My First Love by Lone Wolf
From the moment I saw you,
I knew that you were the one,
The one I'd searched for,
My stars, my moon, my sun.
When I was with you,
I never did fear,
The strength that you gave me,
Helped me through the year.
But now you're gone,
And now there's only hate,
I know what I did wrong,
By then it was too late.
And now I wander
These plains on my own,
A wolf without his pack,
Scared and alone.
I knew that you were the one,
The one I'd searched for,
My stars, my moon, my sun.
When I was with you,
I never did fear,
The strength that you gave me,
Helped me through the year.
But now you're gone,
And now there's only hate,
I know what I did wrong,
By then it was too late.
And now I wander
These plains on my own,
A wolf without his pack,
Scared and alone.
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This poem is about my feelings for Becky. The first girl I ever loved and the girl who broke my heart.
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That was really good! And i totally understand how its feels. its hard to lose someone who has been there for you through so much and then is not. just keep writing and one day you will be famous and they'll know what they lost. always, Kayla - Kayla |
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Ive read some of your poems and i think this is a great reminder of what first love feels like great job ::Cloud:: - Dallas |
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It's soooo gooooddd!. - beverly |
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That was a good poem i remember my first love it was love for about 1 year and hurting pain for 3 years. i give it a ten. - Dreamer |
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THIS POEM TOUCHED ME MAJORLY I WAS WITH A GUY FOR 3 YEARS AND HE WAS MY FIRST EVERYTHING SOME THINGS GOT IN THE WAY WE DID NOT TALK FOR A LITTLE WHILE THEN WE STARTED TALKING AGAIN HE CALLED ME ONE NIGHT AND WE TALKED I DID NOT WANT TO GO OUT THAT NITE SO WE SAID WE WOULD SEE EACHOTHER THE NEXT DAY WELL I GET A PHONE CALL AND THEY TOLD ME HE DIED IN A CAR WRECK. - AMANDA |
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I really liked your poem. Its good to write a poem that means something to you and flow so well. dont stop writing. - holly |
