On Line by Harry
It felt so nice and seemed so right,
The words she read seemed to ignite
a passion, a zest for life, felt once long ago,
or was it a dream, am I dreaming now.
Why is this so inviting and warm?
It's mere words I see....
yet the passion they do stir inside of me...
I want to throw my head back in lustful bliss
and feel the warmth of a lovers kiss.
O a strong embrace, a look so pure
and inviting, I give myself completely in to this.
Give me the love that only you can,
make dreams come true with the touch of your hand,
caress me, fondle me, feel my desire,
hold me, thrill me, till my flesh is on fire,
love me so tender, then hard as you can,
fill me with passion, take me just as I am....
Let the hours fill with warmth and the hot sweet perfume
of lovers at play in a candle lit room.
This never-ending lust is too much to take,
but don't let it end, don't let me wake.
My reality is cold and empty and dark--
I hate it there, Love, don't make me go back.
Hold me through the night until the dawn breaks,
then go quickly from me, Love, lest my heart breaks.
The words she read seemed to ignite
a passion, a zest for life, felt once long ago,
or was it a dream, am I dreaming now.
Why is this so inviting and warm?
It's mere words I see....
yet the passion they do stir inside of me...
I want to throw my head back in lustful bliss
and feel the warmth of a lovers kiss.
O a strong embrace, a look so pure
and inviting, I give myself completely in to this.
Give me the love that only you can,
make dreams come true with the touch of your hand,
caress me, fondle me, feel my desire,
hold me, thrill me, till my flesh is on fire,
love me so tender, then hard as you can,
fill me with passion, take me just as I am....
Let the hours fill with warmth and the hot sweet perfume
of lovers at play in a candle lit room.
This never-ending lust is too much to take,
but don't let it end, don't let me wake.
My reality is cold and empty and dark--
I hate it there, Love, don't make me go back.
Hold me through the night until the dawn breaks,
then go quickly from me, Love, lest my heart breaks.
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I've seen so many relationships develop over the past years on-line and they are every bit as real and valuable and indeed, intense as those from the good ole R/T (real time).
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hey your poem was really great and even though it's not how I feel right now I really liked it. - Dayana |
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the poem was so touching and reminds me of tha love i share on tha intrnet it really tuoched ma soft spot i could really adapt to it alot and thats exacly the way i feel about ma netlove - rahel |
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Beautiful. - Jimmy |
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I love the poem it was beauuutiful no forget beautiful it was fantastic keep up the good work - Shante |
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When I read this poem. It sent warm chills down my spine,reminding me of a very special friend that I've met here on the net. Hoping that one of these days, I too will find true romance and love. It really touch my heart. Love to read more. Thank you Harry. - Lojota |
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Wow. what intense emotions. I felt it to the core of my being. Where are men like this? - Annette |
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I must say that this poem reflects feelings and emotions that many can't even imagine to describe. Thank you for reminding of why I love my online sweetheart. - Lea |
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Hey HaRRy!..Far out man, You just blew the 10/10 metre..;) Hehea, good stuff.. I wish i could do things like that, Teach me one day!..:) + It reminds me of how many bewdiful girls are on the net..! - Chris |
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beautiful.....love it. - Charisma |
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LOVE IT! - Patricia |
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I just loved it. Rings very close to home.especially the ending. - Johanne |
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I loved it.. - Loralee |
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I just Loooooooooved this poem! its the greatest! I wish I could write like this! =oP - Patricia |
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hi i love poems and your just touched my heart it's so lovely... keep up the GREAT work... i am looking forward in reading another one of your poems:-) ~krissy~ - krissy |
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Beautiful!!!!! - Lo |
