And Where Were You? by Valerie
I never thought I'd see this day,
I never thought I'd feel this way,
You...a stranger to me now.
I'm left with emptiness...
I wish I knew how it could be,
That we were once so open and free.
You were like my brother.. yet so much more
I wish I would have seen what I see now before.
For, I did not and it's too late...
My friend, my lover once, is now unknown.
And what hurts the most is I now know..
What I lost.. and I'm alone.
To face a challenge life has sent,
And not a moment with you I've spent.
I hope one day I can forgive you, my friend..
I miss you....
Why did you go?
I never thought I'd feel this way,
You...a stranger to me now.
I'm left with emptiness...
I wish I knew how it could be,
That we were once so open and free.
You were like my brother.. yet so much more
I wish I would have seen what I see now before.
For, I did not and it's too late...
My friend, my lover once, is now unknown.
And what hurts the most is I now know..
What I lost.. and I'm alone.
To face a challenge life has sent,
And not a moment with you I've spent.
I hope one day I can forgive you, my friend..
I miss you....
Why did you go?
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I wrote this poem at a time in my life in which my friend deserted me. It hurt me because I thought he really cared and it confused me so...the sudden change. I now know that when things get rough, you discover who your friends really are. I miss you.. Yet, I know it will never be the same.
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i liked yr poem ,, I liked it soo much ,,once i couldn`t explain to myself wt has happened ,, but yr poem had already explained everything ,, we all have faced that , and i know how bad is it to feel that someone left u for nothing ,, just because u loved him - Bodee |
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WOW this poem describes exactly how i feel and how my friendship loss did to me. you have great talent and can put great feelings into words. there is nothing more i can say about it. its great! - BJ |
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Well i think it's great it makes me remember about one of my homegurlz that soon will be leaving me. It hurts when u lose someone u really care about Right? Great Job with the Friendship poemz - Crystal |
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Your poem touched my heart. There were 4 of us in our "bestfriends" group. We have all been friends over 15 years and all live in the same town. In 2004 I lost my older sister to cancer and then 29 days later I lost my dad to suicide. None of my 3 friends came to either funeral. That was almost 2 years ago now. I've only seen 1 of them since at a dinner party. I wish they only knew how selfish they are. Keep your beautiful work flowing. - Mary |
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i can relate to this poem very much because one of my very close friends which of course was a boy left me as soon as high school came around. he always told me beautiful things on how he was never going to leave and that we were always going to be together forever as friends but then we got close and we became more. yet i still dont talk to him as much as i would really like he was like a brother to me and he decided just to leave without even saying goodbye. thats why i relate ALOT to this poem and thank you for writing it because i know i couldnt even begin to write this. so on behalf of the non-poetically inclined THANK YOU! - BRIANNA |
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this is a very nice poem which touched my heart very deeply. I was in search of this poem coz my heart has also been broken by my friend. - vidhan |
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i love your poem keep up the good work i lost some one very special to me and i love poems that i can relate to and i just love your poem so much and if there is more please let me know - na na |
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i think your poem was great it really touch me i hope you and your friend get toguether again wel. thats all - Emmily |
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This poem expresses alot of what I felt when my best friend ditched me for her boyfriend and I haven't heard from her since. It touched me and this poem expresses what I couldn't! - Kari |
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i liked this poem alot, mainly cause it represents my feelings in words. yea it sucks alot wen u loose one of your greatest friends. and it hurts more knowing that they walked away from u on purpose. and i hate those dumb reason why people seperate. but this poem is extremely touching. i usually dont do this. but i decided to leave a comment on this one ! - Pooja |
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hey this poem really got 2 me well done m8 coz me n my best m8 just ad a massive arguement and know he wants my blood and i really dont wanna lose him as a m8 but i guess thats 2 late now but seriously well done - allan |
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happened to me - jessica |
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this poem is great. it make think of what my friend did. Left me, ditch me he was onces my best friend but now no more - calvin |
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I really loved this poem because it reminds me of when things went wrong for my best friend and I and how I hurt. I am glad that there are people that actually relate with me and that I am not the only one out there that feels like this - stacie |
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Great poem I just lost a good friend and it really hlped LOL Cali - Cali |
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Excellent poem. Going through much the same thing right now and this poem just seems to fit. - Hersh |
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It's a GREAT poem! Very emotional to those who know, but GREAT! - Monique |
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well I liked it simply becoz its something I wish I could say to one person I had sumhow loved. but we drifted apart. and i wud really wish i that I'm brave enough to ask him what happened. -( - Lou |
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i've felt the same way you do. - Aryleen |
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Your poem was amazing, and very touching-Every step of the way. I related to this poem unlike any other. My best friend moved away and it was as though I had never seen knew him. Congratulations on making such an outstanding piece of work. Keep up the incredible job. - Tiffany |
