one thing and the others are just jerks! I think that the poem explained a lot! Tailynn - Tailynn |
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THIS POEM IS VERY DEEP. I LOVED it so much. im so glad that someone out there feels the same pain as me. i know how u feel and i hope that u grow to be a truly great poet. yours jemma XXX - JEM |
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ok well i thought i was a gud poem but thats not fair say typical male yeah all chiks have been hurt but remeber we are tha 1s who a blind to whats happening we pretend we dont see him flurting with the gurl at tha check owt we pretend that tha gurl hes txting is really just a friend we pretend that smell ov purfum on his top is really from a department store we are just as to blame 4 what happens to us dont let guys make u blind look deeper than that and u will find the 1 that truly cares u just have to make sure ur eyes are wide anuf to see it thanx 4 tha poem but reamaba seak and you shall find lve aprilxxx - april |
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I just wanted to tell u that i really like that poem. it reminded me of this guy named Sergio. He did the same thing to me. i felt like i was gonna die. It related to me in many ways. ~Love Alwayz Nicole~ - nicole |
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This poem really touched me because its really true. Guys can hurt u even worse than that but i love this poem and i think that everyone should be able 2 read it and think about past relationships they've had! - Nikki |
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wow!i loved your poem it was amazing - lalala |
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OMGOSH girl that is so good! Also very True! This poems means alot to me b/c that same thing just happen to me! Thanks for writing this! That is so great! - Amy |
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Iu thought this poem was Wonderful! it had so much meaning to it - Caleigh |
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hey girl sup i love ur poem i had a guy do the same his name was Robin he was my first one we dated for about 1year and half i love him soo much then about five day befor we were dated almost 2years he broke my heart for a nother girl it really broke my heart i cryed every nite but i relized a guy is not worth crying over,so be for cry tell ur self is he worth it well byb love ur poem xoxo - Stephanie |
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Thank you so much. coz i also send this to my crush in school last February which I now known that he geatly appreciated it. But still we did'nt became friend. For so many reasons, anyway I think I only do my part as his admirer. god bless. keep it up the good work. - karr |
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I really love this poem because the boy that I was talking to had broke my heart one day he say we was boyfriend and girlfriend when we came back from over summer break he act like he didn't want me anymore. And I had really like him and he torn my heart apart. - Alicia |
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I LOVED THE POEM IT REALLY TOUCHED ME. THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL - SABRINA |
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wow i really almost started to cry it reminded me and i did break his heart. i am so sorry and want him back but he deserves better and i ll let him know that - Amie |
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i think that was a really good poem. most guys are like that. they dont really take a girl for who she is and what she can be but for her looks. it was a good way in showing how some guys really are. - Jessica |
