Littleton by Rosebud
A shooting at school that happened last Tuesday
April the 20th, what can we say?
Two hit men with guns and explosives and all
So many were shot, so many did fall.
Fifteen now are dead, but thankfully no more
A tragedy that shocked the world to the core.
We wonder what caused this and what can we do
And why the people have this to go through.
An event that is on everyone's mind
But a reason for this we never will find.
The victims no one will ever forget
And prayers will be said for a long time yet.
April the 20th, what can we say?
Two hit men with guns and explosives and all
So many were shot, so many did fall.
Fifteen now are dead, but thankfully no more
A tragedy that shocked the world to the core.
We wonder what caused this and what can we do
And why the people have this to go through.
An event that is on everyone's mind
But a reason for this we never will find.
The victims no one will ever forget
And prayers will be said for a long time yet.
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This poem I wrote about the tragedy in Colorado. It is dedicated the students of Columbine High School, victims and survivors, and their families. May God be with them all.
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I liked the poem a lot. It was rhyming but not forced. It really is a great poem. - Adeara |
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I thought that this was an awsome peom and you keep on writing peoms like this one. - Diana |
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You touched the heart of many, including me. Keep writing poems about this kind of stuff. You should publish them. That is how good they are. - Katie |
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Hey i think that was a really good poem. I am from Veedersburg,Indiana Dave Sanders went to the same school as i do and we have named our basketball court after him. - Jarid |
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this poem really touched me because i had family in that shooting and they did not come out so i wish everybody that was safe and that are still a live have faith and be glad that you are a live still and hope this never happends again. - Dawn |
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that was a very good poem. i do not live anywhere near colorado and i cannot imagine what u must have felt writing that but i must say,it touched my heart. - evan |
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i think this poem was great. yet i dont no abou that "shockd the world to the core" line. i live in canada and i never heard about it. maybe shocked colorado?. even if i had heard about it. is ANOTHER shooting really a shock. by now we should eb getting used to them - jemika |
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I FEEL YOUR POEM AND WHAT IT IS SAYING I HEAR PEOPLE DIEING SO IM PRAYING YOUR POEM HAS REACHED MY HEART I FEEL SO SAD ITS BREAKIN ME APART ALL I CAN SAY THAT WAS A GOOD POEM THATS ALL I CAN SAY THATS THE LEAST THE PEOPLE HAT DIED REST IN PEASE - RAHIMAH |
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I love your poem. U did a really good job on it. Throught the whole thing i was cryin. - LIzz |
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That really touch my heart because it is so true i only lived a few blockes away i was the saddest day that everyone felt RIP for all the people who died my thought and prays are with you all - Jackie |
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I myself am a freshman, attending Columbine High School. Although the tragedy was almost four years ago, I am reminded of it everyday. But ALL of us are slowly getting over what has happened and we go on in life. I want to thank you for this beautiful poem and remembering those who were involved. Thanks. - Jenny |
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This poem was the best one - Roni |
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your poem was really good. I think you write really well. I know exactly how your feel about having a shooting at your school. Well done! - Shelly |
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I myself Live in Colorado, and this event was a very rough thing to go through, I no longer feel safe in my high schools, and schol is one place you are suposed to feel safe. This is a very good poem! - Sh0rTiE |
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This poem is very good : ) - Notre |
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YOUR POEM WAS REALLY GREAT, I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU AER GOING THROUGH ESPECIALLY IF IT HAPPENED AT YOUR SCHOOL. GREAT JOB!!! - BECKY |
