Dreams, Wishes, and Tears by Sir Shotgun
If dreams were given to a lonely man
and a lonely man's dreams came true,
I'd force myself to sleep all the time
just so I could dream of you
If wishes were given to a lonely man
and I was given just two,
I'd wish for you to always love me
and the other I'd give to you
If my tears could write a love song
I'd write a love song for you,
It would explain just how I feel inside
and how much I love you too
But, dreams are only dreams
and wishes seldom come true,
My tears can't write a love song,
but when they fall, they fall for you
and a lonely man's dreams came true,
I'd force myself to sleep all the time
just so I could dream of you
If wishes were given to a lonely man
and I was given just two,
I'd wish for you to always love me
and the other I'd give to you
If my tears could write a love song
I'd write a love song for you,
It would explain just how I feel inside
and how much I love you too
But, dreams are only dreams
and wishes seldom come true,
My tears can't write a love song,
but when they fall, they fall for you
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I wrote this poem for a girl I was in love with. I was in prison at the time and was missing her.
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HEY your poem is so cute and romantic i think it roX! - angela |
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i love it - malieka |
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this poem is relly relly nice and it touch me a lot. well i m also a lonley boi n i had one gal which i fallen in love with but we never been together. so when i read this poem there is full of tear in my eyes which is very true. - tenzin |
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I can tell this poem came from the heart. It almost made me cry. It's hard being without the one u love. hang in there she'll be waiting 4 u when u return. - baby |
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This poem reflects me feelings right now. As iam living this poets reflections - Marlene |
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To tell the truth. it is really a touching poem for me, as soon as I read this poem , i fell like ,pouring water to once heart as this being really a touching poem. And to author I really appriciate ur poem. - Namgay |
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OMG, I THINK I JUST FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU. I love this poem so much, I wish a man would write something so beautiful for me. ---goodluck to the woman who lands, or has landed your heart. - amanda |
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I love this poem it really hits home. Have you ever heard of Prisontalk Online? You need to share this with those folks if you havent it would be a wonderful booster. DanniLeigh - DanniLeigh |
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I really liked this poem, it was very sweet and from the heart. - jennifer |
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i like the wording - TaWanda |
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This poem really touched my heart. That girl is very lucky to have such a thoughtful man love her. This poem was short but sweet. Very touching. - briana |
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I thought that your poem was very good and very beautfull I loved it so much. ^_^ - Stephanie |
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This poem just caught me a little off guard one day, sometimes we dont take the time to appreciate the way that others, in situations differing from our own, may feel - Mark |
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this poem was good and i like it alot. - kristie |
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that was very nice - rasool |
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I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM. MY HUSBAN IS IN JAIL TO HE OFTEN SENDS ME LETTERS AND POEMS TOO I THINK THIS IS A VERY GOOD POEM - shatona |
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This is a beautiful and meaningful poem. - Peekaboo |
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Awww, I love it. It's beautiful. I'm gonna go cry now. - Michaela |
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that is the sweetest poem i ever heard from a guy. i can tell you deeply love "that special girl". i understand b\c i love a "that special person" that way too. i enjoyed your poem. - Justine |
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i love ur poem. it was so great. u know what when i gave to my gf this poem. than she said she love me, so thanks for ur nice poem. - Ruvom |
