Heartstrings Are Played Upon by Hope
It's becoming more evident
Much more obvious to me
I thought much more of you
Than you ever thought of me
Was this my biggest mistake
Letting myself think you cared
Was I just your marionette
With heartstrings open and bared
With me left here still thinking
What was false, what was true
So puzzling and so complex
Im left to await another clue
On my heartstings you played
Each left with a loving memory
Yet I still have those questions
Do you ever think about me
Im wondering why all the intrigue
Now why all of this mystery
Why am I left here hanging
Your the one that holds the key.
Much more obvious to me
I thought much more of you
Than you ever thought of me
Was this my biggest mistake
Letting myself think you cared
Was I just your marionette
With heartstrings open and bared
With me left here still thinking
What was false, what was true
So puzzling and so complex
Im left to await another clue
On my heartstings you played
Each left with a loving memory
Yet I still have those questions
Do you ever think about me
Im wondering why all the intrigue
Now why all of this mystery
Why am I left here hanging
Your the one that holds the key.
How love can hurt and leave you asking questions, especially when one seemingly loves more than the other.
| wOw! dAt's a riLy greAt pOem! i alsO writE pOems,, bUt i wAs nEvEr AblE tO writE OnE As gOod As Urs,, nwEi,, i Am cUrrEntLy creAting a blOg On my accOunt,, cAn i pOst Ur cOmpOsitiOn As my fAvOritE pOem?!?! - hannah | |
| This poem really touched me my gf just broke up with me and I loved her sooo much but i found out that she did it because she liked another guy. - Sketch | |
| This is just amazing. It's how I've been feeling for the past few weeks. It seems as if I was just a toy for him. He played with me and then let me fall. Now I lay broken and he no longer wants me - BrokenHeart | |
| this was they poem that explained how i feel about a lost love. I always think if he remembers me or thinks of me this was a great poem and heled me. - Jennifer | |
| I LOVE this poem, I really do - Vicki | |
| It strucked me hard in the stomach. This poem is good. It drives the message home. It gave me goosebumps. Simply cool. - Joyce | |
| I REALLY LIKED THIS 1 A FREIND OF MINE NO AND EX WE WERE TALKIN TO EACH OTHER LIKE WE HAD WHEN WE WERE TOGETHER AND COME TO FIND OUT SHE NEVER REALLY CARED SHE WAS SAYIN THE SAME THING AS SHE WAS TO ME TO MY BEST FREIND BUT I LIKED IT AND IT REMINDED ME OF MY SITUATION - CHRIS | |
| Reading this was like seeing my innermost thoughts & feelings. - susan | |
| Every single word in this poem decribes exactly what i am feeling in my life. its such a great one. - SHANICE | |
| I thought this poem was great. I just got out of a relationship in a bad way and i have all of those same questions and no one to answer me. So I felt like this poem really described what i was going through. - liz | |
| hey i liked this its really good u should write more - sydney | |
| I just broke up with my bf about a month ago, and these were the same exact words i was saying to myself. Thank you for writing them down for me. P. S. ---Keep uo the good work! - Toya | |
| wow thate effected me so much you dont even understand!id love to hear more of your work! :'( - Natalie | |
| this poem touched me, it reminded me of the best friend i ever had and lost, i love him with all my heart. your poem rocks - amie | |
| Fantastic! apt poem which has helped me rialise it happens to the best of us! - Shirley | |
| this poem has done something amazing for me. made me realize that i am not the only person in the world to ever feel like this. it almost made me cry. thanks hope,that was beautiful! - Maeve | |
| I thought the poem was wonderful. I am feeling just that way this very minute. and all I can ask is WHY. Yes I am crying but your poem kinda helped me see that I am not the only one that aske the same question. Why what did I do ? I guess I will never get the answer, but after reading your poem I realized that I did not do anything he did. - Maria | |
| i really love this poem it reminds me of the problems i'm going through now - lauren | |
| wow! this is even better than "you are like the diamond!" i really loved your poem! very very very very very very very cooooooollll! - claire | |
| i thought this was wonderful! tis how i feel today. - MARION | |
| I love this poem, it touched me so deeply, its exaclty what im going through right now and it sux! i thought nuthing could explain how i feel, well i was proven wrong, teen love sux! - DES | |
| love it. its great this poem migth reming alot of people of hwat they are going tru about how painful it is to have douts to think about if he ever cared. i when tru this and still wonder about him and think of him asnd as u sayd only he holds the key - jesse | |
| I am just like a marionette I was used by a woman so another guy would get jealous and I was left behind like a piece of trash. I am 21 and still can't get a girlfriend - Peter | |
| I can realate to this poem so much because that is exacely what i thought and wondered when mai b/f dumped me and it hurt - Jessi | |
| that poem is so true. It brings to my mind so many things. Ive felt like this at one time and this poem puts all of my feelings into words. - Ulani | |
| This poem has touched me like no other. I loved it and could relate to it because I'm been going thru this for sometime now and no matter what happens and how time is passing by this feeing does not go away. - Lila | |
| It felt good to read a poem that expressed exactly how I was feeling, you are talented and it made me feel a little better. - Robin | |
| wow. poignant. - Jon | |
| Loved it, I am going through this now! - Linda | |
| this really hit the nail on the head! thank you - Sharhonda | |
| This poem touched me. I was deeply touched. It is important to return the Love in a relationship. You need to cherish and respect the person even if there is fear in you. Show the person how much they mean to you. Respect is very important and honesty in a relationship. You write very well. YOu touched my heart - Myrtle | |
| That was an excellent poem! I loved it, it reached the situation I'm in right now! Keep up the great work! - Natalie | |
| I very much liked your poem. It makes me wonder how and why people can be so cruel. Thank you for sharing your feelings. - LoneStar | |
| I like this guy whom I knew for the past 2 years. But deep inside my heart, I've always known that this attraction only goes one way. From me to him. - Evangeline | |
| this one really did touch my heartstring's!! thankyou - melissa | |
| this poem explains exactally ow i feel about a person that means soo much to me..and i mean NOTHING to him - Jesica | |
| this poem hits home because it just happened to me - ron |
