Jewel by Megan Everhart
I turn around and see you,
Standing stiff with pride.
Your face is turned from me,
But deep feelings you cannot hide.
I see your smile vanish,
As you turn to look at me.
In my heart I know,
The truth you'll never see.
You think I have betrayed you,
You think I have done wrong.
But I will not let you know what you had,
Until I am gone.
You are blind to me,
To what I am inside.
But one day you will learn,
To cast away your pride.
Maybe then I will forgive,
But I never will forget,
The tenderness you once showed me,
The sweet words you now regret.
One day I will return,
To see if you have learned,
The greatest Jewel you ever possessed,
Was the one that you so burned.
Standing stiff with pride.
Your face is turned from me,
But deep feelings you cannot hide.
I see your smile vanish,
As you turn to look at me.
In my heart I know,
The truth you'll never see.
You think I have betrayed you,
You think I have done wrong.
But I will not let you know what you had,
Until I am gone.
You are blind to me,
To what I am inside.
But one day you will learn,
To cast away your pride.
Maybe then I will forgive,
But I never will forget,
The tenderness you once showed me,
The sweet words you now regret.
One day I will return,
To see if you have learned,
The greatest Jewel you ever possessed,
Was the one that you so burned.
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Rating: A |
This poem I wrote for a guy that I liked. Some guy told him that I had a boyfriend. When I told him that I didn't he didn't believe me. He believed his friends over me. Later when he found out his friend was lying he came back to say sorry. It hurt but I sent him away. I went home the night he came to say sorry and I wrote this. I think I loved him. But it will be a long time until I can forgive him. That was the biggest mistake he ever made, I hope realizes it now.
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wow! i loved it! i went through that once and when i let him know exactly what i felt, and how i was sorry. well. we're back together now and he says loves me. i know he does! and we will be together forever!. just hang in there! if he loves you. u will be together again! love chrissy - chrissy |
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hey dear wow that was a great poem iam in the same switch u ashion right now iam srry it happend to u it hurts really bad but that was great i love to write poemas to!1 keep up the good work bye luv cindy - cindy |
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This is exactly how I feel right now. I'm gonna read it to my bf and see what they say. THANK YOU! ITS BEAUTIFUL! - Anney |
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This poem is so cute! lol I love it. - Megan |
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i like! - adrienne |
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This poem is sexy - Erik |
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that poem is hot. it expresses true feelings and not carin about wat he/she says. one of the ebst ive read in quite a while - zaiah |
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This is a really great poem! I can totally relate to it! - Miku |
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hey i just wanted to say that this poem.. is great.. and.. that it is the exact way that i feel..right now.... - shawn |
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OMG! I know exactly how you feel! This poem really touched me! It is more than beautiful! - KatieW |
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I really liked that poem because it reminded me of what I recently went through. - Erica |
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That was the best poem out of all the poems I read so far. Super:) - Mia |
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ur poem made me cry..it's how i feel for this guy i am in love with..who i feel will never give me his heart in return...why do i have to learn the hard way..it hurts to hurt..so bad - confused |
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I just want to say that this is a great poem!!!It is really touching and it made me want to cry:( Good job! - Krystal |
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I think this poem is really good and when i read it i know exactly what they are talking about!!! - Diana |
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sounds just like me and my one boyfriend - tiffany |
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I belive that the pome is great, because I can understand what you are saying,and the way you put it is the great thing about it. - Joey |
