Company by Tina K
Where are you going, where have you been?
My dear, close, and quiet friend,
As we sit in the soft springtime Saturday's end
Taking comfort in each other once again.
Tell me your stories and I'll tell you mine;
And so we will pass a few hours time
With the quaint and the comic and even sublime -
Silently searching for that elusive sign.
We'll fashion the future and polish the past,
Allowing the memories to amass;
While the grains of sand slip through the glass
'Til a tranquil lull pervades at last.
Conversation fades with the eve's golden light,
We cannot go on, try though we might;
So you gather me an embrace so tight,
And we wistfully, longingly say goodnight.
My dear, close, and quiet friend,
As we sit in the soft springtime Saturday's end
Taking comfort in each other once again.
Tell me your stories and I'll tell you mine;
And so we will pass a few hours time
With the quaint and the comic and even sublime -
Silently searching for that elusive sign.
We'll fashion the future and polish the past,
Allowing the memories to amass;
While the grains of sand slip through the glass
'Til a tranquil lull pervades at last.
Conversation fades with the eve's golden light,
We cannot go on, try though we might;
So you gather me an embrace so tight,
And we wistfully, longingly say goodnight.
I wrote this poem as a companion piece to "We're Not In Love". After the relationship had ended with the man that the first poem was about, we became closer than we had ever been. We now enjoy a special kind of friendship that is very rare and comfortable. This piece is about our new relationship as friends.
| really inspiring i really understood the writing keep up the good work - Geri | |
| I think ur poem is one of the best I have ever heard I think you are a wonderful writter and you should keep writting no matter what! - carolyn | |
| Your words and thoughts truly reflect that a strong friendship can sometimes emerge after firey passion has flown. - Laurent | |
| I think this was an amazing poem! Good job! - Dannielle | |
| This poem really speaks to me and it was very well written. - Emily | |
| It is a lovely piece. - syl | |
| very will writen . it seem as if the wtiter has been with my friend and i on a number of nights . - matt | |
| it was beautiful. short and simple but gr8 and keep up the good work. - Erica | |
| So little words can say so much,as shown, it's nice, - RACHEL | |
| Man, that was sooo nice. It really is good writing, and gets the feelings out. That's hard to do, let alone with ryhming. Lot's of talent here! - Peter | |
| lovely poem from a guy who reads very little poetry - dave | |
| This poem is really nice. But, it does make me sad. When I am reading it, I am hoping that I could just be with the person I love. But if that doesn't happen, I want him to be my best friend. - Jennifer | |
| This poem describes my wife and I perfectly. We have always been freinds and I hope we always are. - william | |
| This poem says so much about the perfect friend and that's all it can be. - Liz | |
| I really like it - Jodi | |
| Ms.Tina, girlfriend I truly admire the words within this poem. I can honestly feel you! You've got it going on! Make God give you the strength to continue to enlighten those like myself with many more poems. Ms.Tina, you go girl! - trecy | |
| I love this site! Thanks for being here when I needed to express my feelings. I will tell my friends about you! - Jackie. | |
| Your poem hit home for me,I've never had a friend that met so much to me as my ex. I E mailed your poem to her and she cryed as I have never heard her cry before. God Bless You - Charles | |
| very heartfelt poem from a girl with a true heart of caring. - joe | |
| beautifully written - nicole | |
| I think this is so beautiful. It touched me in a very moving way...beautiful! - TiaMaria | |
| Fantastic Poem !!! It is just how I feel - Sean | |
| This poem is very sweet and sincere. I enjoyed it a lot. - Jenny | |
| This poem is great it hits close to home. - judy | |
| i loved it!! this poet is very talented. she "explained" everything in so little words - laura | |
| Very touching...about two people searching for that elusive sign of love in each other. Coming close, at times, but not quite reaching the goal. Yet, there is hope. Thank you, Tina K. - Joe_B | |
| this is one of the best, most vivid poems that i have read in a long time. I enjoyed it very much, it was inspiring - diana | |
| Absolutely beautiful! - Duane | |
| short and sweet, the kind that is fun to read and brings a clear picture of what's going on. It's great! - Elizabeth | |
| i think its perfect im going through a very hard begining to a wonderful life with someone who hundreds of miles away and your poems really touched my heart thanks for the creativity...brent - brent | |
| Hi Tina, We love your poem and want to publish it in a new book by Kimberly Kirberger, author of Chicken Soup for the Teenage Soul. Please get a hold of me as soon as you can - Mitch | |
| It grabbed my heart .you said what I felt - cissy |
