I Finally Love You by BadKismet
Things were so quiet-
What could I do but think?
Trapped in the screaming hush of white-washed halls...
My god, what could I do,
But think of us, ( If we ever were)
And I push away, force this hurt to silence
Pretend I'm OK..
It seems like we are at an impasse, you and I,
And you are pulling me back,
And I am fighting like hell,
Resisting at all cost, this game...
That neither of us can win
I Love You.
Please, please, please go away,
What can I do if I love you-
But let you go?
What could I do but think?
Trapped in the screaming hush of white-washed halls...
My god, what could I do,
But think of us, ( If we ever were)
And I push away, force this hurt to silence
Pretend I'm OK..
It seems like we are at an impasse, you and I,
And you are pulling me back,
And I am fighting like hell,
Resisting at all cost, this game...
That neither of us can win
I Love You.
Please, please, please go away,
What can I do if I love you-
But let you go?
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My Best Fried ( Yes, a guy ) and I had this big fight...I miss him, but mostly we are both too stubborn to reconcile. Meanwhile, we both hurt way too much for just friends
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its beautiful and true - ann |
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this poem is great. you have a lot of talent. you put your true feelings on paper. thats great poetry. - Kellee |
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Love this. Excellent! - nicole |
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WOW. to love and lost is a miraculous thing. But to never love. how horrible that would be. wonderful poem, written very well. - Jenny |
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i think this one is so cool. - Terry |
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Hmmmmmmmm. Interesting. But at least you realised that the guy really Luved you. I guess i fell for a gal who really hated my guts. - Murad |
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This poem was the best thing i have ever read i mean words cant discribe how much this poem relates to mean it is out of this world. i am like madly in love with my best friend jason and i cant stand the way i feel. this poems relates to that. you are really a mircale writter! - kat |
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I just let someone I love go... because I believed that the right thing to do. I grieve, but my doubts about my sanity have been alleviated by this poem. Truly... - foreheadplay |
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All I can say is I love it!!!!! - Laura |
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a very touching a nd detailed poem that really tells the story of the two who had fallen out. very deep and meaningful edges. - kirsty |
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I love your poem. It speaks to me. I went out this guy 7yrs ago for 6 months and he still lives in my heart. I have two serious relationships after thta but he has never faded away. I still communicate with him but I think we are both too proud to admit to ech other that the love still burns inside. I like him alot and he does too. He dumped me at the time we broke up. I just need him to prove to me that he is still as in love with me as he was before. My heart beats 100 times everytime I think about him. He was my first love. - Muthoni |
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I can relate to this situation... However if you really love this person why did you let them go?? - The |
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This poem says it all, the pain of loving your best friend hurts worse than if a lover leaves. - Kitty |
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Great poem! Exactly hits the point. But I still hope that it's possible to let someone go, while that one still stays part of one's life. - Johnny |
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I love this poem because it reminds me of what my best guy friend and I went through. - Karrie |
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i like you poem - Matt |
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Thank you for expressing what I've been experiencing. Keep writing, it's a blessing. - Esther |
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i think its great but the part were u say that u lover her and u have to let her go i dont get it. - Stanley |
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I love the poem I Finally Love You. I went through the same thing with my guy best friend. - Griselle |
