Have You? by Hachem
Have You ever loved someone
But knew they didn't care?
Have You ever felt like crying
But Knew you'd get no where?
Have you ever looked into their eyes
And said a little prayer?
Have you ever looked into their hearts
And wished that you were there?
Have you ever felt their heartbeat,
When the lights were turned down low?
Have you ever whispered "God, I love You"
But you'll never let me show?
Love is grand, yet it hurts so much.
The price you pay is high.
If I could choose between Love and Death,
I'd rather choose to die.
So do not fall in love, my friend,
It doesn't pay a dime.
It only causes broken hearts,
Yet it happens all the time.
So do not fall in love, my friend,
You'll hurt before it's through.
I ought to know, my friend -
I fell in love with you.
But knew they didn't care?
Have You ever felt like crying
But Knew you'd get no where?
Have you ever looked into their eyes
And said a little prayer?
Have you ever looked into their hearts
And wished that you were there?
Have you ever felt their heartbeat,
When the lights were turned down low?
Have you ever whispered "God, I love You"
But you'll never let me show?
Love is grand, yet it hurts so much.
The price you pay is high.
If I could choose between Love and Death,
I'd rather choose to die.
So do not fall in love, my friend,
It doesn't pay a dime.
It only causes broken hearts,
Yet it happens all the time.
So do not fall in love, my friend,
You'll hurt before it's through.
I ought to know, my friend -
I fell in love with you.
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A Poem written to vent out or simply express to someone feelings, and not actually expect them to assume anything other.
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I feel that this poem is very true and that u are very talented - Laneisha |
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So true - Danny |
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Hey there Hachem Your poem was awesome--sorry you had to go through it. I'm sure there will be someone special out there for you. - Christine |
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I really enjoyed this poem because i can relate to it and its just nice, simple and hits you right in the chest. - Brown |
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Fantastic poem. even though they are the words of a teenager. I should know because I am the original author and I wrote this while in high school (1996). - Cherilyn |
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This poem touched me deeply, Im going through this right now and I've been trying to find a way to deal. It made me realize that im not the only one thats had this problem. I just wanted to say thank you. - Julie |
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lovely poem - simone |
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this poem reminds me of my exboyfriends when he fell in love with my best friends. - lisa |
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This is an awesome poem. Right now I am at a point in my life that this poem says it all. - Kathy |
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This poem rocks! - Tara |
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this is a fantastic poem, sums up eerything ive felt in te hpast few months, keep up the good work - mark |
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great poem it touched me in more ways than i can count and it left me speechless - e |
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I loved your poem. However, I found it sad that you felt you had to use another authors work. I have read the line about choosing between love and death, and several other lines in this poem as well, in an anthology I own. It is sad when a poet resorts to plagiarism. - Liz |
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I believe I've read an extremly similar poem years ago-some of the words are changed but this is awful close to a forgery! - jackie |
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You can't choose who you love, it just happens. Some say that love is the greatest power in life. If that is true, then love shattered and lost must truly destroy it. I should know.Do as I may, the love I held for one was not returned. - Andrew |
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This is a very good poem. - James |
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i think this poem is one of the best i have ever read. i love it. this is going to help me out with a problem me and my friend have - Durrell |
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All I can really say about this poem is WOW you really touched my heart with this one keep it up your an awsome writer!! - Darla |
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I think that is a wonderful poem. Many people has pass through situation like this one, so I. - Tatiana |
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This poem really touches my heart, and i'm sure almost everyone has that someone that it reminds them of - Kat |
